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Reviews for Angels in the Asphalt

By : hannelore
  • From ANON - TKiwi on November 01, 2003
    very nice. the latin was a nice touch. i like the banter the two share- sorta reminds me of M*A*S*H in a weird way... anyways, this is kewl- are you going to add more?
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  • From ANON - lupusdragon on October 29, 2003
    Karen: Wow. That was beautiful.
    LD: *grinning wildly* Yeah. Please tell me that there will be more.
    Karen: My only question is why did you not capitalize the title? I mean, I see something like that and assume that the author has poor writing skills. I am not intentionally trying to insult you, I have just seen too many haphazardly capitalized, punctuated... whatever... stories. Was there a specific reason you wrote the title that way, or were you in a rush?
    LD: Oh, for the love of fairies. The rest is not sloppily written, surely we can forgive the title?
    Karen: Yeah, sorry. The story really is nice, and well written.
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  • From ANON - Florentia on October 29, 2003
    Bravissima!! *Very* good! Could you possibly tell me where you found the Latin? I used to study it and I love reading it.
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