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Reviews for Alternate Sleeping Arrangements

By : Ruskbyte
  • From ANON - Deric on July 31, 2006
    Hey! What happened to the note that starts out ~Dear Hermione~? Edit, edit, edit, preread! Please?
    Quite a few of these muck-ups all over the three chapters I can access (the authors' notes say there's five you've written).

    deric
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  • From ANON - TxA_GunFighter on January 11, 2006
    Very good action. Love it when Harry has good times and fun.

    gunny
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  • From Mishra on September 01, 2005
    Nice story, but I really don't understand where Ginny and Harry get their mental link and their extra powers.
    The order is an organisation and not a pool of power.
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  • From ANON - redjacobson on July 07, 2005
    Hi; very interesting beginning; but, was there a problem with the formatting? because the story seemed really choppy; was there more of the note written by Ron? If there was; it wasn't on screen.

    thanks

    red
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  • From ANON - Inferno on March 05, 2005
    i like the story but in the first chapter all of the sex is missing could the writer please correct it
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2005
    i think you have a big gap in your story, fixit please
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2004
    please post the other chapters that were origionally on fanfiction.net!!!
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  • From ANON - americanwerewolf on July 01, 2004
    by far the best story i have ever read
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  • From ANON - american werewolf on July 01, 2004
    i may be new to this whole fan fiction thing, i have been sucked in while my girl friend is out of town (she is a fanfic addict), but that is by far the best i have read so far. your writing is fantastic i cant believe i was so engrossed in something i formerly thought was just for horny people that couldnt wait for book six to come out.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 01, 2004
    ok i just started reading this but is it peanut butter and ice cream or peanut butter ice cream, just curious, im a little ocd
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  • From ANON - Nick on May 23, 2004
    very very good this story is gggrrreeeaaatttt!!!! but yea, please write another like it
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  • From ANON - Werrf on February 17, 2004
    No matter how many times I read this, or how many times I try others, this remains probably the single most erotic HP story I have ever read. There's so much variety and choice in here that I can never get bored of it. The quality of the writing is also quite superb...in fact, everything about it is su.

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    One thing that bothers me a little, though, is the 'Fin' at the end - I certainly recall there being more of this (Blaise?) when I first read it on the old site. Have you decided not to post the rest? Or is it just a temporary situation and I'm worrying over nothing?
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  • From ANON - lordanhur on January 20, 2004
    great put the rest on
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  • From ANON - Lores on January 06, 2004
    I was so pleased to see this here! Your stories have been some of the best work I've seen snd I agee that this should be a stand alone story. I like where it has gone but Well just was hea headed there, great A/U pieCe!
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 06, 2004
    tis ais an amazingly hot story, but i'm slightly confused about something. unless i'm totally clueless or just missed it completely, where's ron? it's mentioned that he is hermione's boyfriend yet she seems to be spending a great amount of time with ginny and harry. why wouldn't she seek out her boyfriend for some comfort? and she does realize she is cheating on him? i'm surprised harry doesn't seem to mind that fact either since he and ron are best friends. anyway, it's still one hell of a steamy story. i like it. keep it up.
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