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Reviews for Celebration

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - Mary Kay on November 01, 2003
    How does one properly beg for more? I adore this story. I would love to see more vignettes of the celebrations of their lives together. Well Done!!! If this is not proper begging, I will do what I have to.

    Mary Kay
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  • From ANON - DawnEB on November 01, 2003
    I have thoughroughly enjoyed your story, your writing style, your 'in character' charactization, and your sense of humour. I've been reading a lot of HP fan fic of late, and although I have often felt I should review, never had. What makes you so special? The chip butty! Oh, how I agree with you, my mouth waters as I think of yoescrescription. This is my favourite, but sadly infrequent, way of eating chips. I sometimes use white, crusty bread cut thick, with the yolk of a fried egg drizzled over the chips, but then this is actually an egg and chip butty, so you will have to forgive my little abberation.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Michele on November 01, 2003
    I absolutely love your Hermione. I would love to read more about these two - scenes of later years? Hope that you continue.
    Michele
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 01, 2003
    LOVE IT!!! Hermione is one tough cookie;-) I for one would LOVE it if you took them into the next phases of their lives....
    Wedding (complete with a smut filled honeymoon), children, whatever else you desire!!! Hoping you will continue, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - buttercup on November 01, 2003
    I'm enjoying reading it. If you're enjoying writing it why not continue? I didn't start out as a Snape afficianado but I like the way you write him and he's growing on me.
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  • From ANON - LadySnape on November 01, 2003
    I must say I haven't heard of a chip butty till now, but damn it sounds delicious. I am now hankering to go get some bread and chips, thank you for the great idea. I am loving this so far by the way...lol.
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  • From ANON - Rosmerta on November 01, 2003
    What a fantastic ending! I loved Severus's thoughts in the last few paragraphs. You've done such a terrific job of showing how they're perfect for each other. "Hermione taming" indeed! :) This whole story was just delightful. I think this one ended in just the right place, so I don't exactly want more of this one, but I sure hope you write more of this type!!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on November 01, 2003
    Yay! Oh, that's lovely!!

    One tiny hint - if you can reformat so the ending's more obvious and people don't make the mistake of reading the A/N thinking it's more story ...

    Yay! That's a lovely story! Now finish the Bubble Bath and Dirty Deeds!
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  • From ANON - Temptation on November 01, 2003
    Just had to let you know that I have soooo enjoyed seeing Hermione turned loose on Snape. I hope you can take it further - I've had a few good chuckles with it.
    I just wanted to add to the "Chip Butty" Here in New Jersey,USA I've always called a Chip Buddy and it is: potato chips (any flavor) put on a sandwich made from any deli meat on supermarket bread. I have two favs" ham, american cheese,mayonaisse and barbecue flavored chips or sour cream and onion chips. The other favorite is bologna, am cheese, mustard and the chips.

    Keep writing Shiv, I've enjoyed reading.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 01, 2003
    i love the concept of hermione-taming! great story with a fun ending. or (she says hopefully) a great intermission. please, may we have some more?
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  • From ANON - Derr on November 01, 2003
    Gee, if Riddle had Hemione on his side in the beginning maybe Albus would have relented...
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  • From ANON - ira on November 01, 2003
    Another story I will be avidly following!
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on November 01, 2003
    I really enjoyed these chapters and am looking forward to the ending! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 01, 2003
    Just LOVE how Ron is taking pity on Sev;-) Can't wait to see how she handlebus!bus!!! Hoping you will update again soon!!!
    Deb >^..^
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  • From Barrie on November 01, 2003
    okay, I admit that when I started reading this I wasn't sure I would like it. However, by chapter 2 I thought it was cute and by chapter 4 I had the warm fuzzies. I really like this story alot. keep it up. I am looking forward to seeing Hermione scold Albus, poor dear doesn't know what he's up against.
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