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By : missM
  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 20, 2003
    Oh Yipee!!! He is waking up!
    Remember... my hope springs eternal. (Please a happy ending, of course, only if YOU want that :-)
    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - kate on November 20, 2003
    amazing, how much meaning silly things can hold -- like a hand-made ceramic mug, for example.

    nearly had to stop reading with that detail; teh ideal that someone given such a gift wouldn't innately understand who precious and personal it was ...

    I continue to hope that Severus and Hermione find one another in a healthy place; unfortunately for me, I'll read this story through to its end regardless because you write so well.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 20, 2003
    When I did the review for chapter 3, there was no chapter 4 showing..... what a wonderful surprise to find it when I was done!!! This was yet another FABULOUS chapter!!! So much more for Hermione to have to contend with now, not to mention that HE'S FINALLY AWAKE!!!! What a way to end this chapter, but I doubt that I'll be so lucky to find chapter 5 waiting for me when I finish this review,doindoing some wishful thinking here;-) Now I really can't wait for MORE!!! Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 20, 2003
    Chapter 3 is another GREAT one!!! I feel so bad for Hermione, she needs him back or out of her head, out of the garden!!!
    I also feel really bad for George, I really believe that he cares a lot for Hermione!!! I do like how you mixed humor, sadness, lust, frustration & caring so well here!!! Really curious to find out where Albus is taking her & why?!?!? Til your next update & hoping it will be soon, Deb >^..^
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 17, 2003
    Such a wonderful fic and I am so very glad you're continuing!
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  • From ANON - MaddyRiddle on November 17, 2003
    Wanted you to know that I'm reading... eif Iif I didn't review ;)
    I love the story and I would love if you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 17, 2003
    My heart is all tied up in knots. I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor George didn't know what he was getting into. Fred's proposal and Angelina's acceptance added a nice bit of levity. I do hope Severus eventually comes around for her. I think he needs her.
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  • From ArachneNonafel on November 14, 2003
    I am, as ever, with you for you write in such a unique manner....i love your story. Madness is a matter of perspective though.:)
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  • From ANON - Lynda on November 13, 2003
    I have really enjoyed following this story. I thought "The Garden" was truly wonderful in its powerful emotions. At first I thought I would have trouble reading it since it started out with Harmione so far in to madness. You captured it well I thought. As the story unfolded, it was far more clear what was happening and had me in tears at the end. I was so glad that I had never read it before you started the sequel. I would have been longing for more. I cant' wait for more of this story. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us all!
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  • From ANON - naughtypixie on November 12, 2003
    Hi!
    Great start, it's very interesting so far.. only one point of advice, try using the maes of the people you're talking about a bit more, it gets a little confusing sometimes who the "he" and "she"'s are... that'a bout it really. other than that, Great work!

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  • From ANON - kate on November 12, 2003
    AAAAACKK!! you've finished the last chapters haven't you? now i'm back to holding my breath, worrying that this will turn out badly for the couple who've suffered so much. unfortunately for me, your writing is too good for me to simply walk away from the story, so i'll go buy more tissues and brace myself for whatever is to come.

    and good on poppy. maybe with her support, hermione can do what she knows is right to bring severus back into consciousness!
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 12, 2003
    Beautiful. Sigh. I love the introspective view we get of Poppy. Anxiously waiting for more...
    -Rilla
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  • From ANON - shiv5468 on November 12, 2003
    I dont know why you worried about writing the sequel, it's still gripping and absorbing.
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  • From ANON - Pearle on November 12, 2003
    I thought The Garden was interesting and well written, but I think I am enjoying this story even more. I like your view of Snape and the changes in Hermione. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< on November 12, 2003
    Chapter 2 is quite intriguing!!! I almost have to feel sorry for George, he will not have his feelings returned. I am wondering if George's feelings for Hermione won't have some effect on the waking of Severus? Will his feelings of jelousy be something that breaks through into Severus' mind? Can't wait to find out!!! Deb >^..^
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