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Reviews for One Night Stand!

By : Vierveijzer
  • From ANON - Daxi on November 23, 2003
    This is a great fic, have no idea why more people haven't reviewed!? It was really great when everybody just gaped at them while severus was escorting isabella to the ball, I love those kind of scenes!!!! and the smut scenes were also really well done! fantastic! how sad that she dissapeared like that, she was probably killed by voldemort or something... sad, thet could have lived happily ever after... *sighs* well, love it, hugs.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 04, 2003
    Maddy,
    I was very impressed when I came back to check on you. You have obviously done a lot of editing and the spelling is very, very mumpromproved. I will try to find a few minutes to read more and get back to you. Good job.
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  • From ANON - a little advice on November 04, 2003
    I have copied your first two sentences below. All the words marked with as astericks (**) are misspelled. This might explain why you are feeling short of reviews and feedback. Readers might not be reading much farther than this. This problem doesn't appear to improve after the story begins.

    Disclaimer: I do not own *Secerus* Snape, *pitty* for me, and all other characters involving the Potter story.


    *Sumary*: Severus is 17 and in his last year. He *get's* the punishment that really suits his dark and *mysteriuos* self.

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  • From ANON - Estrilda on November 04, 2003
    Okay - I saw your plea for reviews and decided to peek at your story. I didn't get very far because the spelling is really in need of review first. There are several ways to do this. You can copy your text into a word processing program with a spell check function. You can look for a beta in one of the online groups - like Yahoo! or the authors directory where some of the authors offer to beta. You can even go to PetPeeves article on bad grammar and spelling mistakes and download the spell check program described there. We all struggle with sentence structure and grammar from time to time, but really bad spelling is something that you can fix easily. It might bring more readers and more feedback.
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  • From ANON - DaringDorah on October 31, 2003
    I always knew Sevvi would be great in bed, but it's kind of hard to imagine, at least for me it is, to see Sevvi as a virgin. On the other hand, the way you've described it made that imagination a lot easier.Silk robes for him always suits him best.Hope to read a lot more of your naughty Snape stories... (sigh).

    ***Dorah***
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  • From ANON - Morgan on October 31, 2003
    OMG, I hope your othecs acs are from the same kind of smut.

    Keep on going, girl!

    Morgan.
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