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Reviews for Light and Dark of the Raven

By : SlytherinSecret
  • From ANON - LIZ on September 22, 2005
    That is a great story so far, it's not over yet right? But if it is it's really good, I hope though that you write a new chapter soon. It's wonderfully writen. I was wondering about the dark mark and how it has not faded yet, and about the whole thing about Hermione not being able to have children and then Draco talking to the Gods and they told him that she would figure it out... I just hope that means that your going to write more chapters. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Kirsty on July 15, 2005
    My computer broke down before I could read the final chapters. BUMMER!!!! I just bought a new one and when I read the last few chapters especially the one that had the part about Ginny's funeral it practically made me CRY!!! :( Why did you have to kill her? Love your story but so sad.
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  • From ANON - God on June 09, 2005
    Well i cba reading your book its to long get a life but it probably is crap
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  • From ANON - rar on April 23, 2005
    rar
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  • From ANON - raven on August 30, 2004
    May want to go through and edit this when you get the chance. Theere ere rampant errors regarding calling Hermione Draco and changing their respective genders. Also, several misspelled or wrong words entirely.

    Regardless of the errors, it was nice to see an update. Hope things improve.
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  • From ANON - Glo. Phillips on August 30, 2004
    Hi!

    I've been following this story of yours and I really have enjoyed it... but I wanted to warn you that this most recent chapter has what appears to be an error caused inadvertently by a spell-check or a replace command. In the first half of the chapter, it appears that all the places where you wrote "Hermione" were repaced with "Draco" which makes it a tad confusing to read. I figured it out quickly, and could see what happened, having done similar things myself by accident (all you need to do is to be trying to correct one erroneous word, and then hit "replace all" instead of just replacing the one instance...) In any case, I look forward to seeing more of your writing!

    Glo.

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  • From ANON - Elle on August 08, 2004
    the story is good. it keeps to the main points of what happened in the actual book which is a bonus, but there are tiny things that are incorrect. hagrid says the word "summat" because of the area he comes from. it is part of his accent. draco and hermione (and most fo the other characters) would not say "summat" or substitue "me" for "my" (ex me foot or my foot) because draco for one is from a rich family and would have been taught to speak with eloquence and intellegience and same goes for hermione. shes smart you know. and you cannot apparate or dissaparate from the hogwarts castle or grounds. i have read the whole story that you have written here but decided to comment on this chapter because it was the firs com come up when i ked ked on the link i have saved. I really do love what you have written here its amazing. keep up the brilliant work!

    ~Elle~
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  • From SlytherinSecret on July 29, 2004
    Hi. Just a note to say I won't be able to update for two weeks. All I can do is apologise for this. I am going on holiday on Saturday and was hoping to update tonight but due to organising the holiday, some last minute problems with that AND a major crisis that my best friend had I haven
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  • From ANON - ash on July 29, 2004
    wow still amazing wish to read more
    cya ash
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  • From ANON - Angel # 4 on July 15, 2004
    PLEASE KEEP WRITTING!!!! It's a wonderful fic but its been a while since you updated. Please update
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on June 29, 2004
    Chapter 26-The Chamber of the Gods...
    I Like how you wrote Draco's conversation with the Deities & am very curious to see what was meant by Meroviel's actions!!! I think that Draco was even more willing to give up everything than the Deities expected so I am hoping that they will return his essence!!!

    I am looking forward to seeing how Hermione & Draco's relationship goes & just how it will prosper!!! Til chapter 27, Deb >^..^<

    P.S, Good Luck on your exams!!!

    ///
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on June 29, 2004
    Chapter 26-The Chamber of the Gods...
    I Like how you wrote Draco's conversation with the Deities & am very curious to see what was meant by Meroviel's actions!!! I think that Draco was even more willing to give up everything than the Deities expected so I am hoping that they will return his essence!!!

    I am looking forward to seeing how Hermione & Draco's relationship goes & just how it will prosper!!! Til chapter 27, Deb >^..^<

    P.S, Good Luck on your exams!!!
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  • From ANON - ash on June 12, 2004
    this story gets more and more amazing with each chapter wow
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  • From ANON - PaganPoetry on June 11, 2004
    Okay I'm sure that you haven't made Draco into a muggle because that would be cruel and you couldn't do that to your Draco, (Although if you have I think I may remove something rather important of yours with my bare hands! *Smiles sweetly*) Curse you and your ponderous chapter beast.
    Jen
    xXx
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  • From SlytherinSecret on May 19, 2004
    To everyone reading the story; I thought I should just leave a note to explain that due to A-Levels starting next week, a virus on my computer and writer's block the next Chapter, as you have probably gathered, will be delayed. I will update as soon as I can but other commitments are making it difficult. Sorry for the wait and I hope you don't all abandon me. Thanks, Slytherin Secret xxx
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