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Reviews for Revelations

By : zephyrs1desire
  • From ANON - ~*Sarah*~ on December 14, 2003
    Well, I think this has possibilities. I really can't wait to see where this goes...Please hurry and update soon!
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  • From lilyadar on December 13, 2003
    *almost falls off her chair* GAH! What sex! hehe...reminds me sort of ...*stops talking* excuse me.. *slaps herself* Very yummy chapter - chapter one was. I haven't finished reading the next two chapters yet, but I will as soon as I can!

    ~l.a.~
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  • From ANON - Flick on December 08, 2003
    MORE MORE MORE PLZZZZZZ. Very interesting fic. I LUV IT!!! Update soooooon plz :)
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  • From ANON - Jaid on December 06, 2003
    *sigh* My internet browser refuses to let me get tur yur yahoo site!! That's what I get for letting my dad install that stupid contentfilter... Grr... Well? :-D Where's more? This stuff is so damn good!! Will there be a 3-way? Or will it be first Severus and then Fred?

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  • From on December 05, 2003
    Great Story. Keep Going it very good and I would love the read more. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on December 05, 2003
    Wow!
    Very intense.
    There is no way she is g to to end up going back Fred, Is she?
    I hope not, she and Sev make a very powerful couple!!
    Chat soon?
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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  • From ANON - sati on December 05, 2003
    No, keep writing! Maybe you have so many hits because people keep rereading, repelled and drawn to your words, fascinated by the rich darkness you have begun to portray. I eagerly await the next installment-- and perhaps some more explanations? Snape thinking about things before Hermione comes to him? As much as I love smut, I really hope you develop a storyline here- I hope you illustrate your characters fully. I'm intrigued by the darkFred, as for Hermione, I always knew she had it in her. She'll try everything once, then be amazed at what she wants to do again and again.
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  • From ANON - Andrian on December 05, 2003
    Very very interesting. i like the mystical unknown force used. Dark and mysterious..and erotic
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on December 05, 2003
    This is so different from anything that I have read before!!! There is so much more here than meets the eye, hiding beneath the surface of Hermione's being. I think this is going to prove to be quite interesting & look forward to seeing just how far you take it*
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  • From ANON - anna on December 05, 2003
    hi! it's a good story, but i think you should adept the prophecy. i hope this attempt will be good enough:

    Wenn Begehren in der Hexe brennt,
    dann wird das Feuer blauschwarz lodern,
    Wenn um Schmerz gefleht wird, achte sehr,
    immer das Gleichgewicht zu bewahren.
    Vergn
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  • From ANON - jenni on December 05, 2003
    I am enjoying Revelations very much... I tend to wait to review until the peice is finished, otherwise I feel that I am repeating myself with each review. In this type of smut, I don't believe we can judge if the characters are OOC. We don'ow eow enough about them... so play. Have fun. And for Goodness sakes, write!
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on November 29, 2003
    WOW!!! I like what you are doing here & the plot is sounding quite interesting. I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
    Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Rilla on November 29, 2003
    Wow, it looks like you have some rather delicious possibilities here! I can' t wait to see where you go with this!
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  • From ANON - ladydeathfaerie on November 29, 2003
    this is brilliant! at least, in my dirty, disgusting
    little mind.

    i just loved the entire thing!

    ~on knees, begging~ please, please, please!
    update soon!

    ~blessings~
    ldf
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  • From ANON - GrrArrg on November 25, 2003
    Hot damn woman!!
    All bow to queen Zephyr!!
    She's my beta you know, yes I am honoured!!
    Loved it, loved it, loved it!!
    Now let Sev have ago!!
    Kisses
    GrrArrg
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