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Reviews for Where the Heart Moves the Stone

By : Hanakai
  • From ANON - ldf on September 29, 2004
    oh, my darling....

    you know that i find everything you do to be
    of such superb quality. it is wonderous story telling
    and i find myself doubting my abilities as a writer.

    i can't do it this well!

    you know i loved it very much. i look forward to
    the next part.

    keep in touch and don't forget about me. *sniff, sniff*

    *huggles and cuddles*

    ~belssings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - ldf on July 30, 2004
    need i say anything? actually, yes, there is
    one thing i have to say.

    i love the way your Snape is everything i think
    he should be. the exterior snarkiness with the
    inner self-loathing and the possessive way he
    regards Harry.

    and Lucius.... tears, darling. tears.

    BRAVA! keep up the good work

    *hugs and snugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - ldf on July 14, 2004
    oh, this chapter is so poignant! tears, my dear.
    actual salty, wet tears. i possotively loved it!

    i think you have outdone yourself with this one.
    i can feel..... everything.

    i anxiously await more, my dear.

    you are truly a master of the written word,
    and i humble myself before your ability!

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - Maddie on July 14, 2004
    You're my new God, mmk? *toogringrin*

    Honestly, this is by far the best thing I've ever read on the net, and I've read a lot. This is the fiirst time I reply, and I found this fiction quite recently. You are... Brilliant. No, you're more then brilliant, you are.. The best, y'know. I love how Severus and Harry are so canon, it doesnfeelfeel unrealistic (well, except for the point that they're wizards and all that. But all of us have some piece of magic within, don't you think? :) ) at all. I had never read S/H before this one, I've always been doubtful towards it.. Because I thought it was uncannon. But, I had to swallow those thoughts (Quite happily ;) ) and now I'm a slave under this fiction. LOL, it happends I can't recall where certain things are from, if I've read them here or in the books, in the books or here. I keep mixing things up! I talked to my sister about a scene, the one when Harry's alone with Severus at Sirius' house, and I was angry at her because she couldn't remember it.

    I'm babbling, and I'm sorry for that, but.. Never, ever stop writing. Especially not this one. I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - ldf on June 19, 2004
    what can i say, darling?
    other than i am completely enthralled.
    again.

    now to wait on the rest of it!

    but i'm not hinting or anything.
    ~sits and twiddles thumbs and toes~

    nope. i'm not hinting at all.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - lina on April 29, 2004
    do i dare disturb the universe? in a minute there will be time for all the decisions and revisions thata minute will reverse.
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  • From ANON - ldf on April 25, 2004
    Kai, my dear....

    you already know how i feel. it still amazes me
    that you are so capable of giving such great visuals
    and maintain the suspense of the impending clash
    between Harry and Severus.

    i am in awe of your ability with this arc. i am absolutely
    enraptured by this. i am quite aware that you have a
    certain ability with words and descriptions and everything else
    that holds me in thrall.

    it is certain that you have such exquisite talent as to make me
    completely jealous. the way you hold the plot together, the way
    the story flows so easily. i am so green with envy, i cannot begin
    to tell you how much so. the depth of characters, the total picture,
    is enough to make me wish i were so much better at my own writing.

    thank you for entrusting such a wonderful masterpiece to my hands.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - Lushy on April 25, 2004
    Somthin's funny on your updates.....

    ::scratches head::
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  • From ANON - Annoyed on April 25, 2004
    Holy shit, dude. For someone with the nads to say, "Don't flame me," in their profile, you have an astoundingly poor grasp of what merits a flame. Grammar--take a class in it. Please pay close attention to the concepts of spelling, comma use and sentence structure and also, oh my dear lord, learn how the fuck to write dialogue. QUOTATION MARKS are your fucking friend!!!!!!!!! Perhaps you're now offended and think to your self (note how I use quotes now), "Hey! I can spell!" Well, then dear writer, you certainly can't proofread. If you have a beta, fire them. If you don't, get one. Jesus Fucking Christ I hate people who think their ideas for a plot merit publication and the waste of bandwith depiste their nonexistant grasp of the english language. Please go learn to write or pull this off and save someone the server space. Dunderhead.
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  • From ANON - ldf on March 15, 2004
    need i really say anything? othern i n i am
    anxiously awaiting finding out where this
    all ends up at.


    you know i just love this, and i am honored
    that you would use me as a beta.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf

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  • From ANON - Anon on March 04, 2004
    I love your story. Its so dark and different. Update soon please and please finish this fic don't leave the readers wondering what is suppose to happen! I like your version of Severus, you make him human and compellling.
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  • From ANON - ldf on January 26, 2004
    yes, dearest, patience is a virtue. i will
    hold to that for now.

    i'm sure you already know my thoughts
    and opinions. but, just in case, it is all starting to come together
    nicely. i cannot wait to find out how you tie it all up.

    you, my dear, have cornered the market
    on angst and suspense. i am humbled by your vision.

    *hugs*

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - Kethhry on January 23, 2004
    It's one of the most disturbing tales I have ever read. Second only to your Disorted Lullaby series. There is only one word to sumarise both of them - briliant. Please keep on and update soon. I will be waiting patiently.
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  • From ANON - Sarryn on December 31, 2003
    This is undoubtedly becoming more complex. It is fascinating to play witness to this drama you are unfurling. So many elements to enthrall and entrap. Exquisite sublimity!
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  • From ANON - bai on December 15, 2003
    Wow!
    Wonderful!
    I LOVE IT!!!
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