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Reviews for Light and Dark of the Raven

By : SlytherinSecret
  • From ANON - Liz Figs on January 19, 2004
    OMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

    A couple grammatical mistakes, but I do them too. I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 19, 2004
    I bet Ron was Peter Pan, right? I figured you wanted us to guess, anyway, good chapter, nice and long. When will the next dark revel be? It's been awhile. I'd like to see alittle more of the darker Hermione. Oh well. Post soon Let us know how you did on your A levels.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 19, 2004
    Chapter 15.... There was a lot of emotion between Hermione & Draco & I really do hope that they will be able to stay together when all is said & done!!! This whole thing has been hard on them & they deserve to be together & happy!!! I am glad that Ginny knows, it's one less person for them to have to worry about!!! Til chpater 16, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on January 19, 2004
    That last chapter was great. I love both their outfits... Pansy's was very suiting. Update soon... I love it!
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  • From ANON - katie on January 18, 2004
    your a great writer

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  • From ANON - PaganPoetry on January 17, 2004
    And so I finally get round to reviewing this. *hangs head* probably should have done so ages ago but kept forgetting to or not being online. Anyhoo, as you already know tis great and the idea for the originals is good so you'd better get thinking up where it's going! :P
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  • From ANON - Amy E. on January 12, 2004
    Hey,
    I just wanted to say how awesome this fic is!! I've been following it since you started, its really amazing! It's so trattrating that they cant openly declare their love for eachother! You write it so well, i feel like im a student at hogwarts or something! Please please update, I cant wait for the next chapters!!! Thanks for writing such a great fic!
    - Amy
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 09, 2004
    Great Chapter! I've been checking in everyday as I absolutely love this fic. It's so dark, I would die in Hermione's position. Hope you update more soon!
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  • From ANON - carr on January 09, 2004
    I love this story, as of tmomemomet ist is by far my favorite. As for not knowing where your going with it, thats half the fun. It will keep the suspense up and suprise you as much as all of your faithful readers!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 08, 2004
    Chapter 14...... Truth be told, I like your
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on January 08, 2004
    AWW! I love this story SOOO much! I didn't enjoy the LM/Vold./Hr part... YUCK! Update soon though! I love the moments between Hermione and Draco!
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 08, 2004
    Short and sweet and to the point. "A few hours later"? wow, now that is talent, to bad you couldnt embelish more. The thought of the Ancients and all, thats how we are supposed to write, let it flow from your mind, not cage it to make it something you originaly intended, that would get boring, wouldn't it? Keep writing ill keep posting
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on January 05, 2004
    Chapters 12-13...... This just keeps getting better & better!!! Sounds like Draco would LOVE to rip his father & Voldy to bits for what they did to Hermione!!! I am really curious to see how he reacts the next time he has to face his father!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 03, 2004
    Thank you for changing the warning. I appreciate it immensly. Keep writing, I really do like your story.
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  • From ANON - Jules on January 03, 2004
    Yikes!

    Real Life spins me crazily out of control for the holidays and you have proceeded to write a novel! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while but I have just had the extreme pleasure of getting to read 8 chapters in succession. Totally Fabulous.

    I really like how you continue to explore Hermione's powers. Althought I do not like it - I thit iit is spot on that even if Voldie goes ga-ga for Sexy!Slytherin!Hermione, Lucius would not be impressed and see her as a threat.

    I am also really enjoying Draco rmoirmoine's relationship. As they deal with their attraction for each other but also as they both have to figure out what a real, mature relationship entails. Neither has had one before. Learning to trust, communicate and comfort each other is their biggest challenge. I am such a romantic but I love seeing it.

    Good Smut (wish there was more of it)!

    The S& M wasn't that bad; I think it was more that to Lucius and Voldie it was kinky sex, but to Hermione (& Draco) it was an assault. I hope that you are able to write more about how this (can) strengthen/effect D & Hr's relationship.

    As always I look forward to more.

    Jules
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