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By : tas
  • From ANON - The Blue Lady on December 18, 2003
    That snotty Draco, "I wonder how many she will have a chance to screw." How dare he! Narcissa needs to come and slap him.
    I just about cried when she wrote to Narcissa and will be guaranteed to "leak" when she actually meets Kat. Let the chocolate games begin!

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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  • From ANON - The Blue Lady on December 18, 2003
    Wow! Such fast updates! Thanks! Love tyou you mentioned about the Animagi forms. Can't wait to see which Professor is present if she does transform. :D Ginny should have been in Slytherin!

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on December 18, 2003
    Oh my... you are posting so much today that I can't keep track of it all. I am enjoying the sudden surge of writing on your part.

    Well, Draco is sure being a stupid prat. He just needs to get over it. It's not like she could enter a covent with her "cycles" and all. Hell, she was only with 2 men (and 1 woman) other than Draco in disguise for the last 10 years. Not exactly slut material.
    Nice how you have Kat in the story more. She seems like a sweet kid. Very Gryffindor. What quidditch position are you going to give her? Seeker perhaps?

    Keep writing. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - JennaSlytherin on December 17, 2003
    You were dead, Jackass!!!! GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!

    She should be pissed at him, not the other way around!

    I love Hermione's plan... he he... go Kat!! That girl rocks!!!
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  • From ANON - The Blue Lady on December 17, 2003
    I can't believe I just saw the latest chapters today! Thanks for updating so fast! Poor Draco's male ego is bruised because, his girlfriend has been sleeping with other guys for the last 10 years since he was "dead". I must say a tear fell when Kat was sorted into Gryff as she was staring at handsandsome Father. And Draco being so shock yet, realized what it means. Smart girl - she will get her parents together. Well, the secrets are even at this point! Draco was alive and Hermione and Draco have a daughter. They should both be mad at Dumbledore or Harry then each other.

    Waiting for the Tigers to "mate" in the forbidden forest. "Hermione transforms on Hogwarts ground and runs into the forest. Draco watches in amusement. He transforms and hunts her down. Herll ill is undenialbly strong - she must be in the middle of her cycle." I'm sure there will be a lot of sniffing, lapping, panting and growling. *laughing* No, beast to human. But, beast to beast when Hermione is in heat. The concept of people being Animagus in JKR books does bring up the fact of what happens when they mate. Especially if one is pregnant in either form? Maybe it is too dangerous to transform while pregnant and they just don't do it. Just a thought after they both could become the same species.

    Enjoying your story! Continue please :D

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~

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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on December 17, 2003
    Just started reading this and its great! I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Draco will come to his senses.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 17, 2003
    Oops - very first paragraph of Chapter 17 as well - this one is Her and Severus apparated - should be She (& S) apparated. I won't point out any more - I'm sure you can spot these once you look for them - just reread the sentences with a name and a pronoun using only the pronoun and I'm sure you'll be able to pick up the right one.
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on December 17, 2003
    Great story - little grammar problem in Chapter 16 - should be really easy to fix. In the first paragraph, Katrina and her . . . should be "she and Katrina." The pronoun is the subject of the clause and pronouns stay in nominative form and go before nouns in this situation. In the third to the last paragraph, the same thing - Hnd hnd his mother should be "He and his mother." It is a common mistake with compound subjectYou You would never write "Her took turns trying" or "Him had to make," but they get blurred when you put in the other noun and the "and." Anyway - it's my little pet peeve and the story really is a very good one.
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  • From ANON - Phantasia on December 13, 2003
    I really like reading your stories. Please update soon.
    Phantasia
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  • From ANON - JennaSlytherin on December 10, 2003
    I love this story!!!

    YAY!! You didn't kill Draco... (I knew you wouldn't of course...)

    You have to update soon.. I want to know how Draco reacts when he finds out he has a daughter!!!
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  • From ANON - raven on December 10, 2003
    I have enjoyed both your stories in this series. Thanks for not killing off Draco-I do adore arrogant bastards :) Hopefully when you allow Draco free reign to be angry, Hermione is given the same curtosy. After all, she has considered him dead for nearly a decade.
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  • From ANON - Anjel Rocker on December 05, 2003
    YOU KILLED DRACO OFF!!! You could you? *cries*

    Otherwises a good story...

    Anjel Rocker
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  • From ANON - The Blue Lady on November 29, 2003
    You write the best "erotic" sex scenes. I guess it is in the uctiuction" of your scenes that the "sex" is just the added bonus. Finally - Draco/Chase whoever has appeared for Hermione. Poor girl in heat is a sex maniac! Still waiting to see what Harry found in the bedroom and how did Draco get Black hair? And why do we have to wait til June? How can Hermione wait that long! OK - do a fast forward chapter to June! ;)

    ~~ The Blue Lady ~~
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  • From ANON - deblovesdragon on November 27, 2003
    Yippee! I just know that Chase is Draco. Huh, am I right? Well, at least I hope so. They both smell the same to Hermione.
    I really look forward to your next chapters.
    It would be cool if there was more interaction between Hermione and her daugher. Chapter 5 (was it chapter 5?) was sweet showing the mother/daughter
    relationship.
    Keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Cherry Lips on November 20, 2003
    Poor Hermione
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