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From ANON - on July 25, 2004
Very intresting story. I look forward to reading more of it.
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From ANON - traydr vic on July 19, 2004
Another great chapter. As usual you are right - I loved the
chapter, but hated to see that happen to Hermione. You
never disappoint - another twist! I should have seen it
coming since you set the stage earlier, but you throw so
much out there it gives you a lot of latitude. What's the
deal with Ron? bright blue eyes, darkening, turning green?
Is he disappointed because Hermione is worried about
Harry, or is he just concerned for Harry. Dumbledore,t
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old bastard, why can't he just stay away from Hermione?
Great dialogue and action! I am definitely not giving up on
Harry/Hermione. He has a girlfriend and she will probably
run back to Draco, but I still think Harry loves her, and
she him. Despite her history with Draco and the Snape/Lily
stuff (or perhaps because of it) I know they will reconcile
and true love will prevail!! Please?
Oh, and I apologize for what I said about TBOTBN. It was
uncalled for, I was just pissed because I thought you
posted 2 updates in a row. Sorry!!

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From ANON - cdog21 on July 19, 2004
Alright i've been waiting what 2 weeks for the next chapter
and then you give me this! I'm just playing i loved the whole
thing the fight scenes especially. Things were going so
smooth and i thought our heroes would finally get a second
chance. However, things are not what they seem. It would
appear that Harry has already moved on to our dear hufflepuff
Maia. And when i look back at it, when Hermoine abouabout
to say "I Lo..." i think Harry already knew what she was about
to say that was why he did what he did. It doesn't matter
anyway because i'm just a viewer, its like yelling at the girl in
the movie to not go in there because the killer is in there.
Great chapter, but i hope we dont have to wait so long for the next one.

P.S. Have Harry do some real damage to one of the baddies in his story and dont forget to add the backstory between him and maia soon or in his story. Which ever you feel is better :)
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From ANON - Classic Cowboy on July 19, 2004
oooh there ya go Hermione, had the chance with him but blew it off to go screw the ferret, smooth, I tell ya smooth!

but I really don't know why I like this story, as said, I usually can'tn stn stumach the thought of Hermione/Draco, but I like this for some reason.

dispite my least favorite pairing, great stuff! get the feeling next chapter will involve Hermione getting some pain relief from jackass ... err Draco.

update fast!
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From ANON - star on July 18, 2004
this was a great chapter, but i want harry and hermione to get together!!!! More!!!!!
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From ANON - dragonlady sakura on July 18, 2004
*Screams and flops down to the floor* You are the master..or mistress of torture! Now I feel doubly terrible for poor Hermione. She's right, especially about the Dumbledore part. And if anyone *CoughHarrycoughRon* found out what he had done with her...hell would break out. Lol. All I'm saying is update soon for the love of all humanity! And my sanity. ^_^

P.S. Kickass chappie!!
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From ANON - Miki on July 18, 2004
Perfect!!!! I'm so glad that she's realized that sex can be horribly destructive when you are not honest with yourself and others. Oh well, she had to go through the motions to learn this. It's called life. I've made a few misjudgements myself...but I never repeated them once I realized where I went wrong. At 16/17 it is often so difficult to determine what the correct path is. You know what they say about hind-sight. Hermione needs some much-earned solitude. Oh, oh! Is that Draco I see rearing his ugly head(s) (sorry Draco, you know I think you're adorable)?

I don't care if yost lst late...as long as it's terrific! Worth the wait. :)
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From ANON - Vival80 on July 18, 2004
Exelent chapter, the power Harry has is incredible, also the realization of Hermione that she have been used and that that make her loose Harry is great, I hope that you can still make this story a H/Hr(I am a H/Hr shiper), maybe if Hermione confess to Harry? Any way the Draco/Hermione couple is wrong, Draco is a bastard(good work making him so twisted) and Hermione need somebody that love her, not use her.

Any way hope you can write next chapter soon.

And if you put your stories in anyother place please first inform in your next chapter or something so we can continue to read your work

John
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From ANON - keys on July 18, 2004
It's okay that Harry has a gf because Hermione belongs with Draco in my totally unbaised opinion lol. No, like I said before even if Hermione does end up with Harry (although I pray she doesn't) this has been on of the best Draco/Hermione fics I have read. And trust me I have read a lot. Great job on the chapter.
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From ANON - Angela on July 18, 2004
Boooo!!

This SUCKS!!

Lol. No, the only thing that sucks about this is that there is no more chapters up for me to read right now.

:(.

So get cracking and UPDATE.

Angela
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From ANON - autumnphilia on July 17, 2004
Wow, excellent chapter. Good pacing, character development, great turn with Hermione's self realizations and the appearence of competition. I am actually not sure where this story is going, and that is such a pleasent surprise. Really well-written, your characters stay in the character you give them consistently--no sudden unexplained changes. One of the best stories on this site. And hot too. Whooo *winks*
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From ANON - AriadneElda on July 17, 2004
I'm so glad you updated! Great chapter! Having read the Death Eaters' attack in TBOTBN, it was very interesting reading it from another POV. Poor Hermione, I wonder if Dumbledore regreted the sex "lesson" he gave her, seeing her reaction. And that bitch Lestrange, getting away once again. How I wish Rowling will kill her in the next books. So, Draco, I suppose, did nothing during the attack. Just remained safely in that room in the dungeons, eh? Given the way you finished the chapter, it makes me think that Hermione is beginning to have second thoughts about their "relationship" and wishing she could be with Harry. BTW, you said the scene between Snape and Lily is going to crop up again. In Harry's story, should I guess? Harry will be raging mad if he ever hears about that! He's going to kill Snape, lol! Can't wait to read the next chapters of this story and TBOTBN as well!
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From ANON - AriadneElda on July 14, 2004
I just found your story and read all of it in one go. Very captivating, very well-written, with the properly balanced amounts of darkness, angst, sex, plot and humour. Most of the characters I found very much in character, especially Draco, Harry and Ron. As for Hermione... I'm not sure if she'd ever act like that, but then there would be no story, and that would really not do at all, since I so much loved the story! Dumbledore was quite out of character, though. I was not shocked at all by his behaviour, just surprised, but I suppose the kind old wizard would be rather shocked himself by what you made him do, lol! However, I have to say you wrote his part very nicely. I really can't believe how you managed to make the old man seem so sensual. I also found Snape a bit out of character too. I mean, I don't think he would trust Hermione so easily with such a personal secret. Or perhaps I was hoping to see some "action" between e twe two. Ah, yes, I was rather disappointed too, that Bill Weasley didn't sleep with Hermione. Am I so perverted that I'd like to see her having sex with a couple of other guys too? As if Draco isn't enough, lol. Anyway, congratulations, it's a great story. I only wish I had discovered it when it was over, because now I can't wait to see what happens next, and patience is not one of my traits, lol. I hope you'll update soon!
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From OddDoll on July 08, 2004
I really enjoyed this story. It broke out of the SS/HG rut in a good way. SQUICK - Dumbledore. Anyway, are you intending to write more?
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From ANON - traydr vic on July 05, 2004
Hey, no fair! 2 TBONTBN's in a row ;o). Thanks for your notes on my review, although I am still not sure I am really getting it. Anyway, things are going my way for the moment. Lot's of hints about Hermione's romantic feelings for Harry mixed in with all the friendship stuff. I can't truly believe she would giv e up the friendship/love stuff for the exciting, forbidden sex with Draco. I think she can have exciting sex with Harry to, if not forbidden. Anyway, I am so happy she went with Harry instead of staying in the closet with Draco. More enforcement of my hopefull outcome. Still, you are full of twists and turns, so I don't take anything for granted, but so far I am loving the story again. As I keep saying, you are a master storyteller and you keep us enthralled even when we don't know what you will do next. I must tell you however that I am not a fan of TBONTB. The reason I read fan fictions is if they follow the trio, and Nott et al are such minor characters (at least so far) that I can't get interested in them. Sorry. So how about 2 Subjugations in a row? Fair is fair.
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