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By : SnapesDream
  • From ANON - Moe on November 14, 2007
    I never knew you were Buddhist!
    Anyways, your story is pretty good. (I actually haven't read the entire thing yet, so I'm basing it on what I have read.) Although you have some typos and grammatically incorrect things here and there, your plot line is pretty stable. Some of the things I caught incorrect include:
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  • From DavidL on February 10, 2007
    I was enjoying this story up to now. But having Hermione run from the final battle and abandon her friends, turning her into a coward, I just can't stomach that. I no longer wish to read any more of this
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  • From ANON - ~*~Tasha~*~ on December 22, 2006
    Well written. Good character development, plotline, descriptions and more. A nicely original idea/twist.
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  • From ANON - septentrion on June 21, 2006
    perhaps you should consider to move your story in the hgss section. Just a suggestion.
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  • From ANON - PartaeWILDrae on May 21, 2005
    (Sorry, but this is another review from me, PartaeWILDrae. my last one didn't show up as I wanted it.) I luv this ficcccc!!! Wow, I really don't know what to say, but this was really really smashing! They're just going at it like bunnies, aren't they! Hehe, just kidding. I love this fic so far, so please updated and tell me as soon as you can. Please keep up the good work and keep us loving this fic!

    MuchLuvies, PWR
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  • From ANON - PartaeWILDrae on May 21, 2005
    Ahh, I love it!
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  • From ANON - Sadie Hyde on October 11, 2004
    I'm intrigued. I've read way too many Hermione/Severus stories and wasn't sure if I was up for another. However, I am totally hooked by the fact that after all he did with the Death Eaters, hurting someone by accident finally drove him over that edge we all knew he was standing on. I think you summed it up perfectly that this Severus is scarier than the old one, that seeing him broken and weakened is much harder..I'm not making much sense now. Anyway, enjoying story very much and will continue to read now. Just finished chapter 5 and am looking forward to reading more...
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  • From ANON - Candela on September 19, 2004
    Wonderful fic! I love SS/HG pairings, and the fact that you didnt get them together when Hermione was going to school, because it seems much more realistic this way! The accident was a very good plot device, and I like that they didn't instantly fall in love. Great fic, can't wait till the next chapter!

    -Candela
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on June 03, 2004
    I am very glad to see that you have updated & I hope that you will find your motivation returning to you soon!!!

    Chapter 18... What a BEAUTIFUL Christmas for Severus, at least for the most part!!! Had Albus not interupted them I'm sure their entire day would have been more than memorable!!!

    So, Lucius is getting out soon:( What did he do to pull that off?!? What is up with Draco & Harry knowing more than Severus?!? I am hoping that it is for his protection & not for anything less worthy than that!!!

    I look forward to seeing how this batch of potion works as well as what will happen when Lucius is released!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on May 05, 2004

    AAAAAARRRGGH !!! OMG!!! This is such a great fic! I cant stand it! I was reading it , totaly engrossed I get to the bottom of chapter 17 and thats when I realized there wasnt another chapter there! I jumped out of my chair and screamed NOOOO!! Well everyone in the room jumped about 10 feet in the air and stared at me bug eyed. My husband ran over to me and asked who died. I had to explain that nobody died and I was upset that there wasnt another chapter yet and he looked at me like I had grown a third eyeball in the middle of my forehead. I started laughing and he said he was worried that I was getting to " into" this story. The reason I am telling you this is My being so absorbed in your story is a HUGE compliment! I have read hundreds of fics on this and other sites and there are rarely any that I get so los tha that I feel the need to scream when they arent completed. PLEASE post more soon. I am loving this story and it is absolute torture to have to wait to find out what is going to happen next. * Kudos* This is a wonderful story about one of my favorite ships. You are doing a fantastic job with the characters. I am REALLY looking forward to reading more!

    ~ Jaimie ~
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 07, 2004
    Chapter 17... It was nice to see Severus grovel as much as what Severus would!!!

    I was hoping that the potion would have worked for them, it must be getting very frustrating!!! On a good note it did lead to something very important...

    I LOVE the way that you had him tell her that he loves her!!! It was not only DELICIOUS, but very sweet & romantic as well!!!

    Seems like something is brewing!!! Looking forward to finding out why he felt the mark burn & see what it has to do with the potion!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Alcandre on April 06, 2004
    Chapter 17- WOW! What's gonna happen?!?! No! I can't stand the suspense! I must have more!...Pleaseeh, eh, I'm being polite now. I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on March 08, 2004
    Chapter 16... I am so glad that you have updated!!! A lot of bitter feelings in this chapter, can't blame Hermione at all!!! Severus is not treating her very well in this & I am hoping that it is because he is feeling the pressure of having to make the potion as well as wanting to have it be a success after his accident!!!

    I hope that spending the night alone will put a fire under his (_!_) so that he will make sure that he makes it up to Hermione!!! She deserves for him to treat her with respect!!!

    Looking forward to finding out more about the potion as well as seeing if Severus will do the right thing!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 17, 2004
    I am so happy to see that you got some time to update your FABULOUS story!!! I have missed it!!!

    Chapter 14 & 15.... So much going on!!! A potion, secrets, Harry & Remus knowing about Severus... I can't wait to find out what's happening that is so secretive!!! WHY won't Severus tell Hermione that he loves her, she deserves that from him!!!

    I am really looking forward to finding out what will happen next!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - LadyBrannon on January 19, 2004
    End of Chapter 13:
    SS/HG...together! Woo!
    LB
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