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Reviews for Tel\' Lindar (The Bard)

By : ZeDrippyVessel
  • From ANON - mother on March 10, 2004
    Still love it. Update please!
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  • From slygriff21 on March 01, 2004
    Love the chapter! I love it how she really stuck it to Fudge! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up!

    Tiff.

    p.s. If it's not Voldemort than who? I can't wait to find out.
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  • From ANON - Book Lover on February 18, 2004
    Found you through God Awful Fan Fiction.

    They either don't get it or hor horribly jealous! This is wonderful, fabulous stuff and I am hooked on Bronwyn! Maddening creature, but what verve! She is no ordinary Sue (or any I can figure out) and I'm glad she has strong Elves/Wizards to keep her in line.

    I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Windy Blossom on February 14, 2004
    Hi. I do like your writing style and you are a good storllerller, but I have to say that I absolutely despise Bronwyn. She's a lot like typical romance novel women, which I don't care for. I'm not trying to insulting because I do like the story, but she really annoys me.

    Only problem I have with Tel' Lindar is the massive amount of dreams/flashbacks. It's getting hard to keep up with and is taxing to read. I'd like to see it more "in the present".

    I'm not trying to be rude because you really do have a great deal of talent. It's just a matter of my personal taste when it comes to female characters!

    I'm not leaving an email for fear of getting slammed, but it's just an opinion. Not meant to be rude!

    WB
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  • From ANON - Bella on February 13, 2004
    Zee.... I truely admire your skillful work. I simple love your story....to me its is a masterpiece by a very talented writer, such as yourself. I am grateful that I found your stories through the VV yahoo group. Im one of those members forced into lurking due to RL. I am sorry to hear that you, a great author, of two of the best stories i have read to date, is being target by thgawdgawdaful fools. As a fan of both the LOTR and Harry potter Fandom, i completely diasgree with there lewd comments towards you or your stories. Please do not pay them too much mind. They are a bunch of internet stalkers with too much time on their hands. I look forward to see your updates....until then, cheers!!
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  • From ANON - hawaii on February 13, 2004
    Started EV last night and finished Tel Lindar today. Read them as much as possible all day long (ever read and drive?). They were both terrific, though i especially liked Tel Lindar. Your OC is quite a handful and I loved her modday day attitude problem mixed with her ancient wisdom. I also liked the way that though Snape tried repeatedly to get the upper hand, he never really did. She and he may have found their own peace, but not at the expense of her personality. Very creative too how you intertwine the Elves into the HP world and the dream visits. Good use of Remus and I love Amadeus. All around awesome read. Looking foward to all your coming chapters.
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  • From ANON - Phairesse on February 06, 2004
    Like your other work, I find this fascinating. Crossovers are never easily done. Whatever naysayers there may be, pay them no mind. Those who like you will stay. Those who don't, can go elsewhere. I recog you your talent for staying true to characters and following storytelling rules. Please continue
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  • From ANON - nerwen on January 30, 2004
    Great! The Twins are alive!!! Will Bronwyn look for them? Will the Twins be coming to Hogwarts and meet the Weasley Twins? That'll be cool. Update soon! Waiting for your next chapters :)
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  • From slygriff21 on January 29, 2004
    Now we are getting somewhere. I love it. How they are both trying to help each other deal with their griefe and guilt and move on! I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - slashgoddess on January 29, 2004
    wow... that was a wonderful blending of the two stories! Very well written and articulate. I'm enjoying it thoroughly. ( I can't seem to spell tonight either...)
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  • From ANON - Ishie on January 25, 2004
    Now, see, I didn't provide an email b/c I didn't even thinkd ged get a response! It's always nice to know that my inane ramblings are actually read, much less appreciated. But I will save my replies to your reply for an actual email to you....

    Okay, now Empty Vessel made me cry copious amounts. But nothing, Nothing! could have prepared me for this story. OMG! Haldir! Noooo! *sniffle* But really, what other way could he gon gone?

    Okay, now that's over. GO Snape! What a perfect foil for Bronwyn. I can't wait to see how Tel' Lindar works out! Am intrigued by the interplay between Dream!Haldir and the Voyeur. Imagine that Elf giving advice to his temporary replacement(?)/competition. Can't wait to hear what he has to say as the Snape/Bronwyn relationship plays out. And am I right in thinking there's something a little otherworldly about Amadeus?

    Great backstory on the House Elves. And if you look at the way the two races (orcs and h.e.s) speak, the connection is so obvious!

    And bestill my beating heart: The Warrior Twins live! Oh Ellandan! Elrohir! Can't wait to see what a swath those two cut through the upper forms of Hogwarts students....
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  • From slygriff21 on January 22, 2004
    Awsome chapter! What?! Elohir and Elladan are alive! I can't wait to find out what happens next? Will Bronwyn and Severus get closer than they already are? I can't wait!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 22, 2004
    I can't stand Bronwyn, but I love Snape and I am hooked on this story. You are a very good writer by the way.
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  • From ANON - Forscythe on January 16, 2004
    Not quite sure I'm following you here. It's a cool plot, but I'm not so sure I can deal with Brownwyn's Mary Sue-like 'talents'...oh well it's interesting pleae write more.
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  • From slygriff21 on January 16, 2004
    Awsome chapter! Who knows she is there? Is it Voldemort? Some other evil? I can't wait to find up! Please update and soon!

    Tiffany
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