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By : Barrie
  • From ANON - kate on November 10, 2003
    blinking back tears at ch. 45's revelation of severus' feelings for minerva and albus.

    i believe the secret of life is grace combined with forgiveness (closely related as they are) -- and you hit me square in the heart with both in this chapter.

    are you reading my mind somehow?? monty python references, bad puns.... i'm a happy, happy reader!!!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 10, 2003
    he he he -- shiv got a cameo! how cool was that? you rock (oooo -- cave, rock -- bad pun alert!)

    again (or as always), i love the way you reveal the interplay between characters with dialogue and description. the star wars echo is a valid one that isn't exploited well very often; you did it beautifully!


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  • From ANON - tamargrl on November 09, 2003
    nice.
    I liked the Vadar reference. It fits really well.
    I wanted to ask, did I miss some reference to Marie Laveau in the books, or is she your creation? Or is she a New Orleans cultural reference that this damn yankee just don't get? :)
    Still loving the story.
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 08, 2003
    Friendlyquark, what are you doing to me??? Harry can't fall in love with a low-stationed elf maiden. Oh MAN! You are setting him up for a huge fall. Poor Harry. SOB!!!
    Well, can Severus and Kathryn have a happy endihen,hen, PLEASE!
    How is your flu? Gone I hope.
    Oh, can you e-mail me your illustrations of your characters please.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 08, 2003
    begging forgiveness, i have been properly chastened by the muse (but grand-mere *would* be happier...)

    i love how caught up i get in each part of the story -- adventures into the faerie world, romance, finding the good in nearly every slytherin, harry and ... t'ali, maybe? maybe minuet? maybe someone else.... can't wait for the next post!

    i always go back and re-read the previous chapter or two before diving into the new stuff; you have created an impressive oeuvre, m'dear!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 08, 2003
    I hope you`re not so bad ill,because I obviously miss your work,it appears increasingly interesting,I`m very curious about next chapter with Elves and Wizards-I like this idea-making the connection between these two worlds of fantastic creatures.Besides-thank you for your answer for my e-mail request.Be well as soon as possible and don`t let me wait too long for the next installment-I suppose it would be so marvellous as usual,of course!
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  • From ANON - katinka on November 07, 2003
    I love this story! great plot, VERY descriptive, you're characters are well-rounded. I hope you feel better soon!
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  • From ANON - SillyMom001 on November 07, 2003
    You just worry about getting better okay?
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  • From ANON - kate on November 07, 2003
    eeek! i infected you! who kthatthat email viruses were so physical? we've come down with a nasty virus here and now you write that you've got it too -- BAD reader, BAD!! kate must go iron ears to atone for my sin......

    that being said, love the magic of chapter 39. and i suspect kathryn's right, hagrid would've prefered fangs! the elders coming to the school, being greeted by a bunch of youngsters is a situation ripe for culture clashes. hopefully, minerva, albus, kathryn and severus will be able to keep the kids in line!

    feel better soon. i'd hate for you to have to figure out how to work fever-induced hallucinations into the story.
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  • From ANON - Gypsy on November 07, 2003
    I have to say that from the 40 chapters I just read, was Absolutely, Positively, Incredibly FANTASTIC!!!!
    You have a VERY Good Strong Story base, your characters are lively and more real, your sceens, actions, converstations Vastly believeable.
    Only thing I ask for is MORE!!!! and Soon ASAP.
    I can't wait for you to continue this story, please please PLEASE, bring more to it.
    Question? Of all the lovely erotic playing between Kathryn and Severus, IS there to be a little one between themselves, as there will be of that Insane harpy Lestrange?
    I think that the perfect Suitor for Minuet, is Harry himself....I mean they said she needs someone "Powerful, and smart" and I liked the interaction between Harry and Minuet when they were in New Orleans..

    Again I PLEAPLEASE MORE CHAPTERS SOON!!!!!

    Respectfully,
    Gypsy
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 06, 2003
    Hey,my favourite author,what I`ve just read?!You,weak woman,had submitted to our beloved bastard-extraordinare,Master of Snarkiness and Sneer?!I understand it very well,he is irresistible and overhelming,isn`t he?I had been defeated long ago and obeyed silently,joining to the Severus` Muggle harem so now you have me here -an anxious and slightly insane Snapefics` reader,addicted to the stories and him,despite his attitude and moods.But yet you should him frighten a little(for instance-next story would be his romance with such a horrible woman he`s never dreamed in nightmares)to make him more obendiant to you,his mistress because of beeing the bloody author or you`ll erase him at all*evil grin*I sometimes have wicked desire to confront and argue with Severus,annoy him and take over the edge of his temper.
    Nice to know you are a true artist,able not only to write with great talent*sighs of envy* but illustrate your story as well*again pure envy because of my hopeless love to drewing art,much more thatry try it myself*
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  • From ANON - kate on November 05, 2003
    my, you do know how to flatter a girl, don't you? "(I) catch all (your) errors"? I blushed until I read this chapter. then i cried. let's just say that the idea of minuet (sorry, my french education requires that i refer to her as minuette. notistaistake, it's a francophile's problem) had rongrong, loving man stand with her as her father while she chose her signficant gift... wow.

    and i LOVE the comparison and similarity of minerva and grand-mere, the only two maternal figures in severus' life. i know you won't leave me blowing my nose into my blouse after all this; grand-mere would hex you past eternity! still, i have to wonder at how kathryn and severus will solve all the problems surrounding them so that they can be together...


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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 05, 2003
    I always enjoy your chapters. What's next? Please let there be a happy ending. It would just break my heart if Kathryn and Severus couldn't be together.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 05, 2003
    You know-the world around me doesn`t exist while I`m reading your story,especially the lemony chapter that I finished a while ago.These dark chapters with Voldemort`s summoning and encounter with dreadful Bellatrix-they were truly exhausting,painful and breathtaking.I try to imagine which way you`re going to lead sto storyline,yet I`m really uneasy,your invention is so upredictable(save the romance between main characters,but this thing would`ve been unforgiven if you hadn`t allowed them to be lovers)so I could only wait for new installment with impatience and curiosity.Many good dreams for you and no nightmares!
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on November 05, 2003
    Whatever you may say about the difficulty of writing Chaps 36 &37, they were well donDonDon't try for more than you feel comfortable with, but don't get too involved with what's happening, either. I thought you did a fine job of making that almost-rape scene believable.
    And, even though I haven't reviewed often, I'm really enjoying the story. It's really engaging. I look forward to my evenings when I can catch up on the newest postings.
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