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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck
  • From ANON - Marc on January 02, 2005
    I liked the salvage of Hermione, but this epilogue sounds like a story of Hercule Poirot without the last pages !
    I have a plot , protagonists but no final.
    Still feel hungry for the end.
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  • From ANON - AriadneElda on January 02, 2005
    Oooooh, the story is over
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  • From ANON - trattel on January 02, 2005
    great story, do you have a web site for future updates,,,i am in love with your writing?
    also where can i find your other stories??

    hugs

    keri
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  • From ANON - Mercika on January 02, 2005
    End? Excuse me ... END?!? Okay, I'm going to be honest here with you (and please don't hate me for doing so).
    I was enjoying this fic very much, thought it was different but I'd give it a shot. Now that your finished this fic, I'm really disappointed.
    Why would you end it like that? The Bad guy hasn't lost, nor did she end up A. happy or B. with someone she truely loves.

    I was reading the review up above and decided they are right. Hermione is totally out of character. It's really sick and perverted, especially how she f*cked not only her best friend, her worst enemy but her headmaster? It's getting a little bit too unrealistic to me sorry.

    I strongly suggest you try and make a better ending. And I'm also VERY sorry if my opinion was too harsh, but I just wanted to be straight up with you.
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  • From ANON - Mercika on January 02, 2005
    End? Excuse me ... END?!?!? How can that be the freaking end? You can't leave it like that! Why didn't the bad guy loose? Why isn't she with anyone? This has been a great story so far ... why would you end it like that? Please consider adding a little bit to it or something.
    This has been a great story, but to be honest ... I'm not sure the ending was at all what I expected.
    ~Mercika
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  • From ANON - lacey weasley on January 02, 2005
    It would be evil to leave it there. Let Draco learn his lesson with or without Hermione. Let Hermione have some fun for once.
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  • From ANON - mac on January 01, 2005
    Not what I expected as an ending-but as they are only in their sixth year? I'll have to wait for the sequel :) Excellent writing!
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  • From ANON - betsy on January 01, 2005
    Love the story, just one question? Is Dumbledore EVER going to pay for his actions? I was just rereading chapter 4 and I'm still stunned he got away with what he did to Hermione. Eck!
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  • From ANON - nia on January 01, 2005
    Ooh, Harry's story is next? Looking forward to it.

    So Draco's still obsessed with Hermione and clearly out for vengeance. Hermione's in love with Harry. Is he going to hurt Hermione via Harry? Or is he going to keep outright stalking her?

    Great story.
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  • From ANON - tdk on January 01, 2005
    *Applauds* Utter masterpiece! I've been completely hooked from the start and its all your fault. I can't wait for Harry's story. And I'm just so eager to know how it'll end for all of them. Brilliant fic!!!!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tracer on January 01, 2005
    Good Story...
    Though, I have not yet read the very last chapter. I can't wait to see any Sequels that you may have coming...
    You did a wonderful job writing this story. When it comes to reading, It takes a lot to keep my attention. And it takes a heck of a lot more to keep my interest when I leave something for more than a few days (I left this story for about 5 days).
    Congratulations, this was an awsome story. And you have proven to be an awsome writer...


    Sincerely,

    Tracer
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  • From ANON - Sali on January 01, 2005
    I'm sorry to hear that this story is finishing- I really, really enjoyed it.
    Well done, and I'm looking foward to reading some of your other stories.
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  • From ANON - traydr vic on December 31, 2004
    I feel that I need to review since you took the trouble to finish
    this story. I would be lying if I said I was happy with the way
    you ended it, but that is because I am such an H/Hr shipper,
    and you left this open ended with Draco. You are a great
    story teller and especially good at the sex scenes. None
    the less I doubt I will read any of your future stories,
    because they don't follow my ship. Thank you, though,
    for a great story.
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  • From lckarlsson on December 31, 2004
    Hey there Rubberduck!

    No problem with the long review. I figured, since you wrote this looong story - which seems to have so much thought put into it - you deserved a long review.

    Well - I guess I joined in just as you were ending the story. It was a very nice ride, I tell you. I enjoyed it very much, and I actually liked the ending - except
    for two things:

    1. Doesn't Malfoy get to pay for his actions? As much as I adore the sexy little git - he shouldn't be getting away with this. He should be expelled - or sent to
    Azkaban for that matter!

    2. Dumbledore!!! He should get his ass kicked and be sent off to Azkaban as well!!

    Well, I'm glad that you don't like the Dumbledore chapter either. As I wrote in my long review, I can see how it fits in the story. But maybe you could make the
    chapter less graphic?? That would be nice! I think it would work better if you wrote it as a flashback, not actually describing graphically what happens, but
    describing the feelings Hermione has when thinking about what happened in Dumbledores office.

    If you do rewrite the Dumbledore chapter - or make any changes to the story, would you care to let me know??

    If you write a sequel, I'll sure be following it :o)

    I'm very curious about your Harry-story as well. I'm curious to see if I've figured him out, or if I was wrong :o)

    Happy New Year!
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  • From ANON - MICHELLE on December 31, 2004
    IS THIS THE END OF THE STORY? OR IS THERE A SEQUEL? I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS A GOOD STORY. I LIKE D/HR STORIES. ACTUALLY LOVE THEM.
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