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Reviews for The First Enochian Key

By : shemhamforash
  • From zillyflutegirl on October 22, 2003
    Shem, my darling, darling Shem
    It is, as all ways, wonderful. Wow, your muse has really out done her(himf thf this time. I am REALLY enjoying the story. Your writing is beautiful and powerful. The feelings that you express and the scenes you discribe are just magnifacent. This really is a work of art. Breathlessly awaiting the next chapter. I remain, as always, yours...
    with much love,
    tigress

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  • From ANON - Talene on October 21, 2003
    Never would I make such a presumption my friend. Very unwise of anyone. hehe I am still interested and still reading. Nice.
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  • From ANON - WendyNat on October 21, 2003
    Ooooh - d'ya mean it? You may have another chapter up tonight??? Woohoo! No pressure, either way, but it'll make me happy happy happy ;).

    I loved the Hepatic Hex, and this story is very intriguing so far. Keep up the great work, I drool over your skill... jealousy is a curse...sigh.

    WendyNat
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 21, 2003
    Well....hmmm.....I'm intruiged to see where you go with this. I am waiting to see how the prologue connects to the rest. I hate making assumptions so i wait to see. Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 21, 2003
    Another wonderful addition to a dark and yet intriguing story! So much angst androw!row! I am very much enjoying this as you go along and can't wait for the next chapter, so get cracking! *evil grin*
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 21, 2003
    So sad. again. sad, sad, sad. Beautiful, but sad.
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  • From ANON - fervesco on October 21, 2003
    Very, very well done once again! Better watch it - I'll be standing right over your shoulder waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Daya on October 21, 2003
    Excellent! *makes secret plans for wok and wooden spoon that shall at the least be diverting, at best, entertaining*. My mother was very cruel to me, you know, she used to chase me up the stairs with a wooden spoon. I therefore blame this childhood trauma for the palpitations I get whenever I walk into the kitchen and attempt to cook.

    Wonderful chapter, delightful juxtaposition ben ten the power Severus has, and the helplessness he is feeling, damn Lily and the the Gryffindor 4, damn them to hell and back for tormenting my Severus...

    Sorry, of course, I meant, OUR Severus. *ahem*.

    May I congratulate you on an exquistite WIP, that has lured me in like a moth to the flame and is now keeping me there, occasionally burning my fragile wings...sod the poetic nonsense, please, update soon!

    Daya.
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  • From ANON - nesscafe on October 20, 2003
    Excellant story so far. So dark and yet it draws you in. You want to know what is going to happen and how everyone is going to overcome their horrible trials! Write more!!!
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  • From Daya on October 20, 2003
    *wonders if she could borrow wok and spoon from Fish, for *ahem* personal reasons....*
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  • From Daya on October 20, 2003
    My dear,

    Beautifully and intelligently written, and I note the presence of many words with more than three syllables much to my delight. The subject matter is delicately treated, allowing the horror to shine through, but not so much as to alienate the reader, the characters are well within canon, as much as they can be considering the story line, and the descriptive quality of your work is a delight to read, amazingly poetic prose.

    I bow down to your talent oh mistress. I humbly ask that you continue with this intelligent work, and hope it inspires others to write as well.

    With anticipation of an update...*not that I am impatient in the least*

    Daya
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  • From ANON - Fish on October 20, 2003
    awwww... poor Sevvie-kins...
    *attempts to defend Sev from Snape Snr*
    *Snape Snr glares at her*
    *runs away screaming and flailing arms wildly*
    *hides undesk esk hugging balloon*
    *balloon bursts*
    *hits self in face with wok*
    *gets evil idea*
    *chases Snape Snr with oversized wok and wooden spoon*

    YAY!

    I loved the portrayal of Sev's younger life... really scary though... poor Sevvie!

    MORE SOON PLEASE!

    Ciao,
    Fish
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  • From Yawn on October 20, 2003
    Harsh and very well written chapter about Snapes homelife. All though the HP books don't touch on much into his family life, you can kind of figure out why he went to the dark side and why he's such an ass now. And I love it. Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 20, 2003
    You did a beautiful job covering the family dynamic and the whole conflict Severus felt about his father. Very complex.

    I think he needs some comfort though, so if you just want to send him my way for a day or two, I'm sure I can help him out. :)
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 19, 2003
    Don't you ever acuse me of being too dark and depressing again!! LOL. Very...much as described (the word "nice" just does not seem to fit). I can't wait to see more.
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