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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

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  • From ANON - traydr vic on January 19, 2004
    I don't know what to say. I loved the 2 previous chapters and I am sorry I did't review them when I was in an upbeat mood. This chapter, however, has left me seriously depressed. Not just the sex act, although it was seriously depraved. It is Hermoines attitude about it. Using the imperious curse was a neat trick in the beginning, but it's really no longer necessary. She knows exactly what she is doing under the curse and is controlling it as much herself as Draco is (i.e. strip tease). OK she may have been forced to lap up the floor, but beyond that, what's the point of the curse? She is enjoying this way too much. And the fact that she enjoys the fact that she was degraded. How is she ever going to enjoy normal, loving sex? I guess my hope that she and Harry would eventually get together, which was fueled by the previous 3 chaps, is just not going to happen.

    On the up side, I love the rest of the story. I think you have done a great job flushing out your characters (with the exception of Dumbledore and Hermoine) and having them develope pretty much the way I would expect them to in canon once they start getting into the opposite sex. I think most of your sex scenes are wonderful (I love straight, consensual sex (but not rape or degrading sex). I think you show a lot of humor and passion in them. Also you quiddich match was excellent!

    Enough rambling. Maybe I'm taking this whole story too seriously. I guess it's because I love HP bHP books so much, and because of my preconceived ideas regarding H/Hr, I find your protrayal of Hermoine very hard to take. I hope at least if Harry can't find love with Hermoine he can find it with someone else - or at least have a little fun!! Thanks and please keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 17, 2004
    Wow! Whatta chapter!!!! Draco is somthing else! Lucius would probably be proud of him degrading Hermione in both a sexual and physical matter. Lucius strikes me as the type that would rape and degrade anyone he deems of lower status, and mudbloods would definitely qualify in that category. I know that Lucius is in Azkaban, but it would be cool if she began an attraction to the elder Malfoy as well. Hey, she already did Dumbledore, how about an experienced, older, not to mention sexy wizard? I'm sure Lucius would like some nookie, especially from an attractive, horny teen like Hermione! LOL Please update soon. I love the Draco/Hermione smut scnenes! *licks lips*
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  • From ANON - Apollonia on January 17, 2004
    YAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!! Hermione and Draco finally get it on!!!! And I like how demanding she was with her proposition. Usually it's the other way around. ome ome scene, awesome chapter!
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  • From ANON - Classic Cowboy on January 16, 2004
    wow that was steamy. but I agree with spaz141. she's going in a bad bad downward spiral. she's experienced sex, she needs someone to show her what its like to make love. Harry (perferably for me), Ron, Neville, some caring guy I have looked over. But Draco isn't doing her any favores besides showing her verious sexual possitions. gotta love that use of the broom though.

    keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Raven on January 16, 2004
    sorry - its been a while
    its gettin verry gud! cant believe i missed this much
    wel i cant wait for the next update
    lota of luv
    Ravn
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 16, 2004
    Ugh, Hermione, I do hope she somehow pulls hereself out of this. Why are these encounters with Draco helping Hermione feel alive? Is her motivation becoming less about control and more about feeling or maybe controlling her feelings? Does she now think that they only way to feel anything is through these vile sexual acts? I think, intentionally or not, you are effectively demontrating, just how damaging sex without love can be. This is a very interesting character study. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on January 16, 2004
    *Mouth hangs open AGAIN* Holy Crap! You sure as hell keep surprising me. Hermione and Draco are...interesting together to say the least. Poor screwed up Hermione...snif, snif.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 16, 2004
    Great Chapter! I knew it. Hermione likes the guilt free but guilt laden sex! MWAHAHA! It's just the thing for that Bossy little know-it-all! She can only feel guilty for feeling the way she does, but any of the acts she commits are guilt free because she is under the imperious! Brilliant, absolutely Bloody Brilliant! Great portrayal of Draco, although I would like him to develop a soft spot for her, what can I say, I am somewhat of a romantic.... blah, blah, blah! Thanks for updating, please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - knightj on January 20, 1920
    most of the time you have the gift of making a person feel as if they're in the story. by the way i'm reading both stories.
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  • From ANON - Serenityblack2000 on January 13, 2004
    Ron oh Ron oh Ron.... He has definatly been bitten by the sex bug.

    Really good chapter. Harry needs to swallow his pride and apologize to Ron. Anyway .

    Please continue the good work will try to wait patiently for the next chapter.

    SB
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  • From shaolin on January 13, 2004
    As always..i like the new chapter...keep going..
    drop me a line if ya want...Shaolin
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  • From ANON - spaz141 on January 13, 2004
    Hee hee me? surprising? Its not that I think Hermione is a lost cause, more of asking a question that I expe no no answer.
    IMO she is so messed up, hopefully you are leading up to Harry making a move to reconcile - then she will have a chance to talk about what is going on her mind. I hope your muse finds her way back to you and I do enjoy your story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on January 13, 2004
    That's a side of Lavender I've never seen, especially since she's always portrayed as a brainless slut. I liked it. And I'm glad Harry feels lonely for his friends. Maybe he'll start making amends. Of course the Hermione and Draco bits I'm eager to read more of. Will the shit hit the fan when Harry founds out those two are lovers? Update soon_^ d_^
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  • From ANON - brittni on January 13, 2004
    i simply meant that someone was finally making hermione into something other than the "miss goody two shoes" that everyone else made her into. where did you come up with that tornado spell? that was cool! and why was harry feeling that buzzing in his scar?

    plz, up date, im hooked!!!!
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  • From ANON - JennyLynn on January 13, 2004
    Excellent, an update. Glad to see Ron finally getting some credit and some popularity. And dont let that pesky writer's block stop you any longer....

    Hope for another update soon!
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