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Reviews for The First Enochian Key

By : shemhamforash
  • From ANON - Persia on February 28, 2004
    Alright, I just have to mention it after you stated a quote from Trent Reznor at the top of the chapter.... Does anybody else think Trent would be perfect for a slightly younger Snape! (Come on you know he would! Alan Rickman so looks like an older Trent Reznor in the movies! Of course he'd still need Alan's delicious voice; nobody has a better Snapish voice than Alan). Anyways, great fic, I'm going to continue reading now...
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  • From ANON - Jo on January 10, 2004
    I'm sorry, but this review is just going to be a shower of praise. I read your fic in more or less 1 go (wasn't planning to, mind, but the 1st chapter was so gripping) and i loved it. So dark and moving, it really touched me and i had tears running down my cheaks whilst enthralled in the epilogue. You are gifted!
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on October 31, 2003
    O.K., My review as promised

    That was the saddest and scariest look into the human mind I have ever witnessed.Brilliant. Between that, and Rilla's 'Not a happy tale' I can't stand for Sev to go through any more pain!
    I need to go and read something fluffy and then I'll be back to read 'The Hepatic Hex'!!
    Love ya, even though you are clearly the daughter of darkness
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From lilyadar on October 31, 2003
    I read the 1st and second chapter and was simply in awe with your way of words! Excellent!!

    lily
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  • From ANON - Stephanista on October 29, 2003
    i wish i could review it
    but i am suddenly left speechless and numb
    entirely void of everything but emotion
    running rampant through my psyche
    it will take immense time for me to come to terms with this
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  • From ANON - Deborah on October 26, 2003
    An amazing story. As frustrating as the ending was, I think any clearer ending would have been ... wrong. You did well.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 26, 2003
    Perfect ending. Really. Of course, I chose the happy route in my head, but it is perfect. It would not have made sense if he had no severe issues at the end. I'm so sad it's over. :(
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 26, 2003
    I think I can understand but I am....in my igorance no doubt, not sure how the title to your tale fits. Ah.....lack of knowledge rears it's ugly head. Excellent tale.....a bit dark but excellent nonetheless.
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  • From ANON - Daya on October 26, 2003
    Gah.

    I had a long, detailed review typed for your final chapter, mainly saying how wonderful your portrayal of Severus was, how realistic he is, and how elegantly you write, and then the blasted thing wouldn't post.

    Oh this epilogue was more than I could have hoped for. Tortured, descriptive, and agonising to read. The ambiguity at the end is perfect, although many of us would have wanted a happy ending, I had this feeling that it wouldn't be coming.

    Its truly a sad thing that you won't be writing any more, do not let uni get you down! I look forward until the moment I see some more of your work up.

    With love and respect.


    Daya.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 26, 2003
    Wait a minute! What's going on? I don't understand is Lucius in his mind or in ghost form or really alive? I'm a little thick I think. I don't understand, but this will end in peace for poor Severus won't it? I have a hard time w/ unhappy endings! Please post the rest soon, so I know what's going on!


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  • From ANON - Ana Ng on October 25, 2003
    Hi-I'm terrible and I never review, but I am really liking this story. Please give Sevvie a happy ending!

    I am beginning to notice a pattern in SS/HG author/reader/obsessers, though, has anyone else? Areall all young, fairly intelligent, slightly goth leaning mothers of one or more children under the age of five? (Whilst on the subject of singing/dancing babies, my daughter was insane over 7 nation army by the White Stripes when she was like 8 months old and she would go insane whenever it came on, and sing the tune (dum, dum, dumdumdum,dum, dum)and dance.)

    Anyway, in the future I'll review more! Did I just make sense, just now? I hope so. Thanks for writing for us!
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on October 25, 2003
    Oooooh - nice final section. Poor Severus, but I'm glad someone is comforting him - dare I hope that it's our inimitable know-it-all??? Wheeeee! Pleez fluffy happy ending... pleez fluffy happy ending... pleez fluffy happy ending.... WendyNat
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 25, 2003
    Okay...that made me cry. This is just the most beautiful thing ever.

    Here is my guilty little secret - when I opened the window for this update, I was on the phone with my mama. I thought, okay, I'll just get it ready and read it when I hang up. Oh, no. I have no idea what I may have just agreed to on the phone because I got so sucked in to the story. I am a terrible daughter.

    I feel your boredom. Believe me, I do. Yay for your five year-old!! Little divas are great! My almost four year-old runs around the house reciting Edward Gorey books. I'm glad we're homeschooling because my secret fear is her going to kindergarten someday and when they ask for the alph say saying, "A is for Amy who fell down the stairs..."

    Okay, that was just a mindless ramble. But I will miss this story. Truly. ::sniffle::
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  • From ANON - PotionsMistressM on October 25, 2003
    I really really enjoy your story! Please update soon- I am quite sure I am addicted! Thank you!
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 24, 2003
    I loved Riff-Raff but i thought Columbia's quota appripo. (Can't spell worth shit! Where's the spell check when you need it? Check please...table one!) Where did *that* quote come from. Hmm? hehe 17 year old angst. Huh? I am 36 anill ill have angst I am trying to work though so don't feel alone. Youare not a loser! I have never called you that and never will. You have a wonderful and active imagination. I have a very active imagination as well. Mom always said too active. I was raised in a very strict home and shortly after I left home I began to rebel against most everything I was taught. Results of being raised conservative Christian. Nothing wrong with the religeon. Not my bag though and the problem was with the strict conservatism....just wanted to clarify before someone through fits. You have my e-mail addy.....write to me sometime and we'll talk. You can also reach me on Y! or MSN messenger. E-mail me and I'll tell you how.

    Great chapter BTW....I know how Sev in your story feels for the most part and I enjoy the way you write. Please continue my friend.
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