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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck

From ANON - cdog21 on January 13, 2004
I just have a couple of things to say besides the obvious this
was once again a great chapter.

1. That was damn good writing for the quidditch match,
m me me want to play the game myself. I forgot i can't fly.
Oh well

2. For the love of God please i can't take it anymore. I swear
if those three don't get back together soon i'm gonna
a
a damn curse on myself. Man this is some real heartbreaking
stuff i'm crying just writing this . Well maybe not. Sorry for the
theatrics, but this is just so wrong for them to be like this. I don't
care how you do it get em drunk, use the damn curse on all of
em, or just make em play twister nobody can stay mad at
someone after a good game of twister. Whatever you do just
make em friends again capisce!
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From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 13, 2004
Yay! New Chapter!!!! Ron is such a hound, but aren't all teenage boys. I'm glad Harry is starting to come around and realize that maybe he should have given Hermione a chance to explain herself. I am sorry your suffering from writers block but it didn't seem like it to me! The whole time I was reading it, I wondered where Hermione was, I just don't think that she was in the library for some reason, lol! Well please update soon, I love reading this fic!
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From Deblovesdragon on January 20, 1920
I am so glad that you actually DIDN'T have sex in this chapter. I was downright refreshing that Lavender said No to Ron's advances. Wow! Someone wants to take it slow.

Maybe you want to have Bill talking to Harry and Ron in the next chapter. (For your writers block) I like Bill! He's yummy!

Cheers!
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From ANON - traydr vic on January 06, 2004
Thank you for responding to my review. You were a lot more gracious than I would have been, had our positions been reversed. I really don't hate your story, in fact I think your storytelling is very compelling. I just have a bit of a problem with some of the character portrayals. I can understand exploring ones sexuality, but it seems it can be done without gettin one's self exploited and degraded. And if Hermoine was just looking for some one to make her feel wanted and loved she could have had that in Harry early on.

Actually I liked this chap. I was getting a little tired of Harry feeling sorry for himself, and I like way way Ginny is making him see everything doesn't revolve around him. I keep hoping that he will be able to forgive Hermoine and they can find love in each other. ful ful thinking, eh? Anyway please going and I will try to keep a more open mind.
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From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 05, 2004
Glad I could help. I really liked this last chapter with the interaction between Ginny and Harry. Oh and don't worry that it takes you a week to update, true art takes time, some writers put out poor chapters because they rushed themselves. A good story is always worth the wai can can't wait to see what you have in store. Harry seems to be having some insecurity issues... and I suppose I can understand why.

Surprisingly sometimes Harry's character makes me mad. I know he's had all this horrible stuff happen to him, but it seems like he thinks he's the center of everything. Had Harry (in your fic) really considered Hermione or Ginny's situation he would have thought differently about them both. Some people write Harry as the calm, unbiased type, but I don't see that. Look at his feelings towards Cedric Diggory in GoF. I think you have captured y'sy's essence in your fic. The fact that he kind of has a duality of mind issue. It will be interesting to see how that turns out for him. Keep up the great work!
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From ANON - spaz141 on January 05, 2004
I'm happy that Harry had a chance to clear things up with Ginny. I suspect that things won't be so easy with Hermione. Is Hermione a lost cause? (no expecting an answer btw). I never thought of myself as neither though provoking nor insightful, thanks and you're welcome. Thanks.
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From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2004
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From ANON - cdog21 on January 04, 2004
When i meant pop quiz i meant a pop"QUIZ" hint hint wink wink with
a certain DADA teacher. And before i forget good chapter but it's
tearing me up to see Harry like this he really needs to get his friends back.
Catch my drift.
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From ANON - dragonlady sakura on January 04, 2004
Good. Missing friends is a god thing. Maybe this bunch will get their acts straight. But I'm sure not too soon. ^_^
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From ANON - traydr vic on January 04, 2004
OK - I usually don't review, but this is the first time I have come across AFF and I was about to give up on anything meaninigful when I found your fic. At first I found it interesting and compelling, even the bit where Draco put her under the imperious and she was excited about it. The
Dumbledore encounter left me sick to my stomach, but I kept reading anyway. I kind of expecsomesomething like that from the title fof the fic. And, of course I loved the episode with Harry as I am very much an H/Hr shipper and thought there was a chance for a relationship there, even with her request to be put under imperius. The episode with Draco made me realize she is total perverted, but I still convinced myself she could be redeemed. I firgured you were going for a Story of O kind of thing, although I hoped you would back off of that theme. But when she came on to BIll, who did not try to subjugate her, it becomes apparent that she is just a nymphomaniac who is completely motivated by lust and the desire to be humiliated. Nobody except Dumbledore did anything to turn her into a sex slave - even Draco. All he wanted to do was rape her. He wasd perfectly willing to modify her memory and leave it at that. At any rate this whole story is COMPLETELY out of character for Hermoine, not to mention Dumbledore. You have cored ted two of my favorite characters,and I hate it. I will read one more chapter just to see if there is any possiblity of recemption (which I doubt) but if not, I will read no more.
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From ANON - cdog21 on January 04, 2004
Actually you're very true they don't have to find out it would just be fun
to see the chaos it would create. And may i ask will there be a pop "quiz"
coming in the future possibly.
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From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 03, 2004
I love this fic! I am impressed that you used the imperious curse in the first place. So many authors seem to forget about that one and all torture seems to be done cru crucio. Well done. I liked the last chapter, it seems like the real Hermione has just woken up and she is on a warpath, lol! Well you set down some limitations with Draco using the imperious curse, but there are some things that could be touched upon. All pretty basic, I think in a way, the way you have writtermiormione in this fic anyways, is that she is a dominant character who secretly longs to be the submissive, away from all guilt of the action. It goes with out saying that what she needs is humility. That is what she gets from o, ao, a stripping of that bloody gryffindor pride. Remember that when you write it. The more degrading Draco makes it, the more it really means to her. Hope that helped some.
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From ANON - dwmerrell on January 03, 2004
rubberduck, Just finished Chapter 17 and I'm ready for more. In fact, I dropped a shortcut out on my desktop. I'll be checking for an update every day - - - not that I'm putting any pressure on you, of course. HA!!! I can't wait to see whateraceraction there will be between Dumbledore and Hermione in the future. What will the old headmaster say to her? How will she react to him? Is Hermione warped enough to make a trade with the old man? She does want to learn that little trick of the electrically charged fingertips, after all. Kind of leaves a little room for another encounter, huh? Hope it won't be long before the three musketeers get back together. I am wondering, though, just how you are going to go about that. Interesting . . . .
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From ANON - JennaSlytherin on January 03, 2004
Well....Teddy could find out and blackmail Draco.... what would Daddy think if Draco was doing a mudblood??? he he he.... I dunno... but I love these stories!!!!! You have to continue soon!!!!!
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From ANON - dragonlady sakura on January 02, 2004
" you weren't expecting that? wow. i saw it coming a mile away. lol." Very funny. I'm still laughing over your comment. I can tell you have a wicked sense of humor. Your writing obviously reflects that. And what can I say? This chapter was excellent...Like a good dirty novel. ^^

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