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Reviews for De Min-imus

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - SabreBabe on March 23, 2004
    Oooh, you've done it now. You've gone and made me want to review. I'll have you know I haven't reviewed anybin nin nearly a year (too much flamage headed my way for Con Crit. Sadly, looking back on it, they were all teenybopper fangirls.)

    I'm a sucker for archaeology, ancient dieties, and talking phalluses. You've rolled all three into one and I am really, really looking forward to this rollercoaster. Nothing like a talking penis with a sense of humour. Especially since it's attached to someone in dire need of a humour transt. t. They may end up actually thanking those rotten Wey tey twins in the end.

    Actually, I was able to follow the switch in "tenses" from the first chapter to the second, and I had been on my toes waiting to see how Min was going to manifest himself. Absofuckinglutely perfect. Thankfully, only Severus can hear him (so far). Is going to be absolutely hysterical if others around him start to hear Min as well. "Oh, don't mind him, that's just my cock talking." NO, I don't think Severus would ever admit to it.

    This story is going to be saved to Hard drive and printed and bound into book form when it's finished. I will force my husband to read it (he'll only read finished fics anyways). I will sculpt a nice Ithyphallic Min for myself and set Him in the bookcase on my headboard. Actually, I could probably get started on that sculpture now... Just need more clay...

    Everybody! Come read this story! It is worthy!
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  • From ANON - excessivelyperky on March 19, 2004
    Oh, I'm so glad you're continuing this! I read the first bit eons ago (and agreed totally about the Weasley twins), and thought it was just a one-shot.

    More!
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  • From ANON - bansidh on March 16, 2004
    Thought that this was a rather odd one-shot when you posted the fichapchapter. I was thrilled to see a second chapter this morning! The whole God formation thing reminded me of Neil Gaiman's American Gods. Fabulous stuff, really. I particularly enjoyed Severus' little checklist of clothes, breath, underpants, wand--ah, and that he was prepared for vengeful ex-students but not amorous ones. Yay! That's my favorite kind of Severus...Thanks very much for writing. I'll be watching for updates.
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  • From ANON - ara on March 16, 2004
    Ooh, definitely update soon! I am dying to see what happens next to Snape. Fred and George are dead men, if not by Snape then by Hermione. Great story. ^_^
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  • From ANON - TeaRoses on March 16, 2004
    This is interesting so far, I'd like to moremore. Poor Severus, with his low self-esteem.
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfaerie on March 16, 2004
    oh, i like this.

    EVIL Weasley twins. they must be punished.

    looking forward to more.

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - mele on March 15, 2004
    ah! and so the fun begins! i read the first chapter after seeing it on someone's "favorites" list. but after awhile, no updates - i gave up waiting. but chapter 2 sounds very promising and i hope you keep up on it! btw -loved your other stories and always check your author's site to see if you've published anything new. aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - hephastus on March 15, 2004
    Really nice, poignant story. Loved it. Thanks very much.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on March 15, 2004
    Shiv, this is great! I've been waiting ever so patiently for an update. :) You already have me laughing right out loud. I can't wait to read more. (look, you have me squeeeeing)
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  • From ANON - Angie on March 15, 2004
    I had such a good time reading the chapters you have written, that my neighbors must be wonderingt tht the hell is going on ( I live alone). Please update soon so I can have my fix.
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  • From ANON - theCAT on January 21, 2004
    Totally cool. What a twist!

    Thanks

    CAT
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 24, 2003
    Hi, I quite liked this! I'm interested to see where you're going, and the second person makes it interesting, too. I'll admit I'm a little confused as to who "you" is, but I can ignore that. My nitpicky self feels the need to point out a flaw, however... you've changed tense somewhere in the middle, from present to past. It worked in either tense, but not both! :) Anyhow,houghought I'd point it out, because it looks like you care about your writing and all. Righty, I'm off to read the rest of your fics! ;)
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  • From ANON - Arwen Rayne on November 20, 2003
    I really enjoy your Sev/Hermy fics and this one is really intrigueing. You need to point me in the right direction though of your Ancient Egyptian spirit. He is interesting and I want to know more. Are you going to do another chapter on this one?
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2003
    i have no idea what the hell is going on in that fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Redone on October 26, 2003
    It was a bit confusing, I didn't quite get who or what the "you" was. Also, on several occasions you jumped to "I" and "us", instead ofou"ou". But the camel bit was funny. :)
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