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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck
  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on February 13, 2004
    Well, at least the trio is making some sort of headway. All those hurt feelings and such...sigh, they better make up. LOL. Great chapter and sex or no sex, I'm reading it. ^^
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 13, 2004
    Chapter 24 - It would appear that the trio are on there way to becoming friends again. My hope, well...I'll just keep that to myself. What happened at the end with Hermione, does that mean we will be entertained with another disturbing sexual encounter between Hermione and Draco? Thanks for the update.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on February 10, 2004
    Duckie - (may I call you Duckie?)

    Damn - I had a long review all written out and I
    accidentally deleted it before I could submit. Hope
    I can reconstruct it. Sorry to be so long in reviewing-
    broken leg kept me away from the PC. I really
    enjoyed your last 3 chapters. Those who criticize
    the lack of sex should realize that you aritiriting
    a story, not just a series of sexual vignettes. I love
    Harry once again being the stoic, heroic, yet very
    insecure, heart-on-the-sleeve teenager. I'm glad
    he is reconciling with Ron. What's up with our girl?
    Does she love Harry, as it first seems when she tries
    to ingratiate herself? Or is it Mr Blue Eyes (Ron, not Bill)?
    or does she just love the sexual tension she gets
    from Draco? I can only hope she and Harry will
    eventually find each other (hopeless romantic).
    Two things - Bellatrix jumping up and down and
    clapping her hands gleefully? Seems a bit out of
    character. Moaning orgasmically or cruel comments,
    maybe. Second, while I understand and accept your
    observation that canon indicates R/Hr I feel there is
    a good case for H/Hr as well. I d god go so far as to
    accept brief Ron but eventually it has to be Harry.
    We could go into examples sometime, if you would
    like. Anyhoo - great storytelling.
    Can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Tray

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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on February 07, 2004
    eh, I always thought Draco should cetch eboli and burn in hell, but that's just my personal opinion, and what he's done to Hermione in this case isn't helping him any in my b (ev (even though she does want it)

    anyway ... I really like how the characters are playing out in this, and no I would say Hermione's a horse, yet anyway, see how the story progresses then I'll revisit that ^^
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on February 06, 2004
    Interesting chapter! I wonder how they are going to react when they find out that Hermione has beoingoing Draco, and liking it!!!!! I can see the sparks flying then. LOL Great work. ;)
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on February 06, 2004
    *Wags finger* You terrible, naughty tease, you! As if biting my nails wasn't enough, you have me in suspense. Again. Thally,lly, Harry and Ron stopped acting like asses or better yet, immature boys (which they truly are) and made up. Now they need to do something about Hermione. The fur will fly when all is revealed. LOL. Love it! =D
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on February 06, 2004
    Yeah 66.6666% of the trio is back together and the other 33.3334% is almost here
    or are you just raising my hopes before you shatter them la wia window. Well
    whatever happens i am absolutely loving this story and i can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on February 06, 2004
    Chapter 23 - I may just have a glimmer of hope. Ron/Harry dialogue was very good, and to Harry for calling Ron on Risa only being 14. Interesting developments, unit next time.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on February 06, 2004
    Great Update! It's good to see the wonder duo trying to work out there problems. Even if someone had to urge them to do so. I wonder if Draco is going to keep up with his little games. Well I'm sure it will be answered in the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Wiz on February 04, 2004
    I think the story is great! Long but great! The sex scenes are pretty steamy. I loved all chapters except for the chapter with Dumbledore and Hermione. It was a little disgusting for me... Anyway, can we have more?
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on February 01, 2004
    Cool chapter. Loved seeing Draco shirtless. Hehe. Always gets my nipples hard. LOL Lemons next time, please? With Draco and Hermione. :)
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  • From ANON - Rilla on February 01, 2004
    I love your dialogue. The tension between characters is very real. I really like your take on Bill.
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  • From ANON - cdog21 on February 01, 2004
    I'm gonna keep it short and sweet great chapter once again
    i almost wish it was Harry against Draco i love it when they fight
    and funny how i said something about focusing on Ron and
    Harry for a sec and then behold Ch. 22 comes out hmm :)
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  • From shaolin on January 31, 2004
    No sex in the Hogwart's Castle huh? That's ok,
    I have the opposite problem...I can flow like
    a river when I'm writing smut, but dry
    up to a slow trickle when it comes to actual
    talking..mmm sounds like some guys I know..
    Not you duck..LOL..keep going!
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 31, 2004
    No need to apologise really. I needed to realize that I was reading too much into your story. Even though it wasn't your intial intention, it has become a characters study.

    Chapter 22 - IMO smut isn't necessary in every chapter. Ron and Harry are trying and Hermione is making an effort in her own way, hopefully they will reconcile(sp). I was hoping for a Harry and Hermione to develope a real relationship, I'm pretty sure now that will not happen. Still interesting, still reading, still reviewing...thanks.
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