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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck
  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on March 26, 2004
    *Mouth drops to the floor* I've been away from my computer for a while and haven't reviewed...glad I'm back! DAMN this chapter was outrageous! Hell, even Myrtle got the shock of her life--death. My hats off to you yet again.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on March 23, 2004
    Thanks for this new chapter. Your writing skills are amazing. You a great at dialogue, action, suspense and of course some excellent (if kinky) sex scenes. Now what's this about Draco? How can Hermoine have romantic feelings for him when she hated him a couple of chapters ago? I know love and hate are close together, but come on. And I doubt if even you can convince me that Draco is in this for any more that the sex and to humiliate Hermoine. Harry's "sweet and gentle and comforting? You make him sound like a bore just because they had straight sex instead of sharing it with a broomstick. And you are bringing Ron into the mix? I thought you were cutting him out. Or am I reading too much in? Anyway, can't wait for the next chap. What are these new skills that Hermoine wants to try out for her learning experience? What is Myrtle going to think when oineoine brings Draco in -she wants Harry. Will she tell everyone? Can't wait to see where you go with this. Sorry I would do more but I have to get to work. Thanks again - keep it coming (no pun intended).
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on March 22, 2004
    I'm so glad you're showing some of Hermione's internal dialogue. She questioning herself finally. Her conclusions will of course be up to you, but at least you have her now processing things. I take he the three stories will inter-twine? Should be interesting. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - observer on March 22, 2004
    My vote is for Harry, I had almost given up on this story. Glad to know there was another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Ashes on March 21, 2004
    Now don't get me wrong I like some smut of course, thats why I'm spending time at aff. Heh. Thanks for updating, this chapter actually made me realize that I can relate to Hermione. After the first time things sort of spin out of control until your sleeping with your eighth guy since you turned fourteen, and he has a girlfriend. *End rant*
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 21, 2004
    Poor Hermione, she is so confused. Hope Draco isn't planning on hurting her or anything. In saying hurting her, I mean bad hurt not good hurt.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on March 20, 2004
    Whooa - you're back! I am so glad you decided to continue the story. Great job on the re-write. Like a skilled surgeon carefully removing the cancerous cells (not a good anology, since the parts you removed were also very good - maybe for another fic?). Anyway, the story seems much tighter now. Can't wait to see where you are going with this. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Riri on March 16, 2004
    Me likes muchly!
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  • From ANON - Ashes on March 15, 2004
    Very very good. But the whole Dumbledore thing grossed me out quite a bit. I think I'll go re-read the Harry and Hermione bit. Oh, I hope they get together!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2004
    Well damn. A lemon series with plot. And a decent one at that. Few and far between, these. I thank you for producing this one, though I gotta admit that my mind can't quite make that Leap for Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Hermione Cosplayer on March 14, 2004
    I really like how you edited this one. It's a lot cleaner now and it is much easier to follow. Also, the story fits the title for all of the chapters now. I'm really glad you reworked it but I hope the other chapters come back in some other form somtime. :) (the Dumbledore chapter is still squicky...but I'm glad you left it in, it belongs in the story.)
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  • From ANON - tabitoo on March 12, 2004
    I like your story. Did Malfoy cast some kind of charm on Hermione to make her start acting this way?
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  • From ANON - Riri on March 04, 2004
    :)
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  • From ANON - darksaber on February 28, 2004
    My vote is that you split it into two....Being a H/Hr shipper, I'd like to see the end result being between the two. I like the idea of splitting Ron's end off onto a separate arc though now that he and Harry aren't in conflict anymore.
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  • From pixiezombie on February 28, 2004
    Well, duckie, it all depends on where you really want the story to go. It sounds like you already have plans for the ending if you were able to estimate the chapters you figured it would take to resolve it. Ron's is the easiest story to spin off, and it sounds like you've already reached your decision on it. From this point you could make Hermione's story go D/Hr or H/Hr. Your fans are going to be split on which pairing they find more interesting anyhow. Some of them are hoping for Hermione to get back to Harry, and some of us want to see where things could go with Draco. Since you can't please everyone, you have to go in the direction YOU are most interested in writing. Right now all the characters are very involved in themselves, which allows you to diverge the stories however you want. So that in mind I'll throw you some random suggestions to ponder about the characters rather than try to dictate the direction of your story. I'm not looking for you to answer any of them, but maybe one of them will give you an idea that helps you decide whether you want to split the stories or not.

    1. From Harry's perspective, what will he need to assuage his insecurities and allow him to feel loved? Could he still feel that with Hermione if he led eed everything that she has been doing? If you do intend to put him back with Hermione what will have to happen to make them both secure enough to handle a relationship with one another, rather than allowing their conflicting prms ams and emotional states to destroy any union between them? Does Harry have a hidden wild side of his own to discover? Does he need a strong person to bring him a sense of stability or will he find a strength inside himself?

    2. From Hermione's perspective, what is her final goal in this quest for self and sexual exploration? mighmight not consciously have one for herself, but eventually the activities she's engaging in must shape her development somehow. Is she unknowingly looking for a man who is going to be strong and in control of their relationship? Will she develop a taste for control instead? Does she need a certain degree of recklessness in potential partners after these wild liasons? Will she decide that she wants something tamer? Will she develop feelings for anyone that either draw her further into this arrangement or lead her away from it? Other than her self-respect, is this arrangement affecting her respect for any of those around her?

    3. From Draco's point of view, is Hermione the only one who is entranced by the taboo of their activities toer? er? Does Draco gain anything in particular from his arrangement with Hermione other than merely getting off? Will Draco gain some respect for Hermione? Will Draco become disgusted with her need for debasement? Does Draco have any hidden needs fbasebasement or being out of control? Would anything make Draco a bit less of an SOB? Would something make him more of one? Does Draco have any insecurities or wants that are going to affect this arrangement?

    If you want to keep a Harry/Hermione/Draco triangle, I'd keep the story lines together. If you feel that you have more interest in giving Harry a story and journey of his own, then by all means split them. I don't know if any of my play questions will help spark anything for you; but I've got full confidence that, however you continue, the stories will be excellent.
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