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By : sugarbear1269
  • From on October 11, 2003
    Completed perusal of your first five chapters. I do hope that chapter five
    has more to it. Am I mistaken? It seems as if its missing the 'Red Satin'
    connection, as the title of the chapter.

    Overall -- Yes, I hope someone can help you with the technical problems
    when uploading your submissions. My only help in that area would be
    to Add Chapter with 'Text Area' rather than 'File Upload.' The disarray
    makes for a difficult read.

    As for the storyline and characterizations, damn if this isn't an interesting
    play of seduction for those of the D/G shipper. Draco is cruel and malicious,
    which is expected ... love it, don't change a thing. Ginny is believable and
    her silent denials add more charisma to the saga.

    Request? Please finish chapter five, if it is incomplete ... and add a chapter
    six, a chapter seven, infinity ... Mmk, thanks.

    .:| + | Avrenim | + |:.

    PS It is highly doubtful that Ginny would be in a class with Malfoy, as they are
    in separate years ... but as you have all ready placed the story that way it is
    not necessary to change it. Its not really that big of a deal. I can live with
    it, hope others can as well.
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