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Reviews for Mercy

By : elementaldeity
  • From ANON - jabberwock on February 15, 2004
    It gets more and more interesting. Personally, I'm hoping to see more of Hermione, Harry, and Ron. I think a friendship between Mercy and Hermione could be interesting.
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  • From ANON - Slytherin Secret on January 12, 2004
    I like it in First person as it allows insight into Mercy's mind, but I also think it would work equally well in third, but that's probably because I prefer third person stories; I know that's not exceptionally helpful to you, sorry. Great Chapter though. I can't wait for the next one so please update soon. Until the next Chapter, Slytherin Secret :o)
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  • From ANON - Slytherin Secret on January 03, 2004
    This story is great, please update soon. Lucius is so evil though-I'm curious as to what Mercy is going to do to stop him. And what about her past?! Please give us some more info on that.
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  • From ANON - Carr on December 22, 2003
    Absolutely loved this chapter. Kill Lucius! I never much liked the bastard anyway!!
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  • From ANON - Dixia on December 18, 2003
    Am I still reading??? What a question, Hell yeah!! You really have something very very good here, Mercedes is a wonde cha character and you have made me truly wonder about her story, I also enjoy the way you have been buliding up the plot; even though the story goes alone quite slowly, you have put these little hints there that make me come back every time I notice that you have updated..Truly a good story.

    Luv,
    Dixia
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  • From ANON - Ventrue66 on December 14, 2003
    A bit of a Disturbed fan? I like your story so far. I am very interested to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Ventrue66 on November 26, 2003
    I like your story. I hope that you intend to make it a lengthy one. It has alot of promise as one of the really good, adventurous stories that a person can really get into.
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  • From ANON - mistressmalfoy on November 23, 2003
    good story keep going
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  • From ANON - Carr on November 23, 2003
    I absolutely love the story line. I think that we can expect more than a few twists and turns in this, huh? The grammar seems a little rough in a few spots but besides that the only thing i can say is that i want more!! I absolutely loved when Mercy "dismissednsy.nsy. I had a frien who did that kind of thin all the time.
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  • From ANON - Dixia on November 20, 2003
    Not a bad start, not bad at all!!! Keep up writing,
    Dixia
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