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By : SnapesDream
  • From ANON - emmy on October 29, 2003
    An excellent chapter. And a perfect first kiss- not to much, not too little. Well done! Smiles, Emmy
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 28, 2003
    Is soooo very nice! I like dis story! Write more? Pwease??
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 28, 2003
    I really enjoy it how you show Severus to actually have a human side!!! In light of what happened his mean side wouldn't have been appropriate!!! I am hoping that he will be able to see with his heart as well as his eyes & realize that he is not a rock, but a human who needs a human touch!!! Will be watching for your next update!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Emmy on October 28, 2003
    This is very good. I've very impressed. Keep it coming! :) Emmy
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 28, 2003
    Hmmmm...Poor, poor Sevvie..My heart bleeds for him...really, there is blood everywhere..dripping on my keyboard as I type... *wipes blood from keyboard and licks finger* hmm...tastes strangley familiar...sweet, fruity, mild tannin...Ahhh..*opps*.. Shiraz ...*blushes*... Fear I may be giving the impression I am an alcoholic...simply not true...But I digress...

    Another wonderful entry...Am most pleased with the interaction taking place

    I hope this review serves to submit my intention to plead for the next update soon...

    Thank you

    Shem xxx
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  • From Semidazed on October 28, 2003
    WOO HOO! This story is simply GORGEOUS! You've captured Snape beautifully... I love reading stories with alternating perspectives (You don't feel as much... static... I guess that's the best way I can phrase it). Keep up the fabulous work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 27, 2003
    CARRY ON
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  • From ANON - Sandy on October 27, 2003
    I like your story. I don't like some of the Sev/Hermione stories that are out there, but I like this one. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Hawk on October 27, 2003
    I like it! You have a good command of language, and a good grasp of the characters. Looking forward to updates. Hawk
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on October 27, 2003
    This was a veondeonderful chapter!!! Mr. Morgan showed that he was a typical parent, fear for his son taking over. It is human nature to 2nd guess yourself after something so bad has happened, it's just so sad to see Hermione & Severus doing it!!! Can't wait for your next update!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Anna on October 27, 2003
    I am notoriously critical of one's writing capabilities, however I have to say excellently done, simply suberb!

    love, hugs and kisses,
    Anna

    P.S. you kick ass ;)
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 27, 2003
    How awful! I'm glad Severus had the strength to defend her even though he was so upset himself. You've developed a very interesting way for them to reach out to each other.
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  • From ANON - kirienn on October 27, 2003
    Plenty of SS/HG fics are structured around an unfortunate potions accident, but you've managed to put your own stamp on the idea. I like the fact that you've made Sev the primary victim here, since it makes for very interesting drama and character development to have his customarily arrogant self-assurance stripped away (hopefully just temporarily). Sounds like he's in for a long and difficult haul to get back to his fighting form. Liking Hermione as Pomfrey's successor. Looking forward to updates!
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  • From ANON - shemhamforash on October 27, 2003
    ::sniff sniff:: That was perfect! I feel compelled to pull Sev from your fic to comfort him, but seeing as though that isn't possible, I will have to do with the Sev whose lap I am currentloy sitting on while I write this *evil grin* No..I am not insane...despite the rumours that circulate! It's a lie I say...Here I'll prove it

    "Sev, say something nice to the nice author"

    "No."

    ...Sorry I tried..really I did...

    Loved this chapter...keep it up..anxiously awaiting the next installment...soon I hope???

    In the mean ti sha shall just have to find interesting ways to occupy my time with...I am sure sev will come up with something..

    "hmmmmm"

    Much respect
    Shem xxx
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  • From Semidazed on October 27, 2003
    YEAH! GOOD! WONDERFUL! This is a great story, I'm quivering in antici......................PATION! Update soon!
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