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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck

From ANON - spaz141 on December 31, 2004
The End? I hope not. Though I am looking forward to reading Stud!Ron's story, and Harry's story too.

I am definitely NOT in the "fall in love with your rapist" camp - especially for this fic (no Hermione/Draco shipping from me); if she is not with Harry then how about a nice OC maybe a Ravenclaw for her to have a healthy relationship with in any sequel you may write. It feels like you "kissed" on her self discovery but that she's still realising. Was that your intention? Then you did marvelously.

Not sure what to make of your final note to me...I think it was good? I don't remember flaming, but I may have for that Dumbledore/Hermione bit. It still gives me the shivers thinking about it.

Good luck to you dude - I vaguely remember you have another story out there, I'll be keeping an eye out for more postings. Definitely keep me on your e-mail notice list (and consider joining RestrictedSection.org - just in case AFF gives up the ghost.)

Take care and Happy New Year.
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From ANON - Luci on December 27, 2004
Much appreciation from an avid reader.
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From OddDoll on December 25, 2004
Girl Power! Too Cool. Enjoyed this chapter very much.
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From ANON - mac on December 23, 2004
AHHH! I thought they might, just might end up together at some point happily ever after. AHHH! I look forward to seeing how you finish it.
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From ANON - AriadneElda on December 22, 2004
Hi Rubberduck, I hope you can forgive my absence in the last couple of months. Life has been a bit hectic but the good thing is I now get to read 2 new chapters in each story! And just so you know, I
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From lckarlsson on December 21, 2004
Hey again :o)

I just read through my review, (wow, I didn't realize I'd written that much), and I noticed that the thing about Dumbledore didn't come out sounding quite right.

Of course I don't think it's realistic for Dumbledore to be acting like this... what I meant to say was that I think it would be realistic for a pedofile to (seem to)
be like Dumbledore. lol

Wouldn't want to say anything bad about canon Dumbledore!
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From lckarlsson on December 21, 2004
Wow! Yesterday I read the first 18 chapters of your story - I just couldn't let it go! And now I've just finished chapter 25 - I have no idea how many
hours I've spent reading your story. This is truly amazing! Some of it is just so depressing and awful, and it just makes me so ANGRY! But I love it!

Except for the Dumbledore chapter - I'm sorry, I know you've heard this before, and I see how this fits in with the story as one of the reasons why
she gets as messed up as she does. But I just couldn't bring myself to read it. I just skimmed through it, I realize I don't even know how much she
told Dumbledore - I kinda freaked out when he asked her to sit in his lap, and then I started skimming through the chapter to calm myself down,
but no, that didn't calm me down one bit! I ended up going OH MY FUCKING GOD and no no no and wake up Hermione oh
bloody hell wake up Leonora! but sadly it was no dream, and I just couldn't go back to read whatever she told him (maybe I'll do it later on
for sake of you amazing story).

Ewww... I just hate Dumbledore in your story. Malfoy is just being - well - Malfoy. No surprise there. And I must congratulate you on keeping
him this much in character - completed with cowardly way of handling Harry's physical atack and all! It's very nicely done! But Dumbledore is kinda
like a true pedophile - he is all kind and friendly and somewhat childlike and he is someone she trusts! It just freaks me out!!!

But it's very realistic, and in a way I'm glad you didn't choose the easy solution: To let Snape do this to her, because that is what we (and
she) would expect of Snape, and it wouldn't hurt her (or us) as much as when it's Dumbledore.

I think you keep Snape very much in character as well, I don't think that canon Snape would actually take advantage of his students in that way.
Though, I would probably have read the chapter if it had been Snape :o) I really liked the little story you put in about him and Lily :o) Maybe
Snape wasn't quite as cruel as Malfoy, though (just a thought).

I really enjoyed the way you made Malfoy start having feelings for her! I would have liked to see it go a little further before she pushed him away,
but oh well - it's your story - and maybe she wouldn't have been able to push him if it had gone on much longer. I just really really enjoyed
seeing Malfoy being this kind after all the evil he's done! And at least he is being persistent with her - that's more than you can say about Harry!

I think Harry is being such a typical teenage boy! He's obviously into Hermione, but then he goes out with that Maia-girl - for comfort/whatever - and
he probably keeps seeing her, because it's easier than breaking up with her (wouldn't want to hurt the poor girl - someone finally loves me - and
Hermione even tells me to go to her), right? I could definitely see canon Harry acting like this, since he was so insecure with Cho. But I still hate him
for doing it!

I know that it hurt him really bad when Hermione asked him to do the Imperius curse on her - but I think he is the worlds biggest asshole for not
having a proper talk with her about it! I mean - she had just been attacked by Malfoy and he's goons - for crying out loud - it doesn't take that
much inteligence to figure out that this girl needs some help! And Harry is not stupid. It's like he's just feeling too sorry for himself to even think
that far.

I think the Pansy-part was really fun! I liked the fact that Malfoy shared Hermione with a girl and not with a boy - I don't think his breaking the rules
was that bad actually :o)

And you've made Blaise Zabini a girl!! This confused me a bit at first. Was she and Malfoy dating? And one more thing about that classroom scene - if
Blaise noticed something going on, then surely Harry would notice something, not? He didn't act like it, though, so I guess he didn't notice anything.

Congratulations on chapter 25! That one really rocked! Nice to see the girls kick some butt!

And one more thing - I don't think Hermione should end up with Harry! I think he's been too much of an asshole! I would love for him to find out all
that's happened and how much he's let her down, though. And that Dumbledore should get his ass kicked as well!!!

Is Malfoy going to be expelled now? Can't help but feel a little bit sorry for the poor little evil (sexy) bastard. If he hadn't actually raped her, I would have
loved for the two of them to end up together - it could have been a really nice twist if he had not been the one to initiate all this, but had somehow
gotten caught in the web, as he tried to humiliate her in his usual more or less harmless way, and if she had been participating willingly (to his
knowledge) all along.

Can't wait for your next chapter! I really love your story - even if it tears my heart out now and then. (I'll live)

Love Leonora.
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From ANON - Sali on December 21, 2004
Well, that was very good. I liked the fact that you got the other girls to come there to help her. Very impressive.

WHY THE HELL WON"T DRACO GET IT THAT HE DOESN"T BLOODY OWN HER!!! *anger*

Very good, a good story creates emotion- and I HATE that little toe-rag Draco!!!!!!
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From ANON - ddrinki4 on December 20, 2004
Good for Hermione! It's about time she got to have a little retaliation of her own. Malfoy's not so tough without dirty tricks to back him up. Still, you had me worried there for a second...okay, more than a second! Lol. Brilliant chapter.
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From ANON - Adrienne on December 20, 2004
Absolutely awesome! I couldn't stop reading it from chapter one - chapter 25!! I'm impatiently waiting for chapter 26 and for Harry and Hermione to *hopefully* get to together! @~~>~~
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From ANON - deedee on December 20, 2004
WOOHOO:) She was saved. Yay!! *starts to breathe normally now, after holding it in while reading this chapter*
I was starting to get worried during the first half of the chapter. I'm glad you had the girls help instead of her boys. Can you image how much more of a strain this would be on there delicate friendship? Plus, I don't think Harry and Ron wouldn't have let thoughs scum sucking assholes walk out of there without being severely maimed. But then again, who knows, maybe the girls did maim some of them:p
I was a bit confused when Draco helped her get away from (I think it was) Wes. Why did he help her all of a sudden? Did she feel like she wanted to kiss him, because he had her under Imperio or was it just her own feelings? Hhhmmm......very interesting. I know Draco is a real asshole here, but I really want them to end up together even if he's still a world class asshole. God, what's wrong with me?
Anyway great chapter, keep writing, and update very soon, please:)
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From TheScarlettLetter on December 20, 2004
That dream really gave my heart a pounding. Thank You for the courtesy of revealing that it was NOT real *chuckling*
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From TheScarlettLetter on December 20, 2004
Stunning. Constantly my mouth feel open and I would find myself forcibly shutting it tight. The wonderfully horrible realness of Harry and Ron's reaction to Hermione's exposure and even her confused state of begging was absolutely riveting and par for the course. Well done =)
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From TheScarlettLetter on December 20, 2004
The easy translation of each character is gorgeous. I had no idea I'd be both hurrying quickly to read the next sentence and forcing myself to slow down and digest the line before. The playfulness between Ron, Hermione & Harry is slightly dangerous and titilating. Onward to the next chapter =)
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From ANON - cdog21 on December 20, 2004
*CLAP* *CLAP* *CLAP* Aw to hell with it I give you a standing ovation ducky. You really had me
going there for a second, in fact after reading your viewer response I think you had a lot of people
going there, but on to better things. Now I realize that this isn't a happy fic what I meant by "happy"
is stuff like this last chapter. It wasn't really happy but the tone wasn't so freaking depressing. This
chapter, Harry and Hermione's (obviously), and the one where the girls are talking together are
examples of the "happy" stuff. It really wouldn't fit the definition of happiness, but it isn't all dark
and gloomy that's what I meant by adding more happy stuff. Hell even when Ron and Harry were fighting
was happier than the chapter that shall not be named (I think you know which one *cough*24*cough*),
anyway I really liked the chapter and you even got a good kick ass duel in the middle too so kudos to
you good sir and I hope maybe possibly could you get another chapter out before the year is up.
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