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Reviews for Parvus Obitus

By : darnedchild
  • From ANON - brittni on February 22, 2004
    OMG, i lov this so much!!

    "Oh, Harry, do shut up, I'm not going to look and neither are you."

    i love that part, i laughed right out loud when i read it! ^_^ and severus was really caring about it all! plz plz plz, keep going!!!

    brittni
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  • From ANON - aprilgrey on February 20, 2004
    Oh, this is very sweet and very funny. It's a wonderful story! Thank you.
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  • From ANON - otherside on February 20, 2004
    oh my *fans face* voldemort on a cold day indeed! your story was lemon-fresh as well as funny at times, can't wait for the epiloge!
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  • From ANON - Julie on February 20, 2004
    I love it! Dumbledore won't look and they have no idea what exactally is going on! The heat between the 2 was amazing! Hehe. I can't wait for the epilogue!!!
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  • From arcessita on February 20, 2004
    You worry about the quality of your lemons? Whatever for? They're fantastic! Yum.
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  • From ANON - ancientgirl on February 20, 2004
    I just saw you updated this. I was getting worried near the end, but I didn't need to be. I loved the last couple of lines though. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Jenny on February 20, 2004
    Coo - hot lemons (sounds like a cure for a cold, not something ... well ... anyway), and chuckle-worthy snippets. Excellent stuff!

    A nice little epilogue is definitely called for.

    I do like your description of her using his voice as a "sex aid", it's a rather clever way of looking at it. Neat. And the boys/men arisarison is brant.ant. Lovely story!
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  • From ANON - Estrilda on February 20, 2004
    Wow - the chapter was amazing and then the end was hilario I c I can just see them gathered around the fireplace trying to get an update.
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  • From ANON - FriendlyQuark on February 20, 2004
    Have I mentioned how much I love this story. I like the little awkwardnesses you wrote in, the realistic fears and the difficulty of getting out of clothes. This was both sweet and sexy. Well done.
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  • From ANON - SJL on February 20, 2004

    That was the funniest sex scenaio I've ever read, and I mean that in the best possible way. The humour made the sex more... grounded somehow, as the situation called for a realease of tension on more than one level, and it was all very appealing. It made me smile a lot.

    And Albus not looking was priceless. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - kimberly on February 20, 2004
    Gods! You are so wonderful. I think my heart is beating faster than Hermione's must have been. I have adored this story and was elated to see an update. I feel sorry to see it coming to an end, but you have been a wonderful storyteller, and it has been a fullfilling read. Thank you so much.
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  • From ANON - Deb >^..^< . on February 20, 2004
    Part 5... I find it hard to believe that this is your 1st time writing lemons because this is ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!!! I LOVE the way that you drew it out, the uncertainty & then.... let's just say it is BEYOND HOT!!! I will most definately be looking forward to part 6!!! Til then, Deb >^..^
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on February 15, 2004
    This is very well done. I'm a recent SS/HG fan. Please do continue, and by the way, you left a very good cliffhanger.
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  • From ANON - Zee on February 10, 2004
    Settle?

    Settle?

    Geez - I would love to 'settle'...

    OKay - down to the nitty gritty!!!! We want SMUT!!!!
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  • From ANON - shinyquarter on January 26, 2004
    mmmmmmmmm, that last part gave me shivers. I can't wait for the rest! pleasepleaseplease don't take too long!
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