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Reviews for Path of the serpent

By : ejab
  • From ANON - Phobos on November 04, 2004
    Me again, here, waiting, being SO patient (as if!) for you to continue the stroty..
    Seems that threating you does work, so I guess I'll do it again ;)
    But befor ethat, I do have a quesstion to ask:
    In the firts chapters, it seems like Snape is actually a Griffindor (Lucius and the lion-biten-by-a-snake figurine, the way Snape reacts at it). Is it just my misundertanding of english?
    Now back to the threats... I dare, and I do, becuase I represent all of us readers who get annoed when a writer does not finish their work. And you, my dear, are behind schedule *wiggles some papers with dates in front of your face*
    Sooostarstart writing or get hexed ;)
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  • From ANON - Phobos on October 13, 2004
    A superb pice of work. You sure have talent!
    I love the way Lucius and Severus act, you tottaly block away the mushy crap that other put on them. No OOC on behalf of most of the characters, and a brilliant plot (although you never told us what happened with the new teacher, bad you *pouts*).
    More soon? Or will I have to show you some dark curses fisrsthanded? ;)
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  • From ANON - Orphelia Malfoy on September 11, 2004
    Loved this chapter, great as always! I'm having computer problems but I'll get back to you with a long review+email asap Sunny
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2004
    This story totally rocks my world...hehe. I can't wait to see what will happen to Lucius and Severus. Will one of them get pregnant? It's great, so please keep it coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2004
    wow! just discovered this and well wow!
    I adore the love story of Severus and Lucius painful and bloody as it should be, and amazingly all in character.
    please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Daphne on June 01, 2004
    Hi again!

    I haven't read 'Algoagnia yet' but if you say that's a good story I will read it as soon as I can. About the new chapter: aw.. the last sentence is so sweet!!!!!! (I guess it is, isn't it?). I love that relationship between the twothemthem (i'm sorry I'm a little bit mad but I can't help it) and there's only one thing I can say to you: oh PLEASE, PLEASE, PL jus just another one, one more chapter soon !!!!!!!

    Thank you so much and keep on writing ( and sorry, I'm not an english speaker and my review is probably full of mistakeorryorry about that). And thank you again for answering me, you're really kind.
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  • From ANON - redsugg on May 31, 2004
    Great chapter i absolutely love it please update soon I can't wait to see what will happen. By the way i was wondering if you can tell me where to find 'Algolagnia' by ChaosRose i would love to read it, please email me ok thanks.

    your biggest fan
    kristle
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  • From ANON - Daphne on May 20, 2004
    Wow! Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!


    I'm really really enjoying your fic, I think it's the best Lucius/Severus I have ever read in my life ( And I have read quite a lot about them) and I hope the next chapter won't last long. And of course the Severus and Remus couple is amazing although I never imagined Remus acting like that. Ah, and I think I'm definitely not able to talk about Severus "lesson" with Draco, simply amazing! And what about the party with Voldemort in Severus' house? not a word for that.

    Thank you so much for writting that and please make it last as long as you can and don't make us wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - OrpheliaMalfoy on May 09, 2004
    You made it! Oh goody! But poor, poor Draco...but then again, he asked for it! Wonder what Lucius has in store for Severus now that he not just ows him one! Talk to later
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  • From ANON - Orphelia Malfoy on May 02, 2004
    Oh that was nice really nice, I feel sorry for Remus and also Draco though! Please tell me that Severus will get back at Dumbledore somehow!? Why did Lucius agree, come on he can't be that unselfish; can Lucius actually be unselfish!? So, what was his reason?

    Hope to talk to you on Monday!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 22, 2004
    Ahh! Must you stop there!?? Continue!
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  • From ANON - Rahela on April 14, 2004
    I'm completely lost on the plot, but still reading for the smut. :) Lucius carving up the muggle seemed out of character- from what we know, he enjoys dangling them upside down in mid-air, (GoF), not cutting them up. Snape is excellent!
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  • From ANON - Jack on April 14, 2004
    I love you!
    You are the bomb!Oh yes!
    I have not read all the stories yet but the ones i have read are great.Just the right mix of comedy,porn, and just kick ass twists and turns to be enjoyable.
    I glomp your writing.
    *Glomps your stories* ^^
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  • From ANON - OrpheliaMalfoy on April 12, 2004
    You haven't had a review in a while so I thought I tell you again how much I liked "my" chapter. Email trouble is still at hand but will try to send a a review for chapter 21 privately later!
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  • From ANON - LeeDragon on March 22, 2004
    Love it, first you think at least one is really evil, but then its the other, and then you find out that their not evil evil, but this great badass evil. you rock
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