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Reviews for Light and Dark of the Raven

By : SlytherinSecret
  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 12, 2004
    Chapter 18... HOLY MY!!! Those Dark Ones are damn puzzling!!! I am glad that they helped her where McNair was concerned!!! I do hope that when all is said & done Hermione will be able to regain her own being & be able (& want) to be wDracDraco!!! She did make it sound hopeful & promising to him, like she still wanted him, but was afraid he would get hurt!!!

    I did like the situation of the 3 of them together, not only for the smut value though;-) I saw part of it as more of a payback for Draco hurting her as well as it being a way for her to be able to be close to him without having to be held accountable if she didn't want to be!!!

    I do look forward to seeing what will happen when they go back to school & what will happen with Blaise!!! Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Liz Figs on February 10, 2004
    hey! It was fine! I liked it! So...what was that scar from anyway? And please hurry with the next chapter!!! I WANT MORE!!! Thanks, Liz
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on February 02, 2004
    OMG.... that chapter was awful!!! THEOKE OKE UP!?!?!?! Hell is freezing over this instant! *goes to the corner of her room a cries her eyes out*... update *sniff* soon *sniff*
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 02, 2004
    Chapter 17... I guess Draco's decision not to tell her about the bet came back to bite him on the butt!!! You really can't blame Hermione for being angry with him, but I wish that she wouldn't have left him!!!

    This chapter was very sad for Hermione, but it was a bit sad for Draco too, she became so withdrawn & shut him out!!! I really do hope that they will work things out bse tse they really are good together & will need each other later on!!!

    What happened to Hermione's waist? Will that be gotten into later?

    Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on February 02, 2004
    Great chapter... it was dark, but I like that. I don't think a rational Hermione would have acted that way, but let's face it, with everything going on, she isn't being rational. I hope she wises up in the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on February 02, 2004
    Wow, long chappie, Okay, I have a list of points to comment on, First, the Bent Ministry official comment was funny. The cockyness Draco displayed was in true Malfoy form. Next, Hermione's family were Muggles, not Mudbloods, just a technicality. The scene where she had to see her family for herswas was well written and made me cry. Boo Hoo, I loved the fact that she stood her ground with Voldie. The truth spell was ingenious to use against Draco. All in all I loved your update. I understand it tood awhile and I was happy that the chapter was fairly long and had a lot of information to offer, which made the wait worth it. One other thing, just from writer to writer, k, how many rewrites did this take, and what is the average you do? I'm rewriting my next chapter and I'm stuck, so, I was just wondering if I'm the only one who agonizes over rewrites like the project is my baby. I'm sure you simpathize. Sorry so long. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - amanda on January 27, 2004
    please hurry wit a new 1 im type desperte to know plz
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  • From ANON - Jeanette on January 26, 2004
    good job!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 23, 2004
    Great Chapter, and such a quick update too! Hurray! I find that sometimes it helps to get what you've written out of the way. Although you already have a layout of what is to happen it's like starting with a clean slate. I am sure the chapters will come to you more easily and quickly than you make it sound. This is a erfuerful fic, and indeed great writing. I will be checking in everyday!
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  • From ANON - Merrideth on January 22, 2004
    PLEASE DO NOT TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE!!!! I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!

    merrideth
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on January 22, 2004
    Aww... This is great! Update soon! And D/Hr should get pregnant! That would be awesome!
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  • From ANON - Liz Figs on January 22, 2004
    OMG! I love it! You should DEFINITELY use my idea! Or...I could write a mini scene and you could use that in your story?....no. It was a suggestion for YOU to write. Go ahead!

    Thanks! I loved it!
    --Liz
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 22, 2004
    Chapter 16.... I do like the rings that they gave each other & the things that she said about forever!!!

    Sounds like The Dark Ones are taking over a lot now:( I do hope that when all is said & done Hermione will be the only one in her person!!!

    So, what's going to happen with the bet? Will Draco tell her about it? The way I look at it is that this will be their chance to be more open, though I know her friends won't approve!!!

    I do LOVE the way you write Draco!!! The love that he has for Hermione, the guilt he felt about what he almost did, this is a great character!!! Glad to see that he got Voldy's okay on their relationship;-) Ijustjust waiting for them to kill them all & be done with it!!!

    I will be watching for your next update!!! Til chapter 17, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Liz Figs on January 20, 2004
    Hey, it's me again, and I just had this idea for your fic. It's competely a "oh, wouldn't that scenario be interesting" so NOT doing it is probably whats going to happen. It's just a thought.

    Okay, Voldie calls all his DEs for a meeting--in the middle of, let's say, a tuesday afternoon (completely random on purpose), during a Double Potions of Slyth. and Griff. Reactions occur. What do they do? Draco, Snape AND Herm can't all just leave--It'd be suspiscious! So what happens? I had a couple ideas. Maybe Snape jynxes them (subtly, blaming it on their potions) and insists they come into his office to take a medicine that would take a couple hours to "reverse" the "effects"? And he has to stay wiht them? I dont' know. It was just an idea, that fit with this scenario pretty well. You see, this is when I wish people could write fanfics off of fanfics! lol Use it, don't use it, it was just an idea.

    Could you email me when you finish the next chapter? I LOVE IT!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 20, 2004
    Great Chapter, and of course I'm still reading... it's such a great fic! There were a few small spelling errors in this chapter but nothing too major. I was surprised by the Ginny interaction, but glad it happened. I was just afraid that a head was going to appear in the fire the whole time.... OH NO! LOL! Anyways keep up the great work! I will be reading!
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