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  • From ANON - Brian on December 19, 2003
    one last question, what was the movie reference? i don't remember ever hearing that line.
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  • From ANON - Brian on December 19, 2003
    just got done reading chapter 19, and i love the Viper Room reference. Johnny's club is the coolest. but in all seriousness your story has made aughaugh more in these 19 chapters than other stories have that are 30+ chappies long, and i mean that in a good way. I look forward to reviewing more chapters. That, and where can i find a woman like Katheryn?
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  • From ANON - dave gerecke on December 14, 2003
    What a story! I started reading last night and now am able to go to bed to get some sleep. Great story.
    I only ever found a few errors (in the first couple of chapters) and none that jarred enough to make me stop. These proff reading errors were minor things and did not detract from the novel.
    If only I could write as well, I would be very happy.

    Now - where is the second part! As one person said, waiting with baited breath for the next bit. Hurry up and write - never mind that starving kitties and authors waisting away to shadows could end the end affect the story writing process - we want more.

    I like what you have done with Harry - he is more grown up and yet still a teenager. Snape is as he should be - human.
    kate is great - where is she when I was single.

    dave
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  • From cherylzv on December 13, 2003
    I love it! I have been collecting a few stories that I've wanted to read but haven't yet had time, and I am so glad to finally get to this one. I have only read a few chapters so far & can't wait to get to the rest. Your descriptions, characterizations, and dialogue are all fabulous - it is difficult to meet the balance of good dialogue and descriptions without getting too wordy or too sparse, but yours is definitely among the best I've seen so far on this site. I know you're done with this story already so words of encouragement for this one are out of place, but I will definitely wish you the best on any current/future projects you do. Thanks for a great story! :-D
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  • From ANON - Auna on December 13, 2003
    Excellent fic! I love the plot of this story, mostly because it's not as generic as some fictions out there. I really hope to see Harry and Minuets realationship progress maybe *inserts hopefull look* ;);););)
    Merci pour une fiction merveilleuse!
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  • From ANON - Darkwriter on December 07, 2003
    I've only made it through chapter 3 so far, I must say, I'm enjoying this. I absolutely love your prose, wish I could write as well as you do. This story flows so well, I find myself taking mental notes while I'm reading. I like your style, third person writing with a first person feel. That is hard to accomplish, I don't read to many stories that feel that way, they are few and far between. Your character developement if very good, well rounded I must say. I find most fanfiction to be somewhat flat at times, personally, I love characters with flaws, it only makes them more real. Like life. Thanks for posting this story. I'll keep reading.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 30, 2003
    Ends left me with very mingled feelings-the pleasure of watching of way the story has been growing,developing and claryfing in the end joined with sadness of the thing that won`t continue,that`s nothing to wait,nothing to achieve after time of impatience and curiosity.You know-I want all authors to finish their works and my admiration is even higher than before,if it were possible,I`m happy seeing the epilogue,however somewhere,deep in heart I`m a little sad so the promise of the next part is brightest news of the day,I must only be patient and wait,silly of me,indeed,`cause it seems I`ve become to be addicted to your story and wonderful characters,both Kathryn and Minuet have had a very warm place in my heart,despite I like above all watch my beloved Severus in all fics,this time I want (and,honestly,badly)to read about another people you had included in.
    Thank you for this great adventure that was your story,don`t forget I appreciate your drawing works as well and welcome it veryh evh every time you want to present.I used to print every chapter and now I`m able to reread it even I have no access to the computer,especially during my long duties,when I can a little rest,come very often back to your story,finding things I`d missed before.
    With love and hope you`ll still want to create the next fic
    regards
    Lady Aidil
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  • From ANON - Droxy on November 30, 2003
    Nice ending with a promise of an interesting sequel. I WILL BE LOOKING FOR IT.

    I will wait to read the continuing adventures of Severus and Kat- the two most adult thinking characters on fanfiction.

    I like the fact this is not a james bondy spy type story.

    The one thing I really liked about this story is Kats POV and Severus POV as being very world weary adults, and the kids are essentially kids.

    You need to let us know if you ever publish an original story.
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  • From ANON - Ghaeth on November 29, 2003
    Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! It can't be over!
    Seriously, I loved this story - well, epic. You've done a wonderful job keeping Severus in character and I like Kathryn very much. The American/British psyche has been interesting to follow. Especially at the present time in the muggle world...
    Thank you for your brilliance. Makes my day job easier to handle when I've got such a delightful world in which to escape!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 29, 2003
    Friendlyquark, Thank you very much for your story. I will await your sequel in mid-December. I love your work!
    God bless.
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on November 29, 2003
    pout

    moooooooooooooooore! none of this, writing for a living crap! We want you all to ourselves! (And we want Kathryn and Severus to be happy forever after. and we want Harry to master the sword and kill Moldywort. and, and, and...)

    Do write as soon as you have a chance!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on November 28, 2003
    I am so thrilled you got a paying job!

    Great story, I didn't want it to end. Such a spy ending, leaving at the train station.

    Looking forward to the epilog/sequel. I will watching for your stories.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 28, 2003
    .....sigh......

    yes, I know there will be a sequel

    yes, I know you have a real life that requires at least some passing attention from you

    yes, I know you write quickly

    still, I'm not looking forward to spending the next few days, weeks or --heaven forfend! -- months without a chapter or three from you, updating the adventures and love of my favorite OFC and her Potions Master.

    Thank for for the ride through Sub Rosa!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on November 28, 2003
    What a t-day treat to get two chapters. Boy o boy was I concerned that you'd have killed off K.

    Typical in character Potter, well done.

    Poor Severus, having to do all those nasty things.
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  • From ANON - anouk on November 28, 2003
    just wanted to say-i love your story. i
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