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Reviews for Secrets In The Eyes Of The Enemy

By : Hunnypeach
  • From ANON - Redskye on January 27, 2006
    Wow! I've read both. The first was just 'oh Merlin!' You evil person to end on such a note!:-p Can't wait to see where you take Jaden/Romeo.
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  • From ANON - Dora on January 26, 2006
    OH MY GOD!!!!! YOU'VE MADE ME CRY WITH THE STORY, IT ALWAYS MAKES ME CRY WHEN HERMIONE IS SAD. YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER. KEPP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!! YOU ARE TOO GODD AT IT!!! :D
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  • From ANON - Carol on January 08, 2006
    hi, i have read both stories and i love them. Are you ever gonna finished this one?. It is a great story!! Please update.
    It would be nice like sam says that you put kind of a journey to the past were the twins can see their parents. thank you for posting. Carol
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  • From ANON - G on January 07, 2006
    Oh that was good

    I so need to know what happens next. That last chapter was edge of your seat. I'm still on the edge wanting to know whats going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - Shellz on January 06, 2006
    OMG! Your stories are awesome. However you reall really really really doneed to get on with the upates. It's not kind to leave your readers hanging in rude suspense like this! Now with that said, I hope you've scurried off and have started writing furiously so that our minds can be put at rest.
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  • From ANON - Priscilla on January 01, 2006
    Freakin update the story if you start a story finish it its driving me mad

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  • From ANON - sunn-e on December 29, 2005
    its a relli gud storie but i was wonderin when u were gonan update it.
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  • From ANON - sam on December 10, 2005
    hey,
    i just finished reading your 'In the eyes of the enemy' and its sequel.
    they are absolutely spiffing,incredible work
    i am a little intersted in reading stories by many writers over the net and have often noticed some flaws that may have escaped their scrutiny and i would luv 2 tel u that your work is very good compared to many others i have read
    i seldom come across such good works so i thought it would b appropriate to congratulate u for ur work.
    i would also like to give some points which i have enjoyed and a few which may need your attention
    1.the way in which u recite the story is good
    2.ur explanations of their feelings proves your writing skills
    3.the plot u have spinned is also intersting
    4.the way the first part ended is interesting
    5.the way u hav written the sexual scenes and romantic scenes are very much fuelling the imagination
    plz give some time to check whether wat i am saying below needs your attention or not
    1.please give paragraph or indents in order to facilitate reading
    2.if you think neccessary try a little focus on other couples
    think about these suggestions too,
    a future or a past travel(like the one in harrys 2nd year) for the twins that is, then how about some sexual references of the lead pair and i would greatly suggest a much more detailed future of the twins and the other characters(of the younger age) which may require another sequel
    so in all i request you to continue your splendid work and give atleast two more sequels to this story
    with a lot of love,
    sam
    p.s.if i have hurt your feelings or abilities please forgive me and consider this for your welfare,luv,sam
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  • From Cheile on November 29, 2005
    :boggle:

    :flail:

    is Snape gonna save Hermione's butt already?! get on with it!! next chapter please!! arg!!
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  • From ANON - jo on November 27, 2005
    This fic is so great! Please update the suspense is killing me! :D
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  • From ANON - Tngirl on November 21, 2005
    I love your stories! I've read them both straight through and I'm waiting for more on this one! I don't know when you last posted, but please update this story soon!! You've done a great job of storytelling! You have a few spelling and grammatical errors that I saw, but not many. Anyway, I'll be looking for more soon!! Thanks!
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  • From Lilbell on November 21, 2005
    I love it keep writing :)
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  • From ANON - Victoria on November 11, 2005
    !!!Please-Please-Please-Please-Please-Please-Please-Please-Please-Please!!!
    Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!Update!!!

    CAN YOU PLEASE!!! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP. UPDATE!!!!

    Sorry about the dramatic outbrust but I was wondering if you could be so very nice as to update.

    ---SECRETS IN THE EYES OF THE ENEMY---

    Because I have been Wating(\/)the last time you update was (2004-04-30) So PLEASE UPDATE!!!
    (??)

    !!!Fan of your Stories(Big Creppy grin)!!!
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  • From ANON - mary_pickles on November 08, 2005
    Please put something more! I'm totally addicted to this fan fic!

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  • From ANON - Lucii on October 23, 2005
    That was incredible. I really enjoyed your fic. The first and this one as well. I finished it in 2 days. Non stop reading. Absolutely incredible! PLEASE keep writing...i think its an amazing plot and story line...please doo keep updating! Fantastic!!!Im not just saying that...HONESTLY! PLEASE KEEP WRITING..and i will keep reviewing!:D
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