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Reviews for A Heart After All

By : kojiro
  • From Barrie on October 30, 2003
    Sev seems remarkably angst-free about chasing after an eighteen year old girl. It's a rather refreshingly different take on him. I am waiting to see where you go with this. Keep it up.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 30, 2003
    I am sorry that i had apptly tly missed your previous update. I do not get to the computer as often as i would like and I love your story. I question whe Sev Sev would move this soon but doubtless he feels that there is no time like the present. hehe After all....why should he not now live life to it's fullest? *sigh* It can be argued back and forth I suppose. hehe i look for ward to the next installment!
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  • From on October 30, 2003
    Great story!I'd never think of Severus as a martial kind of guy!And Hermione!!
    It is a great idea!
    But i think that some tecnical terms in japonese should be done!
    Severus is a man of calling the things by it's real names.
    Hope you can update soon.


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  • From ANON - Helena on October 30, 2003
    YES! Absolutely, I don't mind AT ALL of your descriptions of our naked Snape (hmmmm.....)!!
    keep up the excelent work!!
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  • From ANON - Laerai on October 30, 2003
    Ahh this looks to be so good! Hehe I can't wait for 9 o clock in the tower. I dont think they can either! ^_^

    Keep writing,

    Laerai
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  • From ANON - Barrie on October 29, 2003
    Neville is such a convienent foil, isn't he? I mean in fanfiction especially, he has caused more havoc than Murphy.

    As a slobbering fool of a Rickman fan, I can just hear Severus snarking out his lines as you write them. I like your characterizations very much.

    I studied Aiki-Jujitsu myself and Bo staff, so I am a little prejudiced towards the martial arts.
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  • From ANON - -E- on October 29, 2003
    Great beginning!! I look forward to the rest of the story avidly!! You have the two repressed (in canon) intellectuals of Hogwart's 'letting down their hair' (on literally--ha!). And then kick-boxing lessons... yum.... Affectionately, -E-
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  • From ANON - Helena on October 29, 2003
    Hmmm, Snape walking naked (andaty.aty...) trough the bedroom, Good Lord, what a site!!!!!!
    dear Sev I'm becoming very impressed with your stories! LOL!
    Keep up posting, I'm already shivering of excitement........
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on October 29, 2003
    Great new story. The sparks that are starting are great - although I don't really understand what happened to his hair and how the pendant showed with his potion master high neck - many buttons - attire. Probably just scanning too fast for the sparks. They really are good.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on October 28, 2003
    This is starting off very interesting and I can see Severus knowing kick boxing as well as a few other styles. That is a personal opinion though. hehe Please keep writing and i look forward to updates!!
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  • From ANON - SmutMeizer on October 28, 2003

    I like this and can't wait to see where it goes, but.......

    I have to say Snape is about as likely to put on a running suit and kickbox, as he is to don a pair of wings and fly around the Great Hall singing 'I'm the Q of of the Faeries'.

    "I'm just the Smut Meizer, I'm into sleeze ba dum ba dum ........."
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  • From slygriff21 on October 28, 2003
    Great story so far. Please update soon. I can't wait to finds out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Ripper de la Blackstaff on October 28, 2003
    Hey I love your fiction !!!

    continue !!!!
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  • From ANON - Barrie on October 28, 2003
    I have always thought the lack of hand to hand training was a problem in the Wizarding world. I am glad to see that Severus agrees with me! This is looking good. I am looking forward to subsequent chapters.
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  • From ANON - SLYTHERINHOTTIE on October 28, 2003
    NICE START HOPE YOU POST SOON.
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