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By : Barrie
  • From ANON - kate on November 04, 2003
    i stand (sit) correctegaregarding the portrait and thank you for your gently worded explanation.

    these hadbe tbe two tough chapters to write, to let severus work through so much. as usual, you wrote clearly, sensitively and with a deft way of conveying the emotion. my only complaint is that one four letter word: doom. noooooo! say it won't be so. i look forward with great anticipation (and no small amount of trepidation) to the coming chapters. in the meantime, i'll try not to threaten a temper tantrum if i don't get my happily ever after. i mean, come one. at least one kathryn in the world should end up with a man who can perform four times in less than 8 hours!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 04, 2003
    So I`ve been praying for the most fruitful dreams of all,obviously for my personal indulgance in your incredibly marvellous story,sheer pleasure to know such lentlented writer and bask in joy of reading.Internet Snapefics are my truly hobby,I read and have still read many of them,might be hundreds,yet the good one isn`t so often thing I would wish to be,so when I had found your story was immensly happy,much more thet you are so creative and quick in writing,very adorable fact for me.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 04, 2003
    masterful as always, my friend. just a few specific comments -- because i can't resist

    thank you for being the one to FINALLY bring in some decent hootch to hogwarts! i don't care how magical old ogden's is, it can't taste better than gledfidditch!

    in chap. 31, severus, par and and kathryn (see -- i got the right woman this time. i'm taking better notes) pass "the pink lady" to get to the gryffindor common room; isn't the portrait of the fat lady? although, most of us portlier white women (self included) are indeed pink....

    and severus in armani. oh. oh my. oh my, yes! if only we stilled lived in torrance i'd head up to listen to your recommended bands! and tell me, 'cause i can never remember, are the a & r folks death eaters or members of the ootp?

    love this -- hate you for having so much talent. sigh...
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 04, 2003
    I could do many things but shoot you by very selfish reason,indeed-would have never finished one of the most favourite fics if I`d done it.;)) Honestly,I enjoy the Muggle interlude as much as the other parts of the story,I anxiously read every chapter and heartfully assure you-this work is worth reading,surely have never been disappointed or waisting time,you are very inventive writer,my greatest hope is you won`t suffer the bloody writer`s block that devastates effects of many such brilliant fics that are still unfinished.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 02, 2003
    looking forward to seeing how (not if) severus and the boy-who-lived-to-be-a-thorn-in-his-side come to a mat mature relationship. and speaking of mature relationships .... i love the affectionate interplay between hermione and severus. hope there's lemon on the dessert menu soon!
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  • From ANON - deblovesdra on November 01, 2003
    I love this story! So, who is Harry's true love going to be? Male (Draco) or female (Minuet)? Severus and Kathryn are great together. Please another chapter or 2 in New Orleans... Kathryn's family is facinating.
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on November 01, 2003
    I`m really overhelmed by your story and truly engrossed during the reading time-hoestly-I appreciate not only the parts including my favourite Severus,what`s obvious,beeing me a great,devoted Snapefan,yet the chapters with another characters as well,because of your amazingly adorable ability to create very interesting plots,to involve original ideas,that is difficult-to avoid cliches in fictions,but you have very impressing invented new situations,I read every chapter with pleasure,genuily interested in facts and speculations what would be in the future.I welcome new original characters(Kathryn`s family-for instance)as well as all canon persons-Harry,Hermiona et ceat,obviously I`m glad when I read about Severus-he is main reason I`ve ever read fics.I like well-written lemons,especially if they`re improving good plots-like in your work.I assure you-I`m waiting for new installment and anxiuosly read all of them.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 01, 2003
    ah, ma cherie, l'histoire de mlle. leblace est bien amusante.

    dang, you spelled my name right, you inject arthur, smut and french at all the right spots ... i think i'm in love. would you marry me? oh wait, i'm married. and a girl. doh! er, not that there's anything wrong with that, you understand.

    can't wait to see what grand-mere slipped into kathryn's pocket -- hopefully, it will be something to shut narcissa up and keep our couple happy!
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  • From ANON - madison_fairie on October 31, 2003
    I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. I read the whole story in one sitting.Keep it up! I really liked the part about King Arthur. And the fairie too, of course. This is the only story I have reviewed on Adultfanficton. You just inspired me so much! Thank you, Melissa
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  • From ANON - kate on October 31, 2003
    wow -- arthur. amazingly tied in. this keeps getting better and better and i can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Lady Aidil on October 31, 2003
    I enjoy and like your story very much and am waiting for every next chapter,your invention in creation of plots and character is really great,especially your OFC appears to be strong,lovely and admirable,the storyline,new ideas,been involved are equally interesting,making me impatient and curious what would be in the future.Many th for for this fic and quickly made updates that I highly appreciate,with hope you`ll be able to lead this work to the very end.I truly like OFC/SS fics.
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  • From ANON - tamargrl on October 31, 2003
    mmmmm....
    I feel all warm and cozy in my belly. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - kate on October 30, 2003
    i got a mention! last time i was this excited, i was jumping up and down, yelling, "the new phone books are here!"

    again, very intriguing -- plot and writing, both. and major props to anyone who can work in dialogue from a (governor) arnold flick! can't wait to see the action unfold.
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  • From ANON - kate on October 30, 2003
    wow. complex, interesting, and i love your heroine's name (gee, guess what *my* name is...). i'll be interested to read how the balancing act between slytherin and gryffindor continue. not to mention, looking for a few lemony moments in the kathryn/severus storyline. hint, hint...
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  • From ANON - Sillymom001 on October 29, 2003
    Nice story so far. Its intelligently written and easy to read. You should definately write more stories your quite good at it.
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