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Reviews for The Subjugation of Hermione Granger

By : rubberduck
  • From ANON - sarah on April 27, 2015
    That was the most horrible ending ever. I loved the scenes in the beginning all sexy and lustful. But damn this fanfic started going downhill rather fast

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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 14, 2007
    OK, I finished it...you rushed the end..this could have been longer...I'm torn..of course a woman wouldn't fall in love and be in a nice relationship with her rapist..but I'm a Hr/D shipper so I kinda wanted it to go that way anyways...nice story though. It's good to see a male writer who knows how to describe all of the confusing feelings that a submissive woman may feel when she subjects herself to humiliation, discipline, and gives away her power.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on September 14, 2007
    Second sexiest D/s story on the net. The dumbledore chapter was absolutely horrid but besides that I'm loving Chapter 13 in particular...Gargle it? LOL! I LOVE you for that : )
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  • From ANON - truecolor on December 24, 2005
    I just read your whole story, in one sitting. I thought it was written quite eloquently and normally I never review but I felt compelled by your writings intensity to do so.
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  • From ANON - Stolen name for now on November 28, 2005
    Wow..... usually, now-a-days, I get bored with some stories, and don't finish them. I got all caught up on this one. Good job. *wink* But, seriously, I truely hope you're going to put up what happens next! I'm still cheering for Harry and Hermione! And, that prat Draco, should get what's coming to him. But, whatever you write, I'll probably like! Sweetness. I'll be making sure and watch out if you have the 'sequal' up. Till then,
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  • From LuckeySteve on October 30, 2005
    not bad... not aomethoing I'd usually read, but I saw that quite a few people who's stroire s I read had reviwed and recommended this one.... I'm impressed...
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  • From ANON - Leonor on October 23, 2005
    Well one thing is certain dear writer, your story is very addicting and has had me earning to read more and more during the day, and to do nothing for hours and hours just reading. But i have had a great disapointment- I found yourself as a writer from the wonderfull story of 'The Lioneses son' and have read most of your stories and as i found this one i thought it to be as good as the others. I have to say that thi one had me realy confused. I dont agree with the wayy you wrote of Albus and Hermione but i persued reading, hoping the story would start to be as good as all the rest. I daresay i was wrong. I cried when Hermione was sad about Harry and whatever the other girl's name is relationship, but was shocked with her attitude and the way she told Malfoy to 'Fuck her'. It was a very unrealistic view of Hermione as a person and that was when i lost that initial erning to read. I did finish it, of course but with disapointment. I wished Hermione would tell Harry what she felt as he obviously does as well feel the same. i hope that your next story will not be this bad as your talent is obvious. You lost yourself, trying to make a fuck natural at that particular situation. Hermione in this stry is too damn perverted dear writer...
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  • From ANON - Emma on October 11, 2005
    hey i just read this story its really good please please make a sequel pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!
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  • From ANON - aklmskldmlk on July 19, 2005
    you need to SERIOUSLY write a sequel... NOW! i love your draco - he's a hard ass sex god, whilst being the sappy boy who jus twants to be loved. please write a sequel.
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  • From ANON - Patronsaintforsinners on July 14, 2005
    I really loved this story! It is probably the best I have read in a while. The plot was really good. Lots of little surprises and twists. You have a talent for writing. I would love to see your writing branch out from H.P.F.F! I have just one teeny slightly negative comment to add. I was a bit dissapointed with the ending of this story. I so wanted to see a twist ending here. Ah well. It is your story and a wonderful story it is. Thanks for writing. Hope to see more from you soon!
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  • From ANON - Professional Toilet Flusher on May 28, 2005
    Please make a sequel. I so totally loves it. PLEASE!!! I NEED A SEQUEL!!! Later! :)
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  • From ANON - catwalker on May 04, 2005
    i think a sequel is needed bc malfoy is totally in love (ok, obsessed) with her... he just can't handle her being touched by anyone else.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 27, 2005
    "He hated everyone equally, some were just more equal than others." Such a classic line. Love the shout out to the master, Wes Craven, BTW. Excellent story, except the Dumbledore thing as I mentioned earlier. Just so you know, taking on the whole Slytherin Quidditch team would indeed have been up my alley, I'll have to think on that more.
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 26, 2005
    Normally, I am EXTREMELY open minded, but that was even a little too squicky for me. Sorry, I tried to roll with it, just couldn't. Even if someone is very good at sex, sexual desire cannot be manufactured. If Hermione didn't feel desire to be with him, who cares if he got her off?
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  • From ANON - ddrinki4 on April 22, 2005
    Well, I'm still reading and still love this story. I'm just a lazy, trifling person who hardly reviews. Just want you to know I'm here.
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