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Reviews for Harry Potter the Sexaholic

By : Vertex
  • From ANON - woohoo on January 23, 2004
    this story is so interesting. and to think you only find knowledge in books.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on January 23, 2004
    C'MON! UPDATE! I WANNA SEE GINNY! MAKE RON WALK IN ON THEM!
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  • From ANON - hp4all on January 16, 2004
    Nice work. I think you can make it more like a story. McGonagall must think that Harry is some sort of pervert, ans abs abusive childhood hasn't gone without leaving a heavy mark on him. It seems like Harry and Susan can have some more sessions until we get to Ginny.
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  • From ANON - Lemon Lover on January 11, 2004
    HE'S ALIVE LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!!

    and harry got caught again by ol' McG; and why's he gono Gio Ginny? fuckin bitch's probably full of diseases anyway.

    PLZ write a chapter with Narcissa. I'm a Narcissa fan and I love Milfs :)

    And Narcissa's definitely a MILF.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2004
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  • From ANON - szelij on January 10, 2004
    I bel believe bones is so honest! And manz twice by minnie? Harry;s gonna get SCREWED....honestly, will gryffindor go to negative pts? Hey wonderin is blaise in this? Hmm maybe some slytherin girls?
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  • From ANON - David S. on January 10, 2004
    McGonagall busted Harry again. But this time Harry had a new partner. McGonagall would be on Harry
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  • From ANON - Dana on January 09, 2004
    YAY!!! Finally!!! I was beginning to think you had deserted this story ( actually I was beginning to think you had died or had come down with a terminal illness, but fortunatelly that was not the case ). OMFG!!! Are there any virgins left in Hogwarts? I thought Hufflepuffs were the shy stupid ones...
    And, I'm beginning to think you have a McGonagall fetish. You sick, sick guy!!! It's the second time he's caught!!! Are you sure you won't reconsider and do Narcissa as well?

    You ask me if I want to be just a name, and I must say no. Does that mean I'll have my own chapter? If that's the case, then this poor, humble one is deeply grateful!!!

    Keep up the good work!!!

    XOXOX
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  • From ANON - klover p on January 06, 2004
    OH MY GOD!!!!
    LOL
    I CUDA DOA DO THAT LOL
    Man i'd say sumtin like doing a biology project hmm wait lol COMC??
    LOL
    More plz!

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  • From ANON - woah on January 06, 2004
    i dunno but susan and harry made a good couple
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  • From ANON - Smut Maniac on January 06, 2004
    HELL YEAH!!!!!!!!!THAT GIRL KNOW'S HOW TO DO IT!!!!This one was awesome!!!!And,whoa,she is quite honest....anyway,this was cool,and WE WANT MORE!Next chapie Ginny will get what she was wanting since her first year...no prob...Ron will Kill Harry....you know,I love Harry&Hermione above anything else,so,this is the ONLY ONE fic that isn't H/Hr that I read,just because it is so damn funny!!!So,try to write next one as fast as you can,but dont diminish your quality over our necessities,so take your time!See ya soon!

    PS-That would be kind of difficult,bro,unless if you live here in Brazil!
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  • From ANON - coolone007 on January 06, 2004
    The way ou are heading is there going to be a Harry/Minerva in the future? I do enjoy your smutt, but How far along are you in the sequel for "broken wands?"
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  • From ANON - valerie on January 06, 2004
    you know, these stories could have been much more, with a better, more cohesive plot and actual entertainment value, but the writing style and the smut leave a lot to be desired. i've seen pornos with better dialogue and with more believable sex. this is just badly, badly written. are the people who find this hot in high school or something? i just can't find anything smutty about this at all. it just comes across as the cheap sexual fantasies of someone who has no clue how to write sex scenes.

    and for the author-- beta readers are your friend. find one in the harry potter fandom who will be tough on you, but fair, and use their input. don't just ask a friend or your reviewers to do it for you, because they'd be biased in your favor, and that will only hurt you in the long run if you actually want to improve as a writer. find an author that YOU like, or someone objective in the fandom, and oachoach them for help, and take their advice and suggestions seriously.
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  • From ANON - MaidenMasherV on January 06, 2004
    *Laughs Hysterically* I cannot believe Susan can be that honest... Is the school going to find out about the Harry and Susan incident. I am surprised that you can be so harsh on poor Harry
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  • From ANON - SlytherinDamian on January 06, 2004
    Tesria, it's funny how your intentions to 'clarify' things and not 're-start' any arguments involves you basically saying most of what I said was dead wrong with nothing more than your opinion to back you up. Your opinion is yours to have, and people are free to agree, but your occupation hardly lends any weight to your arguments and you've added nothing new to this 'non-argument'. Psychologists are usually full of more shit than politicians. Honestly, "The current research shows that it probably..." what is that? Your opening argument starts out saying everything you said might be 100% not true. I feel like I'm talking to a psychic hotline here. You didn't add anything new, and if the best thing you can come up with is something that is only 'probably' true accoarding to 'current research' (they still can't decide if orange juice is healthy or not for an entire year strait), you shouldn't have wasted your time.

    PS:: I had a response to specific things you said, but it got deleted and I'm too lazy to type it all again. Hence the shorter, snappier response. Nothing personal, love.

    PPS: J.K. Rowling created HP. She decides Harry's sexuality and it's clear she isn't making him anything but strait, there is no wiggle room, there are no hints otherwise, there is nothing for the hetrobashers to cling to. He's strait, even if you stay forever in denial.
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