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Reviews for Sub Rosa

By : Barrie
  • From ANON - tamargrl on November 27, 2003
    your A/N gladdened my heart; not because you mentioned me, but because you're going to post a lot! Yay!
    I appologize if I haven't reviewed often, there's not much to say that hasn't been said before. It's a wonderful story and I look forward to reading every update.
    On a side note, there was a small mistake in chapter 62. In the fight scene there was snow. May.May. ummmmmm. :P
    ta' dahling!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 27, 2003
    I see the Severus`torment is endless,I hate this "eugenic"idea and his role in it,he and his helpless victim,sometimes pathetic yet still childish girl from his own House-this part of story is really hard to read,if somebody,like me,feels compassionately with the heroes of your wonderful fic.
    BTW you couldn`t make me happier than promising the sequel,and don`t daresay that this wonderful piece of work is"monstrous"even if you are the author!LOL It`s much more than obvious I`m going to stay with the new story to the very end,checking impatiently if you made update.As I wrote a while ago-I`m really the devoted reader of your writing masterpieces.
    Now I`m dying of curiosity what end would be in this part,not able to anticipate.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 26, 2003
    Wow. Not what I expected which is, ourseurse, just what you planned. This chapter leaves me cold and aching, but again, that's just how you meant it. Your dialogue and descriptions continue to pull me right inhe she story, even if it's against my will sometimes.

    As much as I look forward to new chapters, I dread the inevitable end of a favorite story. Please -- keep writing, keep posting, keep us notified!
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  • From ANON - Droxy on November 26, 2003
    OMG-

    The Pansy situation is about as dark as you can get.

    This is a good chapter, I am seeing the pacing start to pick up again.

    A sequel to sub rosa?? Do you have a title yet?
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  • From ANON - Ventrue66 on November 25, 2003
    You are so awsome to give us so many new chapters. Now that I have caught up with this story I have to wait with baited breath for each new instalment.lol
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 25, 2003
    The few last chapters are so different in their mood,from the light scene with lady dragon-it was amusing,indeed,to the last chapter-that appears very dark,left me frozen with the awful images of new Voldemort`s conception,I fully understand the chill in Severus`heart when he heard new plans.His future pthoothood,his hope for normal life with Kthryn-I`m so impatiently curious which way you`re going to play those plots and what end would be suitable for this doubtlessly wonderful story, obviously it isn`t the proposition you should finish the story,oh,no!not yet.I`m waiting as usual for update,trying guess new events but you are so marvellously impredictable,I love this aspect of your writing-that so often I`m not able to foresee your invention.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 24, 2003
    I can just see Severus hyperventilating, not unlike anyone who's actually gotten pregnant!

    This is setting up to be an intense pair of issues -- the pureblood issue and Severus' child. As always, your descriptions and dialogue convey so much and are creative and accurate. Lovely...
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  • From ANON - Droxy on November 24, 2003
    What a nice treat to arrive at my T-Day destination to find several new chapters to read!

    Who, pray tell, is going to be kidnapped fromthe USA to breed? Lilith? Hmm.


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  • From ANON - droxy on November 21, 2003
    Yay- 3 posts for me.

    I love your imagination! Can't wait for the angsty parts.
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  • From ANON - Mikel on November 21, 2003
    Very nice story so far. Although I must admit that it is rather an odd feeling seeing one's last name used in a story even it is used as a first name for a child. Are you pronouncing it "lil", the french way or "laisle" the english way. Our family has usually pronounced it the latter, but you would be surprised by the many different variations of the name I have heard.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 21, 2003
    I've decided that it's the descriptions. so detailed, so precise, but never too much. of course, I'll probably decide that it's the dialogue in the next chapter. or the pacing.

    in any event, it's clear that you know what you're doing with this writing thing. Just keep reminding me that you're the professional; I shouldn't try this at home!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 20, 2003
    "a bathtub full of warm naked woman" -- GREAT line!

    As always, a chapter full of surprises that make wonderful sense in the context of the characters and your story line. Now if you could do something about all those stupid semi-colons...
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  • From ANON - kate on November 19, 2003
    Severus and Harry may never make it to friendship in your story, but I love seeing their relationship evolve into a respectful allegiance. and the vision of Neville nearly shouting "Hosanna" as Kathryn walks in the room -- priceless!

    and what I wouldn't give to be asked into the storeroom with Snape (sorry - sudden surge of estrogen)....

    can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 18, 2003
    so I lied and I'm reviewing....again.

    Glad to see Kathryn handle the curve ball of moldy Voldy's Occlumency. As muggles (grin), I think we forget how complex the wizarding world might be, even when one is simply taking tea with a hated rival.

    I'm off to practice flouncing whilst seated ~ air kisses!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 18, 2003
    The chapter with Narcissa`s tea was a masterpiece of work,I have to admit.The risky play with Voldie and the amazing conversation with Narcissa, dangerous and full of subtlety as well were both enjoyable and admirable,I read with true pleasure and I`m very anxiously waiting for continuation.You are so inventive and unpredictable,those features,while are present in the writer`s work-are the most valuable and desirable at all.Wishing you to be in good mood and healthy regards L.A.
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