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Reviews for Arithmantic Dating Agency

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 05, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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  • From OnlyInThisLight on August 07, 2005
    i like it. now if you will excuse me, i must go eat some bread thingies
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  • From ANON - Molly on July 29, 2004
    You're a Radio 4 listener! Don't you just love Just a Minute? Reading all of your fics at the mo, but just had to comment on that particular piece of English-ness (ooh, and i liked the chip butty bit in one of your others as well...)

    Thanks for the great reading!

    M
    x
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 10, 2004
    That was super! I think it was improved by the added bits; however it was still very nice before :)
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  • From ANON - ShagsTheDustmop on March 26, 2004
    I definitely like the new version better, it flows easier and the delayed sex improves the story as well. Nicely done!
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  • From ANON - Delana on March 25, 2004
    This was absolutely fantastic! I didn't read the version before it was edited, but I can say that this version couldn't be any better than it is now. You put dialogue where it needed to be and descriptions where they needed to be. For my tastes, there was nothing redundant or overdescribed. The dialogue was brilliant!! That's the only wording I came ume up with to accurately describe how I felt while reading it. Please keep writing as I can't wait to see what you come up with next. I have a couple plot bunnies hopping around in my head and only wish I had your talent so I could put them into a story worth reading. I guess I'll just have to keep reading everyone else's excellent work. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Cat on March 23, 2004
    is it just me or did this story have like 20 chapters before...i am really confused...if you want to be a nice auther email me and tell if i am just stupid or if there was 20 chatpers...
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  • From ANON - gthistle on March 23, 2004
    I reread in a pleasant blur, which is a good thing because it means nothing stuck out obtusely. The library bit doesn't seem gratuitous to me (where else, if Minerva and Argus are to have sex before the wedding bouquet, could Severus come across their noise?), and I liked the sofa / armchair maneuvering in Ch. 5. Perhaps the best rounding-out change is the partisanship of Slytherin and Gryffindor students, which is sweet without being twee. :)
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  • From ANON - Droxy on March 22, 2004
    Well, India has banned all US Yahoo groups so I cant get on WIKTT or any other HP group now, but I have no trouble tracking updates to your stories.

    Suprised to see such a big enhancement to a story, but I have downloaded and look forward to re-reading it. I already caught glimpse of an enhancement that was quite funny (Snapes reaction to Minerva-Filch, which is a novel pairing and a red rose to you for doing it)

    Looking forward to you attentions on A Snape is for life...it's one of my faves.




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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on March 21, 2004
    Shiv, it was a fun story! I loved it.
    No, the library scene wasn't too gratuitious. Some moans and a pleading of Faster, Faster is nothing graphic. Thanks for leaving it up to our vivid imaginations.

    It would be cto hto have a few chapters for Ginny. So does that mean Gin's a puzzle piece too? How about a big hunk of "Wood" for her? Or did you kill him off in the final battle? Just an idea.

    Cheers Shiv!!!

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  • From ANON - mele on March 21, 2004
    i liked the changes! i went back and read from chapter 5 til the epilogue and thought it made more sense about minerva and filch and the tiles and jigsaw pieces. now i wish you would continue more on "biter bit"! aloha, mele
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  • From ANON - Susan on March 18, 2004
    Fantastic story. As always. Can't even bug you for updates as this one is done. I loved the drunk Hermione hexing the Aurors/strippers! I have seen bachelorettes that thought damned near anything with a penis was a stripper by the end of the night! Well done. Their wedding vows were sweet. Wish some of the weddings I have been to did those vows. Again, Thank you for a great story. :-)
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  • From ANON - Misha Day on March 17, 2004
    Lovely story - I love your tart-yet-secretly-soppy Severus and your genius-who-laughs-at-the-obey-clause Hermione. The bit about the puzzle pieces was my favorite.
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  • From ANON - Droxy on March 17, 2004
    great chapter-

    laughed "Do you want me to hex them for you?"


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  • From ANON - gthistle on March 17, 2004
    For something that your lj implied you'd grown a bit tired of, the epilogue comes off very well. I'm prejudiced, of course, because I tend to dislike weddings for being soppy, and this manages to be wedding without soppiness.... The vows are especially apt, and the bouquet scene neatly ties off the "other" romantic arc.
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