Click Here!

Reviews for Mercy

By : elementaldeity
  • From ANON - qwertyuiop on June 22, 2005
    Oh my god! What happens!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 21, 2005
    Such a sad background. :( I felt sorry for her and yet she is a killer. You've created a rich history for your character, good work! Most of us writing fan fictions don't have to explain backgrounds because it's already been done by the original author. I'm impressed!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 20, 2005
    WoW! Another powerful chapter. Your writing was great, I could feel the transition and the pull of Mercy from one side to the other, her inner conflict that is. It's good that she has Snape looking out for her. It's almost like he's in love with her. Is this true? Looking forward to more....
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 14, 2005
    Poor Hermione! I wonder who else Mercy will kill and if she would knowingly cross that line. Good job! And thanks for correcting me on waste/waist. I had a good laugh about it!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 13, 2005
    I'm so happy you've updated so quickly! This was a great chapter. Virgin Harry was sweet and I love what Mercy did to Pansy - funny. No vibrators at Hogwarts!!!! Yikes! That's harsh. LOL But I suppose you could magic up some other way to get pleasure. Thanks for reviewing my story as well. I don't know what J.K. has planned but I've been frantically trying to get my theory out there before she blows it to bits with Book Six next month! But I'm probably going to get a little darker than she would and unfortunately she keeps them too virginal. Hope to see more of your story soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 12, 2005
    Another riviting chapter. I'm really enjoying your character, Mercy. But I'm a big fan of Vampire stories as well! Please continue soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Petalsoft on June 08, 2005
    wow! I absolutely love your story. I just read the whole thing and it's got me captivated. I can't wait for more.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - \'Manda on June 07, 2005
    Truly amazing, gripping. You managed to keep everything sensual and seductive, but intresting. The plot's captivating. I've only kept myself reding for more than two chapters once before this, but this story tops that one by a long shot. I think I'm enjoying this just as much, if not more, than Harry Potter. Well, I really hope to read more of what you write, and can't wait for a new chapter to be written. Please keep up the amazing work!
    ~Amanda
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Lettie on April 22, 2005
    Your story is one of my favourites on the internet!!!!! I
    Report Review

  • From ANON - shmeepness on May 20, 2004
    I would never have guessed that I'd like your story, but surprisingly I do. Though I would probably call it a Mary Sue, it's one of the best Mary Sues I've read in a long time. Mercy is a likeable, more-flawed-than-your-average-Mary-Sue character with an interesting life. Your Voldemort is not nearly as much of a pansy as he seems to be in most fics that include him, and Draco is interestand and multi-dimensional. Though I would recommend you check over your ies ies just a bit more for awkwardness of writing (you have a few run-on sentences and commas where they aren't necessary), in general I think this is a nice, well-written fic. Keep up the good work!
    Report Review

  • From shellylynnc on May 19, 2004
    This last chapter was really hot. This has been a really great story, exciting and juicy ans lots of great smut. It might not be a bad idea thought to get a beta for somethe the spelling, gramar and cannon stuff. The characters are all really good and it's an interesting plot. I was sure mercy was going to do the dark lord there for a minute. Keep it up.Lol.;
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Carr on May 13, 2004
    I would tell you how great this is and how i cant wait for more but since you've already told me that you dont want my reviews, screw you!

    Love Ya!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Cecily on May 12, 2004
    omfg i love that story!!!If it isn't to much to ask do u think you can email me and tell me when the new chapters are up i would LOVE to read them!!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - ME on May 06, 2004
    Its about time you started posting again!! Great story line. I love it!! Keep up the good work. I dont want to go through Mercy withdrawl again. Love Ya!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Slytherin Secret on February 17, 2004
    Great Chapter and definatly worth the wait. I'm curious as to what's going to happen when they get to Voldemort but I understand why you may not update soon so take your time...I'll check everyday though. Until next time, Slytherin Secret.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!