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Reviews for Come Undone

By : Seamasu
  • From ANON - Tara on April 12, 2004
    Could you please do me the pleasure of updating?!? It is a great story! I'm anxious to see what happens next! Your a fantastic writer!
    Ciao
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  • From ANON - bluehearts on March 01, 2004
    *gap* you mean isn't not finished? no... don't do this... don't do this to me!!!!
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  • From ANON - shelleykids on February 18, 2004
    I just found this story last night and love it I hope it see more soon you are a writer lol
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  • From ANON - Keikokin on February 07, 2004
    Hiya,
    I love how this story is developing. Please write the new chapter soon. I love the developement of the characters. But I am wondering are the boys ever going to consummate their bond, and what about Lucius and Voldemort. I HOPE that you aren't planning on killing of Harry or Draco. Please email me when you write a new chapter if you can.
    Thanks and keep up the MARVY story (Draco in drag - HHHHEEE)
    KT
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  • From ANON - hi on February 01, 2004
    Some of the lines were cut off. You couldn't really tell what they were saying. But other than that, good job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2004
    glad you fixed it. really gotorytory. hope you continue soon!

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  • From blueblueblue on January 27, 2004
    hey i would love it if you continued this story, the characters are great!!
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  • From ANON - chantalmalfoy on January 27, 2004
    Wow... that was different. I've never read it before, but then again, I never was a fan of ff.net.
    I feel sorry for Draco. i hope that he gets to talk to Harry soon (for real). Lucius is such a bastard
    in this fic.

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  • From ANON - Moeko on January 15, 2004
    You should reload this story. There are many places where there is text missing.

    Other than that I think it's great. ^_^ Going very well. The emotion in the three chapters I've read seem real. Very nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on January 09, 2004
    are you finished with this or are ther more chapters to go???? I would love to see more!!!!

    merrideth
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 09, 2004
    Your story is interesting and different from a lot of ones I've read. I really hope you continue. Something I think you should know though is that parts of sentences are being cut off so some things may be getting left out.
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  • From ANON - lupusdragon on November 01, 2003
    This is an excellent story, but the chapters are too long and they are being cut off. *pout* And I really want to know what is happening.
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