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Reviews for Path of the serpent

By : ejab
  • From ANON - Nyos on March 21, 2004
    give away to much? you are evil aren't you? and they say Voldemorts the Dark Lord *snort*. anyway, grate chapter, i think Dumbledore finally got the point!


    as always keep up the good work and update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nyos on March 15, 2004
    i love this story! poor Sevvie! does Severus have anything to do with Lucius' plan? is he going to finally divorce the evil bitch (you know who!) and marry Sev? will Sev get pregnant so they can have a heir/child? i hope so! there isen't enough Lucius/Severus mpreg out there! in fact this is the first that i read were Lucius was the actual father and not just pretending!

    oh and castrate Voldemort! that old basterd doesen't have the right to tuch Lucius or Sev! he can have Peter!

    anyway, keep updating!!!!!!!! please????????????????????????????
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  • From ANON - rahela on March 02, 2004
    More smut? Please?
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  • From ANON - Rahela on February 23, 2004
    The Lupin-Snape sex scenes are...interesting... ;) but please don't let Snape and Lucius break up! They really are perfect together. (owling Snape some lubricant) ;)

    Thanks!

    Rahela
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  • From ANON - Rahela on February 16, 2004
    Thanks for ch. 14!! Eagerly awaiting ch. 15 :)
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  • From ANON - Rahela on February 10, 2004
    Thank you!! This is even better then ch. 12. I love "dark angel" as a description for Snape, even though it got used a little too much.
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  • From ANON - Rahela on February 10, 2004
    Thank you!! This is even better then ch. 12. I love "dark angel" as a description for Snape, even though it got used a little too much.
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  • From ANON - Rahela on February 04, 2004
    Thank you!!! Have Snape "reciprocate" after they wake up from the nap! ;)
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  • From ANON - YG on January 27, 2004
    Oh, and I just adore that certain Deatheater Severus is talking ab ^_^ ^_^ I really liked the way Snape defended his position about Lucius to Dumbledore ^^
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  • From ANON - Rahela on January 26, 2004
    I LOVE the "because he is mine" part. In alot of slash stories Lucius and Snape turn sugary sweet if they're in love; or Lucius is just using Snape for sex/potions/protection from the Order etc...I love how your Snape and Lucius love each other *without* suddenly turning into Gryffindors. Villains fall in love too!

    Please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Orphelia Malfoy on January 18, 2004
    Still having trouble accessing my email account! So I decided to send you a short ew hew here! I loved the new chapter, despite the things you do to poor Severus. But Lucius and Severus are so great, in charcater and all...you know how I like my Luc, don't you!? I agree with rahela, some TLC for Severus would be nice, esp. adminstered by Lucius, but know my evil els poor Lucius will have to wait!

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  • From ANON - Rahela on January 17, 2004
    Thanks for ch. 10! I think your Lucius and Snape are excellent- they stay in charecter, but still care about (love?) each other. In most fanfuciuucius usually ends up either being a caricature of evil, or so sweet he isn't anything like canon Lucius. Here he's perfect. Maybe you could give them another intimate seen? I'm sure they would appreciate it too...Sev deserves something nice after all that Cruciatus ;)
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  • From ANON - rahela on January 12, 2004
    Please write ch.10!!! I can't wait for it! This is a great fic!
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  • From ANON - Clovers on January 05, 2004
    Chills are good! Please keep going.. ::drools at Lucius:: Yep. ^^
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  • From ANON - kira on December 14, 2003
    hi,

    nice work. More! I wanna see a happily married Lucius-Severus :))) OK, that is too much to ask for..
    But is the divorce legal? And what will happen to Narcissa?
    And the dark lord is alive? I mean, or heros are deatheaters... And Severus is a spy. And Lucius isn't.
    Don't kill the cunning and beautiful Lucius Malfoy! Please?
    -Kira-
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