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Reviews for Secrets Revealed

By : Kat2
  • From ANON - elena on June 26, 2005
    great
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  • From ANON - elena on June 26, 2005
    More,More,More!!!!!!!!!!Chapters!
    Great story so far
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  • From ANON - Drake on May 27, 2005
    i'd like few more chapters please? i love it so far.
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  • From ANON - MikoYoukai on May 04, 2004
    I love this story.
    I wish the chaps were a bit longer but I love it. Please please please please please More!
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  • From ANON - Pete on January 15, 2004
    Well, there are good and bad things, let me be brief: You do have talent for writing, you need someone to check your grammar and spelling. You are moving the plot along a bit fast, you may want to try an outline. Be sure and show what you are doing, don't tell. (I heard that once). On the good side, you have the beginnings of a good plot, and with a little more work, you may yet have a bestseller! Do you have a Thesarus? Might come in handy... but great start! Thanks, Pete
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  • From ANON - lee marker on January 06, 2004
    i like this fanfic. I thank that you should keep going on it. if not just make the chapters a little longer.
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  • From ANON - Drey Towson on December 03, 2003
    Ie the the story so far. Please write some more
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  • From ANON - Tammy Jean on December 01, 2003
    I Love this story and I can't wait to see where it goes and how you develop it.
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  • From ANON - The Empress on November 30, 2003
    You know, you should write because you really want to, not because you want people to review. It's a bit selfish. Oh and your writing is a bit muddled. Run-on sentenand and all. Makes for difficult reading.
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  • From ANON - AppleOfBlood on November 29, 2003
    I like the idea for the story, but please have someone beta your stuff before you upload it to the site!!! The grammer and structure of your sentances needs major work.
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  • From ANON - Dan on November 23, 2003
    I like this fic so far bu i think that the chapters need to be longer.
    Good so far though keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Willow Malfoy on November 09, 2003

    Hi! So far I'm loving this fic, and I think it's going to be an interesting story.


    Eagerly awaiting an update.


    Willow

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2003
    intresting but short, maybe some longer chapters.
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  • From ANON - Sky on November 07, 2003
    Chapters too short. Need more. Feed me Semore!
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