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Reviews for Light and Dark of the Raven

By : SlytherinSecret
  • From ANON - elementaldeity on May 05, 2004
    Great chapter, it made me cry. Poor Harry, I felt so bad for him. Hopefully Draco can rescue Hermione and survive. I'll keep checking for updates.

    elementaldeity
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on May 05, 2004
    Chapter 25... So much sadness in this chapter combined with the element of hope, WELL DONE!!! I do feel so badly for Harry, Ron & the rest of the Weasley's, poor Ginny:(

    I am very interested to see Draco's quest to get Hermione back!!! I really like what you wrote about the World-Walking & can't wait to see how you play it out!!! Til chapter 26, Deb >^..^<

    P.S., I still feel that you did a WONDERFUL job on your battle scene!!! Of course it could have been longer, several chapters of drawn out bloody battle, but you did a fine job in getting the point made with what you wrote!!!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 29, 2004
    Part 24, Chapter 23-The Pieces Are Set, the Play is in Motion...

    This is a FANTASTIC chapter!!! I really felt badly for Ron!!! I like how you have Draco & Hermione saving the people that they could & covering their tracks, WELL DONE!!! I also like that you had Draco save the baby, gave even more heart to his character!!!

    I do like how you added bits of humor here!!! I LOVE these lines by Draco:
    1. "It will act as a constant reminder not to piss you off.
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  • From on April 29, 2004
    I can't wait for more!! Please update as soon as possible okay??
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  • From ANON - Allayne on April 28, 2004
    Ahhhhhhhh! You're an awesome writer, but god damn, you're evillllll! Cliff-hangers?! Gah.



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  • From ANON - Carly on April 28, 2004
    So I realized you posted this story also on fanfiction. I love it. But what happened to Hermione? Update...soon...please????
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  • From ANON - Jenny :D on April 27, 2004
    Me ever so much addicted....are you going to update?
    *runs away before i gets hurt* muhahahhahaha
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  • From ANON - Angel # 4 on April 26, 2004
    slytherin, are you going to finish the story because you havent posted in a really long time.
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  • From ANON - PaganPoetry on April 25, 2004
    Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing this, but it was, as ever, wonderous. Have you decided on your one chapter/two chapter dilema yet? Best hurry up or you'll have people baying for you blood methinks.
    Love always
    Jen xXx
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  • From ANON - Liz on April 23, 2004
    AAAAAHHHHH a cliff hanger!
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  • From ANON - Liz on April 23, 2004
    MMMMM REALLY HOT!
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  • From ANON - dalialia on April 21, 2004
    great, as always
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2004
    r u gona continue writing this

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  • From ANON - Faye on April 13, 2004
    I love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the way that you depict Herione as strong yet at times vulnerable. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on April 12, 2004
    Chapter 23... I think you did a good job of having Ron pull off being Lucius!!! His part was brief, but handled well!!!

    I was surprised that Voldy had Draco & Hermione duel!!! He was luck that the Gods didn't kill Draco!!! If nothing else, Voldy saw even more of what the 2 of them are capable of!!!

    I am looking forward to the battle!!! Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^
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