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Reviews for The Garden

By : missM
  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 04, 2003
    I don't know if a sequel is necessary. Hope remains at the end of the garden. Hope withoutsequsequences of a messy future for our two heroes.
    Personally, I look forward to your next work. E-mail me before you post it so I can watch out for it.
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  • From ANON - Barrie on November 04, 2003
    I'm afraid that my desire to know is overcoming my common sense. Please write a sequel. I have really enjoyed this story, even the confusing bits.
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  • From ANON - jo on November 04, 2003
    This was....fantastic. I guess that's the best word I can come up with at the moment. Shellshock really doesn't do much for my mental thesaurus. It's fabulously written and I do want a sequel. In fact, I can't wait. Thank you.
    -jo
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  • From ANON - celticwitch on November 03, 2003
    Loved the "disjointed" style of writing. It pulls the reader into the madness and kind of takes the reader on the journey. Haunting and scary. Lovely. Truly. :)
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on November 03, 2003
    Wow! Very intense and very interestinometomething new and original. one of the best things i have read for a long time.

    My only criticism is a minor one about spacing. it is a little hard to read the story as there isnt spacing between the paragraphs, although in some ways that adds to the story - makes the text seem as divorced from reality as the characters.

    i dont know if you meant to leave it hanging, or whether you wanted to make it clear. does he wake up?
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  • From MaddyRiddle on November 03, 2003
    Great story!
    It's so sad. You make me cry a lot (I'm drowning in tears). The madness you express is not only in the words you wrote but in the way you wrote the story in a whole. I got trap in the madness and I enjoyed it while reading. Now my soul is suffocating. (don't get me wrong, I like the feeling) You definitely achieve what you were looking for... congratulations for that!
    I love your story... I can't stop crying...
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 03, 2003
    Sob!!! That was so beautiful! I am actually tearing up. Why is it that Severus's sacrifices always get to me? It was just a lovely fic. I even got the "stream of consciousness" style that you had... Thanks for the fic.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 02, 2003
    I have read this y...y.....I grieve, I cry and I howl. A very excellent story. I will say no more.
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  • From ANON - kate on November 02, 2003
    i'm drained. this was beautiful. awful. confusing. horrifying. lovely.

    i will have to re-read this and battle to understand (if that's even the right word) the beginning. maybe it would be better to just read and let the words flow over me, in their own mad way.

    i'm afraid some people may choose to leave your amazing story before it has had a chance to work its magic. more the fool they.

    thank you for this gift.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 02, 2003
    Beautiful and haunting and scary. I love it.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 01, 2003
    Have you touched madness? Somehow I think that only those who have touched it can write it well. So far so good! I eager await more!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 01, 2003
    very dark (no pun intended), very descriptive, and very ... confusing. hope the madness breaks enough for them to connect, somehow -- thoughts? touch? vision?
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  • From ANON - kate on November 01, 2003
    interesting start. keep hold of the reins as your story drags you and keep posting...
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