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Reviews for Light and Dark of the Raven

By : SlytherinSecret
  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 03, 2004
    WOW! Both Lucius and Voldt get getting it on with Hermione. It turned me on with Lucius doing the nasty with her, but Voldemort had to go. I wouldn't have minded it if it were another handsome Death Eater or if Voldemort was in his Tom Riddle appearance. Poor Draco. He had to see that stuff. :( Anyway, awesome chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 02, 2004
    I really dont mean to sound like a bitch, pledontdont get me wrong, just many people out there are very confused about BSDM as well as their own sexuality and they need to understand the whole world differences between rape and BSDM aka SM
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 02, 2004
    I must first say the chapter was good and it of course was needed for plot. I would like to address your warning though about it being an SandM chapter. That in no way was SandM. SandM you need a Sadist (dominant) and a Masochist (submissive), both willing participants. That chapter was rape and should be labeled as such, not SandM. Otherwise it was a good chapter. If you do want to incorporate any SM role play, since that is all it is, consult a few references on the subject. Or another fanfic such as Flame and Moonlight by LadyMalfoy. I will still read and review of course, but please do us all in the SandM community a favor, we try to get past the sterotypes, and relabel this chapter as rape. I understand that she was 'willing' for her role but even at that the submissive is the one whom acually has the control of those particular situations. Thank You.
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on December 27, 2003
    OHHH! Update soon! I love it!
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  • From ANON - massarokas on December 19, 2003
    oooooi!!! sorry for note reviewing for such a long time... ^^; Great as always! keep up the good work!

    ciao!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 16, 2003
    Chapter 11.......s iss iss is such an ass!!! I am glad to see how his influence over Draco has been stopped!!!

    Gotta LOVE Albus!!! That note was too cute;-)

    I do hope that things will work out for the Order so that they can work out for Hermione & Draco!!!

    Til Chapter 12, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - s*j on December 16, 2003
    i laughed out loud when i read the part abt the address.. "the bed"
    its definitely damn funny!!! hilarious! more updates pls! :)
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  • From ANON - Carr on December 09, 2003
    Love the story, just can't wait fo rmore. Great Job
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 09, 2003
    Pansy is a SLIME!!! This really is going to be hard on Draco & Hermione, but, as they say if it's too easy it's not worth the bother!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Zoe on December 05, 2003
    great story! keep going!
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  • From scholz03 on December 02, 2003
    Hello! (=


    Um...interesting story. I like it...besides all the fluffiness... (= ...which I actually like, but this story is actually pretty good. Just a couple of things, though.

    First...and I have noticed that you haven't done this in a while...when someone in the story says, "Something," why did you 'used' to spell it, "Summat"...?

    It just bothered me a little...there were a few other 'spellings of words' that you used...I thought it made the characters sound like they were from Southern U.S. states or something.

    I really do like this story. The plot is great! (= I just hope that you update sooner than later! (=
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 02, 2003
    What an evil way to leave us hanging;-) I really did like the confrontation between Harry & Draco!!! Can't wait to see what is going to happen!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - lily nicolee evans on November 28, 2003
    like i said very very very very good story i love it so much please update soon
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  • From ANON - massarokas on November 22, 2003
    I actually speccially liked your sex scene... oO LOL! but that's because i was afraid that you were gonna use the 'pussy' word.. I dont like that, it makes it feel like .. porn to me. oO But you didnt! and becides that, you could feel the love and 'having fun' in the.. act.. LOL

    really good! ^^ hope you treat us well, and give us more... ^^

    btw, about that 'pussy' thing, that's one of the reasons why now i practically only read yaoi/slash... :u stu story was the first one i read for a looooong time... ^___^

    ciao
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  • From ANON - Draco_Fan on November 20, 2003
    I really liked Hermione's look. It's sexy and mysterious... just like Draco said. And the sex scene was a little rushed, I kinda figured you didn't have much experience... but that's what practice is for. Just write more sex-scenes! Update soon. I really like it!
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