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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck
  • From scwolf10k on June 30, 2004
    Now this was interetsing! Death Eaters strike!! Why do I get the feeling that Malfoy is going to ruin everything? And where was Ron? Why didn't he follow Harry and Hermione? Anyway, it's great to see Snape acts like a 'normal' person for once. He got.. umm.. panicked? At least he told the students to hide! But where did he go? Meeting 'old friends'?
    Oh, forgot to say.. I really-really liked the position the trio woke up in. Nice one! Ron always making himself at home...lol!!
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  • From ANON - Miki on June 28, 2004
    Of course consensual rape is an oxymoron - I was making a funny! Oh well, there goes my career as a comedic writer. You may not be aware of it, but your Draco seems to be longing for Hermione and hates it. It makes the reader (me) want him to change (at least a little) and find happiness. While I like Harry, I've never found him particularly sexy. Draco, while scary at times, is oh so sexy! Hermione feels guilty for the pleasure she has while she with him, but keeps going back for more. This seems to make Draco more possessive of her. After all, what guy doesn't want to keep his source of exciting sex all to himself?

    I don't feel that Harry was weak. When Hermione wanted him to perform an Unforgivable, he was adamant about not doing. It also takes a certain amount of fortitude to stay angry at someone. (A feat I'm personally unable to accomplish.) So, I don't exactly see how Harry's been weak.

    I like your latest chapter. Hermione stands by her friendship. Poor Draco, just realizing he's been a sex toy...oh well, c'est la vie!

    HUFFLEPUFF!!! (roaring in outrage - Leonine pride, you see) Just for that I'm not reviewing again. Well, maybe after a chapter or two, when I'll probably be so happy to see an update you'll warrant instant forgiveness. :)
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on June 28, 2004
    Yeah I know it's been a while since I reviewed, but I wanted to wait till you
    got to a certain stage in the story. And I must say things have gone pretty
    good so far. There was a little fumble in like the first four of five chapters
    because they were still written like the previous version of the story. Some
    things would be said and the chapter that was concerinig that item were
    removed in the update. I have an idea that Harry's, Ron's, and Hermoine's
    stories are really gonna be tied together. Especially if you actually kept the
    removed chapters. Also, before I forget to mention I liked the chapter and
    I completly forgot about Voldemort, but of course I would because it was
    that chapter was in the original version. Anyway keep up the good work and
    I can't wait for this story to wrap up so you can get started on Harry. And a
    suggestion don't let the Draco thing be revealed until Harry's story wil will be
    much more dramatic when you actually think about it

    CDOG21
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  • From ANON - Marc on June 27, 2004
    Brilliant, finally the sort of story I researched.
    Get any 'adventure' you like as lo,g as they keep soome real objective, target in mind.
    I mean, tiil now, none of Hermione nor HArry, nor even Draco had a meaning in their actions, it was purely instinct.
    Now, there is a target.
    I must admit I liked this fic, long before, bbut now I love
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    I just hope they (specifically Hermione) won't change their mind like some mad weathercock ('girouette' in french).
    I'll follow you, you're in my favorites for a long time already.
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on June 27, 2004
    Wan ian interestig turn of events! Gets better and better every time. :) Question: Is Draco developing feelings for Hone?one? The reason I ask is because of him trying to keep her from going with Harry. Did he really want to protect her or did he just want to get laid again? Anywho, great story as always. Please continue! :)
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  • From ANON - jm007 on June 27, 2004
    i really like this story! i hope you make it d/hr though, every draco/hermione/harry story i've read seems to end up with harry/hermione.. and i like your draco, despite his nastiness :)
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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on June 27, 2004
    very nice update!

    drat, no smut next chapter either, but the one after that? hmmm now the question is will it be D/Hr or H/Hr? before hand I would say D/Hr no doubt, but lately I'm beginning to wonder which way this is going to be leaning. I have to say normally I don't like D/Hr stories (do to my overwhelming hatred for a certain ferret) but this one's really captivated me. great story, great sex, so all around two thumbs up.

    great job and update really soon!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on June 26, 2004
    Don't think I have forgot you! Computer problems have me slacking off in the reviewing department. Anyway, enough of my sob story...what can I say about this chapter. Well, I'm sure you're sick of all the praises (sike) but helluva chapter. The reconcillation scene was touching and I'm happy for YouYou've been killing me for months with all the tension between the trio! And I loved it. Lol. Also the attack was nicely done and since I'm following this and the "Notts story" I enjoy going back and forth following the intertwing plot twists. Brilliant as always.

    Wow, awfully talkative aren't I? ^_~
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  • From ANON - Ashes on June 26, 2004
    Yay! Well, she's turned away from Draco, wants to marry Harry, and they're having a good ole adventure. ;) Perhaps it will end in lovely Harry & Hermione fluff! (Note : NO COMPLAINTS HERE) :D
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on June 26, 2004
    I so want Hermione to be with Harry. You keep dangling that in front of me. It sort of seems like she's started to figure herself out, or at least figuring out what she doesn't want. The almighty orgasim can be a powerful thing, but maybe, just maybe you are going to let her realise that there can be so much more. I almost got a sense from Draco that there might be some actual feelings forming there too? That's kind of scarey. Harry is still a mystery to me. Well, glad AFF is back and you had a chance to update. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - star on June 26, 2004
    what duck???!!! ahaha!!!! btw great chapter!!
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  • From ANON - keys on June 26, 2004
    I think you are doing a great job with Draco. He is very in character. I really do love this story a long with the other one. It's very cool to read the same stary from different sides. And no, I don't think Draco would give up on Hermione that easy. Kepp up the good work.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on June 14, 2004
    Thanks for the Harry/Hermione (and the trio) stuff! I loved it
    when Harry decked Draco. Made my day!! At the same time
    I can almost agree with Hermione that she was really the one
    who instigated the
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  • From scwolf10k on June 14, 2004
    Disks might kill someone some day. I lost my stories the same way once. Thankfully I had them online:) But I had to rewrite the chapters that weren't uploaded. eh! That's technology! Ok, back to the main subject...lol
    It's good to see that you've updated the story:) Now, is Draco scared of Harry? I sensed that. I don't know if I'm right or wrong. But he seemed scared that he didn't use his wand or his hands to give Harry a reply. Besides, wasn't he supposed to go to his part of detention after Hermione's?
    And there's another thing that crossed my mind. When you wrote about Ron: "His fingers clenched around his wand, deep in his pocket." Was that the time he took Harry's and Hermione's wands?
    And one last question (being investigative huh? sorry!! but it's so interesting!!!) Draco didn't have the chance to use his wand, but the others didn't bother to use their's either. Why? Was it because Ron took them already? But they didn't notice that until he told them about that in the classroom. So...?
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  • From ANON - Ashes on June 13, 2004
    The only flaw in this chapter is that I wish it could have been longer. :D And I root for Harry!!
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