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Reviews for A Heart After All

By : kojiro
  • From ANON - Relicwitch on November 08, 2003
    Once again a good chap!!!
    It's only problem is being short!!!!
    Hope you feel better soon.The damn flu caught me too. :)
    I can't wait for the next chap....for something smut why don't you try a serenade???
    Bye and hope to read you soon.
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  • From ANON - SLYTHERINHOTTIE on November 08, 2003
    Ok forget this I am not playing this game. I wont ask nicely. Ill beg please,please,please,please,please give me a hot and heavy sex scene.I know he has it in him and I know you will give it the justice and excitement it needs. I am sure some of the other reviewers feel the same way.(and thanks for the teazer sex scene)OH ya I hope you are feeling better take cair.See ya at the next chapter.;)
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  • From ANON - Katinka on November 07, 2003
    great story! I voo puo put in the kinky bad boy bit, but that's just me!
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  • From ANON - Relicwitch on November 04, 2003
    Sorry I didn't review sooner.But college is getting hard now.I've read the new three chaps and believe me you got it right!!!I love your wicked sense of humor!!!So Lucious has a rose tattoed in is ass????Who figures????the idea of a tattoo for severus is quite nice in deed!!!!I hope you can make a Severus with a dark and wicked sense of humor!!!and hermione too!
    For martial arts i think that severus should practice more than one stile!After all he was Death Eater!!!
    I hope you can update soon!!!!
    With more occness, hummm ;)
    bye
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  • From ANON - SLYTHERINHOTTIE on November 04, 2003
    Man I leave town for a fiew days and you go all out and post like crazy. I enjoyed the sex scene I am so glad you did not use the virgin Snape. He is too much of a bad boy to be a virgin and I think that ruins a story. I hope you have more specific sex scenes im a big snape fan and love the thought of seeing him in the nude. Just remember he is a bad boy type and I would love to see some of that come out in future chapters I think Hermione would like it.;)
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 03, 2003
    *giggle* Sounds as if he is enjoying himself immensely! Please write more!
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  • From ANON - Helena on November 03, 2003
    My God! this "au naturel.." was completely Hilariou!
    Y!
    Yeessssss, our Snape aaaaaaaaaaalllll sweaty............all naked.............Good Lord I'm going to have a stroke, just thinking about it!!!!
    What a damn sweat torture.....
    keep up the EXCELLENT work!!! I want more, more, more, more, more...
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  • From ANON - Barrie on November 03, 2003
    Magnificent manhood? You've been reading romance novels haven't you! :)

    That was very sweet and I thought you handled it quite nicely. Keep going, I want to see where this goes!

    XOXOXOXO
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  • From ANON - Fish on November 02, 2003
    Bravo! I love it! Encore! MORE! MORE! MORE!

    More soon, the voices in my head will be returning soon nee need to keep them occupied!

    ciao,
    Fish
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  • From ANON - Seva on November 02, 2003
    lucius malfoy with a rose tatooed on his ass! *rolls on floor laughing* sorry, that just cracked me up! (am weird, i know!)
    fabulously written m'dear, and despite your frequent angsts about not keeping severus in character you're doing a damn good job with him i'd say! :D
    i await chapter 5! *hopes it is chapter five, and that she can count*
    **Seva***
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  • From ANON - Helena on November 02, 2003
    Oh, Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!!!! I really looooooooooooved it!!
    what a body, (evil grin),muscular too!!! Good God! What a torture (lol)!!
    I really hope you continue this excellent work and if I might you could put describe him while he is aaaaaalll sweaty and doing some "exercise"???!!! Evil grin....
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  • From ANON - kirien on November 01, 2003
    Your sexy, sexy Sev is sooo hot he's leaving me incoherent *snort*. Yeah, I see him in the same light as Darcy and Rochester too. The secret kickboxing angle, while not new, is a most appropriate way for him to keep fit (and give him a legit excuse to meet w/Herm). LOL! Only thing though, is that I think he was very OOC in the way he lowered his personal barriers to her. That was wayy too quick, IMO. He's such a private person and I can't see him letting anyone into his confidence quickly. Also, the use of exclamation points! is a little excessive. A /little/ goes a long way. But it's a great start. Looking forward to updates ^_^
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  • From ANON - Barrie on November 01, 2003
    Thank you, I am glad that he has thought about the Headmaster and taken steps to be certain neither of them gets in trouble here. I was concerned for both their reputations. :) I liked the Jane Austin bit, I can see him reading them secretly in the dungeons.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 01, 2003
    I like your story alot! And yeah....I kinda figure that that is how Albus would react. Albus seem to me to be a pretty cool guy and after all....Herm by this time is of age as was stated. So no worries! No critisism here. Only anencouragement for you to write more and faster! LOL Alas sometimes one's Muse can be very fickle!
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  • From ANON - Helena on November 01, 2003
    hu, Hu !!!!!!! Go for it girl,can't wait!!!!!!!! Good Lord, what a sight!!!!!!!!
    Our sex God in action!! I'm soitedited....hmmmmm..

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