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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

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  • From ANON - ann on April 20, 2005
    more! more! more!

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  • From scwolf10k on April 12, 2005
    Wheeeeeeeeeeeee!! I've finished reading it!! wahoo!!
    I'm reviewing each chapter separately :)

    Chapter 25 -

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  • From ANON - Bean on April 02, 2005
    I could write for hours on your story, but I guess most of it has already been written by others, so I'll just write a few impressions:
    1. I loved the story. I felt deeply moved by it, and just couldn't stop reading. One of the main reasons is that the characters are credible. I'm actually glad I caught it when it was already finished.
    2. I particularly liked the psychological analysis of Hermione's feelings, and the description of how she goes down, but then realises what she's doing to herself, and recovers her dignity back.
    3. Regarding the controversial Dumbledore chapter, I was slightly shocked, but it plays a role in the story, and isn't entirely gratuitious, so I'd leave it as it is.
    4. I also loved Ginny' role. Indeed, there's material for a separate story. Is it allowed to make fan-fics on fan-fics? (Only joking).
    5. You also did something JKR hasn't for some reason; give Hermione the support of girlfriends, which I'm sure girls need when they can't rely on their boyfriends. I liked that, specially in the last two chapters.
    5. Since book 6 is just about to come out in a few months, it would probably be wise of you not continue this story, but maybe to remake it according to what happens after The Half Bood Prince.
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  • From ANON - viz on March 25, 2005
    Length wise , this story is an undertaking, but plot wise it is absolutely brilliant. From the first chapter you had my attention. I can't wait for the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Miel on March 25, 2005
    I've read both of your fics and have been enjoying them thoroughly. The one thing that irks me however is that "The Subjugation..." has so much more potential for continuation but it's listed as completed, whereas "To Be
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  • From ANON - Miki on March 20, 2005
    I actually like the open ending.
    Teenagers are like that, they don't always "resolve" things.
    Hermione is just begining her journey into adulthood...and what a tumultuous one it is!
    Even though Malfoy helped her out in the end, I want her to be pissed at him.
    After all, he got her into the situation. She should hex him into oblivion.
    Then, again, Hermione much more forgiving than I am. :)
    Self-acceptance...and the strength to overcome desires that are self-destructive.
    Hmmm. Will we see a sequel where Hermione is the one in charge?
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  • From ANON - anon on March 17, 2005
    Why do so few authors spell check and proof read their work before posting? I only read the first chapter and just couldn't bring myself to read the rest. "Harry ed hed his..." What the f....? Some of the reviews are as bad. But that doesn't bother me half as much as authors completely failing to notice such horrible mistakes. Don't they realise that it is really painful to read through such errors?
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  • From ANON - cookie on February 26, 2005
    Please, please, please write more on Draco and Hermione's twisted relationship in Harry's story!! I'm a huge Harry/Hermione lover.
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  • From ANON - megan on February 18, 2005
    Omg, please write more. Even though some of it was rather disturbing (I was raped) I absolutely loved this. Please write more? Please? *begging now* Honestly, this was amazing.
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  • From ANON - dragonchild628 on January 27, 2005
    Is there going to be a sequal?? That would be great if there was..
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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on January 08, 2005
    wasn't expecting a epilogue so soon, but still a very nice wrap up. I am looking forward to seeing what you have in store for this series. Keep up the excellent work!
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  • From ANON - Your Husband\'s Mistress on January 05, 2005
    That was awesome. A very hot story and a very amazing story in one. I love self-discovery stories. I was rather disappointed that Harry and Hermione didn't end up together but they did have sex so it's cool. I can't wait for others.
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  • From ANON - Queen Sabreen on January 05, 2005
    LOVED IT! but I'm sad I couldn't read the last 2 chapters before.
    I had been busy, but nevertheless it was an extrodinary work of fiction.
    The writing was, of course, beautiful and there wasn't any grammar mistakes as far as I remember.
    Well what else? I'm happy that Hermione's not with harry or ron or whatever.
    I'm pleased that (even tho she isn't wit draco) she didn't hook up with anyone. It's better this way.
    Anyway I'm pretty tired right now.
    Just came from school so this review must be the stupidest thing you ever got, so I'm going to stop now.
    before I go, I must say that I never thought you were a guy.
    What a surprise.

    Keep on writing out your plot bunnies. You're a favorite of mine and I'll be off to see more of your work.

    cya

    All Hail,
    QS
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on January 03, 2005
    That was not a bad ending at all, in fact except for Malfoy staring at Hermione the year did seem to kinda start over and you actually had a happy ending or at least as happy and ending as this could get. Well with this story done the fun can begin, but before you do that I suggest you take a break for a month or two and get your thoughts together for Harry's story cause it's gonna be a whopper. And don't forget Voldie. Sayounara!!
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  • From ANON - deedee on January 03, 2005
    What?! The end?!! NO!!!!! You better have a sequel little duckie. Or I might not be so nice to the next time I take a bath:P Grrrr...I really didn't expect it to be over so soon. I thought it was going to be at least five more chapters, but maybe that was just wishful thinking on my part :)

    Anyway, you did a good job on this story. I liked the way the story was heading, even if she didn't end up with Draco (yet). It was an new journey for Hermione, and she seemed have grown from the experiences. Draco also seemed to have evolved into something, I just can't put my finger on it. Oh well. Please write more and post it very soon:)

    By the way, thanks for putting me on your email notication list:) I appreciate it, but could you put up a link to the story or chapter in the email next time? Sorry, I'm just picky. Thanks:)
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