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Reviews for The First Enochian Key

By : shemhamforash
  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 24, 2003
    OH! Please tell me that Hermione will be coming of age soon and showing this poor man the honest pure love he so desperately needs! I don't know how much more pain I can watcis tis tortured soul go through!!!! *sniffle* He just needs one person!!! It's so sad!!!! *sob* What are you trying to do to me?! *sniff*
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  • From Daya on October 24, 2003
    Mistress of the Dark, you are an equal! Am considering promoting you after this chapter, am most enjoying this chapter!! Damn the double exclamation marks, sign of an unstable personality. Must stop using them

    May I just make one request? An update soon please? Am being tortured by imbeciles at my place of education, including argument with Short Story lecturer who is refusing me permission to use death as an eiphanic moment in my work. Sod.

    More please, for my fragile sanity!

    Daya
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 24, 2003
    I am finding myself compelled ull ull Severus from your story and comfort him. Angst-galore! Beautiful.
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  • From ANON - tigress on October 24, 2003
    First,loving the story
    Second, doesn't sound like your 21 was fun at all. Someday I will fly across the big blue sea and we will celebrate it properly, your imaginary friends can come too. But only if they promise not to laugh.
    Third, loving the story.
    much love always,
    tigress
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  • From ANON - Fish on October 23, 2003
    I might have a spare wok and wooden spoon in here... you can make great music with those... and saucepans!

    This chapter was really great! I love it!
    Sorry it's a bit brief, but i need to finish my coffee and then rush out to the shops!

    Ciao
    Fish
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 23, 2003
    OH GOD!!!! That was beautiful and sad and poetic and heartbreaking!!! I loved it of coarse! *sob* *sniff* I just feel for that poor tortured soul! All his life experiences made him what he was and even though thts hts he's commited were just heinous I can't help feeling so sorry for him! What terrific writing! I am just amazed that you have been able to make me believe this was his life. My mind pictures everything so clear as you go along. Excellant work! I do hope you are able to keep going w/ this! I am eager to read more! I say if the muse doesn't cough up the story then she deserves a little smack around... *waving at men in white coats* Give them hugs for me it's been a while.... ;c)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 23, 2003
    Still reading.... Your writing is vivid and I am wondering still where you intend to go with this. I will be keeping up. To quote Columbia "....Stay sane inside insanity..."
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 23, 2003
    I don't know what you're talking about, that chapter was brilliant!! Such a fantastic take on the night the Potter's died. And poor Severus. I don't even have anything sarcastic ty. :y. :)
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on October 23, 2003
    Wow - this was a powerful chapter. I felt so much for Severus... I could scarcely breathe in some parts. Keep up the awesome (yes, I'm a child of the 80s) work!!!!

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  • From ANON - Daya on October 23, 2003
    Wonderful chapter again, very dark, yet perversly also very enlightening, its interesting to place Snape at Lily's death (excuse me if I'm pickihis his up wrong, its very early in the morning) ,I like the way you deal with the contrasting aspects of his psyche, as for his breaking down, beautifully caught, and heartbreaking, every word was a painful delight to read.

    You are still my Dark Mistress.

    Daya
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 22, 2003
    Weel, I doubt that my men in white coats are thrilled with me either but....who cares? hehe You certainly have a way with words! hehe I keep telling the people at the funny farm that i don't suffer from insanity. I keep telling that I enjoy every single minute of it but I don't think it is reassuing them any. Go figure! LOL Please continue to write and I will continue to read. :)
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 22, 2003
    Wow! Poor Severus! His life is like one big nightmare! You really make it easy for me to understand why he acts the way he does and feels the things he feels. You are a gifted writer that you can do that! I don't bother w/ warnings when reading most stories on Adultfanfiction.net because I know it's graphic. I saw nothing wrong w/ your last 2 chapters. They were quite detailed and horrific to say the least, but the way you write like an artist paints. I think of this story like a dark peice of art work. Well, writen! I assure you that I will be looking forward to all your upcoming chapters!
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  • From Daya on October 22, 2003
    My dear, you have excd yod yourself.

    Although am not overly fond of graphic violence but yours was done so eloquently it was perhaps not to my taste, but palpable. This is indeed a very dark Severus you have created, and I find myself drawn to him. You have a talent, I am glad you choose to use it well.

    I am completely sane I can assure you, I am always in control of my mad moments! I am surprised you believe that I have encouraged you to become a language snob, t'was not me, it is an innate skill, you cannot be taught it, it just needs to be awoken.

    Am enjoying this immensely. Much to my delight I have no idea what direction this is going to go in, or even if OUR (phew...glad I recovered from that one) Severus can ever be redeemed.

    With anticipation,

    Your humble Servant.

    Daya.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 22, 2003
    All I have to say is that I am SOOO glad I read this in the morning and not before bed. Yipes. Beautifully written, but yipes. (And to think I'm actually throwing you a bone today with In the House of Fallen Angels, you sadistic woman!)
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  • From ANON - tigress on October 22, 2003
    Very Dark, but still amazing. I am intrigued to see where you are going with this....that was one hell of a cliff hanger. Very nicely done.
    Truthfully, I don't know what the fuck is up with my story. I have just gotten back to town. My 21st birthday was Friday and I left to go party. I should have a new chappy up within the next 2 days...I'll try to make it sooner and I'll TRY to make it good. So, sorry for the wait. Once again dearest Shem, your stories amaze me!!
    much love,
    tigress
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