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Reviews for Bubble bath

By : Shiv5468
  • From ANON - amethyst on October 25, 2003
    I don't know if he will or not, but I hope he does!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on October 25, 2003
    *giggles*

    I think he's going to have a *heart*-attack! My dear Shiv, if he's able to come up with any remotely coherent reaction, well, you'll have to write it damn cleverly for me to believe it!!

    You evil, evil woman! I look forward very, very much to seeing how he reacts to this - very much indeed! I don't care if you have a social life, I want more story!! Stories, in fact - *all* your stories!! But you know that already.

    Incidentally, I love your MinerBrilBrilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Slightly more "Jean Brodie" Maggie Smith than Minerva's usually portrayed as - but viable, none-the-less. (That's the worldliness of Jean Brodie, rather than all her other, horrible characteristics, of course!!)

    OK, now, I'm going before I wear out my exclamation mark key.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on October 25, 2003
    What's up with McGonagall? She basically comes out and tells Hermione to seduce Severus. That seems a little off.
    Your characteration of Hermione is right on! I can't wait to see what you do with Snape! I think that Snape will dither a
    bit at the tub and Hermione will have to turn up the heat.
    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on October 25, 2003
    Of course the ironing can wait! (it's sad to say that my kids probably wouldn't even know what an iron was) This is just delicious! I can't wait for more...and for Dirty Deeds...and all the rest as well!
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  • From ANON - Daya on October 25, 2003
    Rarely do I find myself speechless, but perhaps you caught me on a day when my brain is refusing to work. All I can is Dis DON'T STOP THERE! More, please.... oh god.... I know have images of Severus in a dark green bathrobe. I think I need a lie down. Or a cold shower... or a nice hot, wet, ........NO! Sorry, my mind is running away from me, and has ended up in a dungeon, a bubble bath, and with Snape. I don't even like baths! I'm a shower girl!

    Sorry...please... sod the life in the real world... I need more on this.

    Daya. Now seriously debating a bath...
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  • From ANON - Seraphina on October 25, 2003
    Make him say yes, please make him say yes!!! He just has to get in that bath with her. Really enjoyed this first chapter, it was witty, sweet, and really nicely written. Hope you update soon and of course the ironing can wait, it should be banned anyway!
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  • From ANON - Raven on October 25, 2003
    I love it.

    It's nice to see that Hermione is the one who has to "chase" and not be the chased.
    and McGonnagal giving her the push, brilliant.

    the cuteness of the shy Blushy Severus is a pretty good change, still keeping him a broody, but shy bloke is different and fresh.

    cant wait for more Bubbly goodness
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