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By : Lizski
  • From ANON - Odile on December 19, 2005
    Oooooh, twisty Slytheriny goodness! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 28, 2005
    THAT IS JUST SO NOT FAIR, YOU CAN'T JUST STOP THERE AND LEAVE US HANGING!! I AM GOING TO DIE WAITING FOR YOU TO POST AND I JUST STARTED READING IT LAST NIGHT AND COULD NOT STOP!! I LOVE THIS STORY! Love Citten
    P.S. Please don't take too long in getting up the next chapter, and please have merice and dont have a cliffy!
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on November 26, 2005
    It took me some time to finish reading your chapters, and for a while I was unsure which one of the Slytherins I hoped she ended up with. Draco would have been good, Severus too, but your Hermione is set on Lucius, and I must agree with her. Sad that Draco cannot have children, I suppose that is a done deal? I will be waiting for more, although you do seem to be very busy with your life. At least you haven't given up on them.
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  • From ANON - sayyida on November 07, 2005
    I have really enjoyed this. I hope you post an update soon. I am looking forward to hearing about the confrontation that is coming.
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  • From sayyida on November 07, 2005
    I agree, when I was a teen my affections changed almost instantly...multiple times a day on occasion. This wasn't a jarring note for me at all.
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  • From ANON - Nyxx on November 04, 2005
    I only just finished chapter nine- but I must tell you now how incredibly exciting and fun this is with everyone (2 Malfoy's and a Snape!) vying for Hermione! Why not throw a Weasely or Potter intot he mayhem as well?! LOL Honestly, the mosr fun you are having with this, the better it gets! There are many frequent mispellings and errors scattered through out (like "rr. r." and "emberered" for instance) that you or a beta going through again would clear up. I'm more of an SS/HG fan, but this story is sooooo great!
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  • From ANON - Nyxx on November 03, 2005
    Well it does seem that she switched awfully fast... considering that she has had a crush on Severus since his 1st year speech. And personally I would be a bit more pissed off if I was duped into losingmy virginity to someone only pretending to be my man of choice. And more concerned for Severus as well... A confirmed Death Eater within Hogwarts and endangering everyone there would have had me running to the Headmaster asap, seduction and expulsion be damned! Not that I don't like the story, mind you, I find it quite entertaining in fact! Even if she does seem a bit impulsive and obsessive for a girl so logical... you're right, she is still very young! Oh and there are quite a few grammeratical errors so far- a beta would work wonders (I know- I have 2!)
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  • From ANON - SnapeSeraphin on October 18, 2005
    wow! I really like this story. I adore Hermione/lucius and there simply aren't enough good ones out there...but yeah...preaching to the choir here, aren't I? anyway...I can't help but feel a little sorry for poor ol' Sev. I mean he has done his best to be an honourable man and what has he got to show for it? I guess we can't blame him for his little vendetta, but I do hope he snaps out of it soon.... I hate the thought of Snape gone bad.

    All there's left to say now is: keep up the good work! I am looking forward to an update soon :-)
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  • From ANON - Wicked on October 16, 2005
    I have to say, you have take up most of my weekend because I discovered your stories!!!!

    I never read HP smut before, but I particularly like your stories, and I am also a huge Jason Issacs fan.

    I"ve become of a fan of Lucius anything!!!

    I hope to get to read more!!!

    Thank you so much for making me not do anything but read for the entire weekend.

    I loved Lucius's Bookshelves by the way.

    I can't wait for more smut in the future chapters of this one.
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  • From ANON - Erin on October 06, 2005
    Severus' behaviour was interesting, as the Order members were questioning his loyalty I was doing the same thing. Draco being the one to go after him makes sense since he knows some of what Severus is feeling in regards to Hermione.

    Hermione and the way she took control over the situation and the way that she was blunt with the Order was amusing. I thought that Arthur and Molly's different reactions were realistic since I see him as more forgiving and accepting that her.
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  • From ANON - Scarlett on September 27, 2005
    i have read this story from start to finish without stopping, i have loved every minute of it. You are a fantastic writer and i cannot wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - angel on September 18, 2005
    this is a great story and i cant wait in till you update next and i hope snape comes around and in till next chapter (which i hope is soon ) please update soon adn keep up the great work and late for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - pyegirl on September 18, 2005
    (CONTINUED) Of course, there certainly may be MANY Tonks/Severus stories out there. It may be that I just haven't seen them because I haven't looked for them. I wouldn't want to offend anyone. I just think that it makes for an excellent side-pairing in stories such as this. Ahem. I'll stop now.
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  • From ANON - Pyegirl on September 18, 2005
    And I'm curious -- having been re-reading the story -- Hermione is convinced that her parents will be appalled. Are you going to introduce them into the story? Many possibilities are there. I would hope, though, that her parents would be good parents, and demonstrate that they really love their child -- I've read many stories where the Grangers are not particularly likable. Hermione, however, IS, and usually a child like her has EXCELLENT parents. Even if they are dentists. (joke)

    And maybe a Severus/Tonks match? While I'm sure that there may be some of those around, I haven't seen them EXPLICITLY narrated. And CLEARLY, this Severus needs to get laid. And I like your Tonks.

    I also recently re-read Lucuis's Bookshelves. Still loving it. And especially his habit of pinching his nose. YOU GO!
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  • From ANON - pyegirl on September 17, 2005
    I have to say -- you've created perhaps my all-time favorite fanfic line: "Hermione was managing to save the world while keeping up her studies" -- I LOVE IT!! It's sooooooo McGonagall. Still loving this story.
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